[Mystery] My Apartment: Chapter 2

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My Apartment chapter 2
"Small Secret Box"


Characters:
Polly Levit
=a young 18 year old girl who lives alone after her parents go overseas. She has a long blonde hair. She likes mysteries and solving mysteries.


Stuart Wood
=a young 20 year old boy who lives alone next door.


Edward Strike
=A young 21 year old guy who lived in the room of Polly before.He always wear a black suit.


Anonymous
=the person who is following Edward and Polly.



Owner/Pal
=The owner of the restaurant.



Notice:

**- sound/Polly's action (I didn't include other chara's action so that it will not be confusing. maybe some)

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Chapter 2


"Are you ms. Polly Levit??" the guy who approach me said in a low tone.
huh?? how do you know my name??
"Y-Ye-Yes. Wha-What do you need??" I responsed while shaking.
He didn't say any words, he just sighed, from what he sighed-- it means "thanks goodness".
"We need to talk, please. I'm not a bad guy" he explained.
"Ta-talk?? A-ab-about wha-what??" I said,
"About the apartment you stayed" he said,
Ha?? about the apartment I stayed? What does it mean?
"We need to go somewhere else" he said,
"Not here--" he stopped, "Let's go!" he continued with a high tone.


Then we start walking, I stayed behind him. We entered a forest.
I'm afraid. My whole body is still shaking. What are we doing here?? in a forest?? No waay!
"Umm. whe-where are we going?? I asked.
He stopped and slowly turned around. *heart beat fast* my heart beat is so fast again
and I can't stop shaking.He slowly walk towards me. I closed my eyes and then He whispered
"We'll just arrive there so don't worry I won't hurt you I'm just avoiding someone."
*open eyes* Ha?? avoiding someone?? What? Someone is following us?? I slowly tur-- *shocked*
"Stop!" he said. He walked towards me and held my shoulder.
"Your so slow, babe.Let's walk now." He said in a high tone,
*shocked* wha-what did you say??
"don't turn around. Someone is following us."
he whispered, "I will explained later." he continued.


30 minutes has pass but we still didn't lost the anonymous person. So we decided to take a train.
We are now in the flatform and he still following us, I don't know what's going on but maybe I just
Follow what this guy?? and Yeah of course I don't this guy with me. I'm such an idiot to follow a guy
who I didn't even know *sigh*. And then at last the train arrived *choo choo* We step in the train.
When the signal closed is on. We immediately go out again *closed door* and of course we lose the anonymous.
*heavy breath* "thanks goodness. he's gone." he said while having a heavy breath.
He then have a deep breath and said "Now let's go.","umm ok" I response.


After that we arrived in the place, It's a restaurant.
I see. "Ohh. Welcome Ed!Who's with you? ha?" The guy in the counter said.
What?? did he means me?? Ed?? so he's name is Ed?ha? "Stop it!Pal" Ed said.
"Wait up upstair, don't worry the owner is my friend he's a good one *wink and smile*" Ed said.
"Oh, ok!" I said. *walk upstair* So he can smile too, Thank goodness *touch her chest*
my heart beat is back to normal. No one is around here. Maybe I could sit everywhere. *chuckle*


*sit* Woaah. It's so nice here. *creak* *turned and stand up*
"Oh! Did I just scared you?" He asked.
"Ah no, no." I said.
*sit down* "You brought coffee. huh." I said.
"You don't like coffee?" he asked.
"Ah, it's ok, it's just tha--"I explained. I don't know what do answer.
He put the coffee down, "It's just that the payment" I continued, and he pass it to me.
"Didn't I tell you that guy is my friend, so don't worry *smile*" he responsed.
He put the hat down. He's handsome *get the coffee and have sip* ah. what am I thinking??
"My name is Edward" he said, Eh?, "Edward Strike" he continued.
"Edward Strike??" I asked.

I think I heard that name? but where?
"Yeah, the one who lived before in your room." he responsed.
"So, your that guy?? I thought your dead, the landlord said that and I also thought your an old man bu--" I said,
"That's rude, ahahaha,Of course not" he said while laughing.
"I'm still young, I'm still 21 and I'm not dead, haha" he continued.
"Sorry for being rude" I said.
"Hahaha, it's all right" Edward said.
"Btw, why did you disappeared?" I asked.
"I went to my hometown and asked the Landlord to keep it secret because someone is after my life" He responsed.
"After your life?" I asked again.
"Yeah, that's why I don't have time to clean my apartment because when I noticed that, someone is already following me." he said.
"Is it the guy who followed us?"I questioned.
"Maybe, I don't know." He said.


"Then how did you asked the landlord?" I asked.
"By sending him an email, through text."He said.
"So what do you want from me??" I asked.
"About inside your apartment." He answered,
"What's inside it?" I asked again.
"It's abou-- When you transfered the aparment clean or not??" he asked.
"Umm yes it's clean but there is still boxes, the landlord said "do not throw or open it, I just put it in the empty room" and of course I didn't touch it afterall 1 room is enough for 1 person right? I responsed.
"Thank goodness" he said, he sighed again, huh.
"So what's about it?"I asked.

"In the box,there is a small secret box that have secret inside." he said.
"So please don't touch it and just keep it because'someone is after it because now I'm not yet to sure if I'm safe or not" He said.
"So they are after your life and the b--" *thud* *noise*
"What's that noise?? I utter *stand up*
We slowly peek from stairs.
"Where is he?!? *grab the tshirt*"
"Oh know the owner" he murmur.
what?? what is going on?
"I-I do-don't know" the owner said.
"You Liar *ready to slap*" *creak*
"What's that??"
Oh no. the stairs is too old.
"Let's hide" He utter.


-To be continued-

What will happen to Edward and Polly now?? And Who is the guy who attacked the restaurant?


Check in the next chapter. :win:



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I soo loved it. I'm cursing myself to have missed the first chapter
 

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It's quite lovely <3
 

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"I'm still young, I'm still 21 and I'm not dead, lol" he continued.
Did he really say "lol" ? xD
It's good :)
 

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Hahahah. Thank you :win: btw, where did you get that emoticons?? I'm curious xd

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OT: Ima read Chapter 1 this seems interesting :hyper:
 

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From here :


OT: Ima read Chapter 1 this seems interesting :hyper:

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