The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 17 [32]

[Michael92]

I liked how you began this chapter ^^ The Rikudou being unaffected by Kabuto’s control was a good move on your part as Hashirama was also able to break away from Orochimaru. The Rikudou’s character has seen minor attention in the manga as you know and thus not much for the readers to get a feel of but I think you did a great job depicting him ^^ I’m glad that the Rikudou doesn’t physically look like Naruto and its only the bijuu-mode that compares them. Okay so Kabuto is simply more adept with this jutsu than Orochimaru thus even he can control the Rikudou. I also liked what you did with the Rikudou having him cast that specific spell I really liked that jutsu you chose for the Rikudou-it seemed very fitting ^^ The ending of this chapter has thus far bypassed any other chapter in terms of craziness! lol As if the Rikudou Sennin wasn’t enough-he also summons 9 monstrous creatures!!! I loved that you chose a killer whale as I’ve always been fascinated with them and love anything of the sea Naruto did in fact summon something in the end but being able to defeat 9 summonings let alone the Rikudou Sennin is still baffling. You closed with the biggest cliffhanger-epic job!

Yeah, I guess I was a bit inspired by that, but at the same time, I found it realistic for him to be able to oppose Kabuto at first.

That's good to hear... As I really picture Naruto as a much older character, with similarities to Jiraiya and Hashirama, Tobirama and Minato. I guess I've borrowed something from several Canon characters to paste together the Sage of Six Paths.

Well actually, I've described how he looks in the next chapter, so he basically have some similarities to Naruto. You'll just have to wait and see what I wrote there

Yeah, the very next chapters will be the sickest and most crazy chapters I'll ever write, haha =p

Glad you liked it bro ^_^

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Yeah, I guess I was a bit inspired by that, but at the same time, I found it realistic for him to be able to oppose Kabuto at first.

That's good to hear... As I really picture Naruto as a much older character, with similarities to Jiraiya and Hashirama, Tobirama and Minato. I guess I've borrowed something from several Canon characters to paste together the Sage of Six Paths.

Well actually, I've described how he looks in the next chapter, so he basically have some similarities to Naruto. You'll just have to wait and see what I wrote there

Yeah, the very next chapters will be the sickest and most crazy chapters I'll ever write, haha =p

Glad you liked it bro ^_^

You know you’re right, now that you mention it Naruto is older and I’ve forgotten about it at times but I think for an adult you portrayed him well. Well, now that I think about it, the Rikudou should have similarities to both Naruto/Sasuke seeing as the Uzumaki/Uchiha are his descendants so it would actually be logical ^^ I thought the following chapters will be loony =D Most climaxes are and I’m sure you’ll bring it together brilliantly!

 

[Michael92]

You know you’re right, now that you mention it Naruto is older and I’ve forgotten about it at times but I think for an adult you portrayed him well. Well, now that I think about it, the Rikudou should have similarities to both Naruto/Sasuke seeing as the Uzumaki/Uchiha are his descendants so it would actually be logical ^^ I thought the following chapters will be loony =D Most climaxes are and I’m sure you’ll bring it together brilliantly!

Hehe yeah... About that, I'll either release a new chapter today or tomorrow

 

[Flash]

Another short chapter
So I finished 3 chapters today haha xD

A great chapter, I must say. Sage was so awesome. His dialogues, character and personality was so amazing!!!
The way kabuto sh*tted his pants, trying to control the sage was awesome.

His summonings were Titans?
I thought it was the giant old toad in myobukuzan xD

Totally epic chapter...the jutsu used was just out of the world

Really liked it

 

[+Kyon+]

Short one once again

So6p's entry is perfect. KAbuto failed to control him at starting (sage didnt perform any jutsu to break it out),showing that how powerful sage is. So it was nice part. Naruto is as usual in his tone during talk with sage .

And as i was expecting, kabuto get control at right time

Sage's Timeless-Space Transfer Jutsu is just awesome(i wish i could see this in anime or manga ). Sea under blue sky,reminds tobi vs konan.

Now the thing i never expect in Naruto universe " Titans of the Underworld ". This one is really shocking. Titans are from greek mythology i think. Plus they are 9. But is an amazing feel to read/see them in and against naruto.

