[Predictions] Naruto Manga 633 - As the Smoke Settles [By Amarusboobs]

[amarusboobs]

I will be doing a prediction for Manga Chapter 633

I hope you enjoy

Spoiler

*Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura are standing back to back, a large smokescreen in the background*

*Smokescreen settles, the Juubi is shown creating more juubi clones*

Naruto: (smiles) "Haha, this is fun, finally having everyone back together!"

Sakura: "There is no need for fun, this is war.."

Sasuke Thinking: “Whoa, she toughened up.." (smirks)

Shikamaru: "Haha, don’t forget about us!"

*Shikamaru forms a Ram seal*

Shikamaru: Shadow Possession Jutsu.

*His Jutsu Stops many Juubi clones in their tracks*

*Ino forms her special hand seal*

Ino: Mind Disturbance Dance Performance Technique

*Many juubi clones start to attack each other, many are killed *

Choji: Body Expansion Technique, Human Bullet Tank

*Choji storms through the battle field, flattening and finishing off the remaining clones*

Naruto: "Everyone's working together!"

Juubi: ROOOOAAAR

*The Juubi seems to begin to overflow with juubi clones*

Shikamaru, with shock on his face: What they hell, impossible, there are hundreds!

*Naruto in Kurama Chakra Mode, forms a Big Ball Rasengan, then uses his chakra arms to Absorb the clones into the rasengan*

*Sakura Charges at the Juubi clones, she jumps into the air, she smashes down on a crowd of juubi clones*

Sasuke: “.....”

Sasuke thinking to himself: Damn Sakura…when did you get so strong…

*Sasuke starts up his rakiri and slashes through many clones*

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*Flashback*

Hashirama, with a big smile on his face: Such a fine generation of shinobi!

Tobirama: Hashirama, I believe Tsunade is in trouble

Hashirama: What do you mean!?

Tobirama: She seems to be with 4 others, their life force seems to be fading..

Orochimaru: I believe I might owe her and Konohagakure
something… I will help her, Lets go Karin. Also you too, Suigetsu. Jugo, stay here with Sasuke.

Hiruzen: I will trust you this time, but please Orochimaru, no tricks…

Hashirama, with a slight smile on his face: I also will put my trust in you, I wish to see my granddaughter, and how she has grown, please save her any the others

Orochimaru, Smirks: I promise, no tricks, this time…

*Orochimaru, Karin, and Suigetsu split from the group and head to the kages*

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*The Scene is switched to the Kamui Realm, Kakashi and Obito suddenly stop fighting*

Obito: I really, sincerely, do not want to kill you. Join me please…

Kakashi: This realm is not the same as reality…

Obito: I am not the same Obito…

Kakashi: Come on Obito, you can still stop this…

Kakashi: I live, everyday, with the pain of not having my friends with me. Can I at least have you back…

*Kakashi has a flashback of Rin and Obito, when they were young*

Obito: I will become God of this world!! I will be come the absolute… All will live under me. If you join me we can rule together!

Kakashi: Do you really think Madara will let you become a god of this world. You are just a pawn in his plan.He will kill you before he allows that…

Obito: You know nothing Kakashi..

Kakashi: He wants to rule this world, he would no simply give up the world to you…

Obito goes into a fit of rage: YOU KNOW NOTHING

The End, I hope you enjoyed this, give me feedback below.

 

[sky4life]

Nice!!!
But hey... I know nothing:T_T:

 

[migui87294]

small and a bit boring. but keep tring

 

[beuciphalus]

nice attmpt bro....
enjoyed reading it...

 

[Klad]

Cool , but Oro isn;t in battlefield .

 

[Shura]

Not bad, but where did Oro come from? _@:

 

[Kristinauzumaki]

great prediction. but it was two chapters I think =D

 

[Transcendence]

Very good! But where did Oro come from? Wouldn't that be a flashback?

 

[Cursed Prince]

I liked it... But I doubt theyll show a Kakashi vs. Obito scene

 

[amarusboobs]

Very good! But where did Oro come from? Wouldn't that be a flashback?