One thing i would like to say that you 100% succeed in showing Sage's attitude/character. Cool as ice and strong as hell =D. His summons,speed etc show how much powerful he was/is. I'm Still wondering how kabuto is controlling :erm:

Overall nice chapter and perfect entry of Sage. Great work,keep it up

 

[Michael92]

Another short chapter
So I finished 3 chapters today haha xD

A great chapter, I must say. Sage was so awesome. His dialogues, character and personality was so amazing!!!
The way kabuto sh*tted his pants, trying to control the sage was awesome.

His summonings were Titans?
I thought it was the giant old toad in myobukuzan xD

Totally epic chapter...the jutsu used was just out of the world

Really liked it

That's great my friend!! The real action start next chapter

Phew!... Good to know! I was trying to make him my own character, but also by mixing in personalities from characters like Naruto, Jiraiya, Hashirama, etc.

You'll get the full story on his Summonings as we go

Good to know!! A new chapter (20) will be out tomorrow, and I really think you'll enjoy that one, as well as the two other released

Short one once again

So6p's entry is perfect. KAbuto failed to control him at starting (sage didnt perform any jutsu to break it out),showing that how powerful sage is. So it was nice part. Naruto is as usual in his tone during talk with sage .

And as i was expecting, kabuto get control at right time

Sage's Timeless-Space Transfer Jutsu is just awesome(i wish i could see this in anime or manga ). Sea under blue sky,reminds tobi vs konan.

Now the thing i never expect in Naruto universe " Titans of the Underworld ". This one is really shocking. Titans are from greek mythology i think. Plus they are 9. But is an amazing feel to read/see them in and against naruto.

One thing i would like to say that you 100% succeed in showing Sage's attitude/character. Cool as ice and strong as hell =D. His summons,speed etc show how much powerful he was/is. I'm Still wondering how kabuto is controlling :erm:

Overall nice chapter and perfect entry of Sage. Great work,keep it up

Yeah I know, but that will change, starting with the very next one!

Indeed, I thought I would have to give the Sage something insane, and I also thought that I had to portrait a real "Summons battle," which I haven't done yet in my FF, and this was the right way to go.

Cool as ice, strong as hell?? I like that xD

A lot in store for you guys in the next few chapters, please go ahead and read on (if you haven't already), haha ^_^

 

[Kuramas Dad]

Great chapter!
It was a good length as well, not to short and not to long! :Omg:

 

[Michael92]

Great chapter!
It was a good length as well, not to short and not to long! :Omg:

Thanks mate, your views means a lot ^_^

 

[MarBellarke]

BLOUSE & SKIRT!!!!

When I saw that you had video there, I played the score while reading from the summoning part again and it was EPIC!!!
Dude... EPIC!

If only I had more experience and resources, I would've tried to animate this.

Another chapter bites the dust.

 

[Michael92]

BLOUSE & SKIRT!!!!

When I saw that you had video there, I played the score while reading from the summoning part again and it was EPIC!!!
Dude... EPIC!

If only I had more experience and resources, I would've tried to animate this.

Another chapter bites the dust.

Hehe, it's a new thing I started, starting from this chapter and onwards, plus with the new chapters, I have some music videos on the top as well, not just the bottom.

And you just missed the poll mate, it closed yesterday xD What would you have voted if you could may I ask??

Haha, that would have been great ^_^

Keep going bro, don't stop now! Can't wait to hear what you have to say on the latest ones

 

[MarBellarke]

Hehe, it's a new thing I started, starting from this chapter and onwards, plus with the new chapters, I have some music videos on the top as well, not just the bottom.

And you just missed the poll mate, it closed yesterday xD What would you have voted if you could may I ask??

Haha, that would have been great ^_^

Keep going bro, don't stop now! Can't wait to hear what you have to say on the latest ones

I would've voted 'Two years, since 2011'.
Yes, I've been following for a quite a while, from 'The Legendary Sage of Konoha'.

I am still going. xd

 

[Michael92]

I would've voted 'Two years, since 2011'.
Yes, I've been following for a quite a while, from 'The Legendary Sage of Konoha'.

I am still going. xd

Hehe, that was what I thought

And I would not have it otherwise

 

[darkstar94]

oh man !! the chapter was so short that it seemed as if the chapter finished even before it was started....!!
but it was one hell of a chapter ,really liked it....!!