This is true, I asumed that he was there, silly me

 

[KCMNaruto]

Very good and entertaining prediction, my friend

I will give you advices for you future predictions to be better:

- focus on more details while you are creating action scene(I mean smoke screen, dust, changes in surrondings, describe exactly where characters and the most important how background looks like). It contain main point to allow reader to make picture/visualize each scene you wrote in their minds so they can see it as manga panels =D

- add some tense, suspense element so reader will keep reading you prediction while being interested what will happen next(death of some character, struggling to fight against someone, emotional words, drama moments, increase effects of surrondings or which are happeining around battlefield which increase reader's interest and highlight importance of battle). This main point is about keeping readers interested and expierience what is happining in your prediction.

- insert more special effects of battle, which make actions feeling more natural then forced so readers will be more willing to read further and follows action.

- focus more and try to extend one part whenever it is action, dialog or just showing postions of character and thoughts, interactions of characters then focusing on more then one part, it may feel not forced but inserting many plots in different places and different characters feel like a little forced and too much. Besides Kishi always focus more on on thing then going into more.

I hope this will help you =D

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What I really like in your prediciton=D:

- great characterization and quite well pace of plot
- easy to follow actions
- great style of formatting your prediciton
- logical and good examples of events which really can happen in real manga

I would give you more, but I can't find anything more at now, so maybe I will add later

Anyway very good prediction and try to improve on it even further, keep it up my friend

Don't dissapoint me and prove that you are bettter then me , I am waiting for your improvements =D

My rate of your prediciton: 4/5(very good but you still have some space to improve )

 

[amarusboobs]

Very good and entertaining prediction, my friend

I will give you advices for you future predictions to be better:

- focus on more details while you are creating action scene(I mean smoke screen, dust, changes in surrondings, describe exactly where characters and the most important how background looks like). It contain main point to allow reader to make picture/visualize each scene you wrote in their minds so they can see it as manga panels =D

- add some tense, suspense element so reader will keep reading you prediction while being interested what will happen next(death of some character, struggling to fight against someone, emotional words, drama moments, increase effects of surrondings or which are happeining around battlefield which increase reader's interest and highlight importance of battle). This main point is about keeping readers interested and expierience what is happining in your prediction.

- insert more special effects of battle, which make actions feeling more natural then forced so readers will be more willing to read further and follows action.

- focus more and try to extend one part whenever it is action, dialog or just showing postions of character and thoughts, interactions of characters then focusing on more then one part, it may feel not forced but inserting many plots in different places and different characters feel like a little forced and too much. Besides Kishi always focus more on on thing then going into more.

I hope this will help you =D

====================================================================

What I really like in your prediciton=D:

- great characterization and quite well pace of plot
- easy to follow actions
- great style of formatting your prediciton
- logical and good examples of events which really can happen in real manga

I would give you more, but I can't find anything more at now, so maybe I will add later

Anyway very good prediction and try to improve on it even further, keep it up my friend

Don't dissapoint me and prove that you are bettter then me , I am waiting for your improvements =D

My rate of your prediciton: 4/5(very good but you still have some space to improve )

Thanks KCM :hooray:, PM so we can help each other on some stuff. I'm still improving so I'll do my besst, thanks for the advice.

 

[FaHaD 5212]

Great Prediction

 

[-ahhimane-]

You should use a different format for flashbacks stuff otherwise it confuses the readers to understand the present and past situation.
It was a nice read btw. 4/5. keep it up. =D

 

[Byron123]

It was quite good. 4/5

 

[God of the akatsuki]

i love it bro good stuff

 

[SIR HERDERP PRESIDERP SDO]

Nice prediction

 

[Strawberry]

good job amarus

 

[KGB Kakuzu]

Pretty solid, but a couple of editorial remarks.

1. Orochimaru is not on the battlefield, and is most likely heading to Tsunade.
2. As such, The conversation between the Senju Bros doesn't fit....however would fit if it was a flashback.
3. Where everyone works together, Team Kurenai is completely missing. Since Kishi went with the Rookie 9 theme they should have a presence.
4. To finish the above, most likely if they show fighting with the R9, then Sai, Tenten, and Lee will probably show up as opposed to others dissapearing.


Anyways you did a nice prediction 3/5 from me.


However, I expect the next chapter to start with the Kage. Sakura's last words were like she was speaking to Tsunade, and so we will likely see what Tsunade's situation is....as a type of dramatic irony (where we know Tsunade's dying out...Sakura doesn't."

 

[Ōkami]

That was a good read.