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Uh, sorry? What's going on here? You're creating an original character? Or. . Do people who post on the thread do it?
 
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Wrong section.
and you can ask for an Bio at a Bio Shop the only one i can think of is Pain...'s Bio Shop.
 

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OfficialRikudouSennin said:
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Okay! Then I'll. . Make a bio for a character? Hope I don't screw it up. .

Name: Fumetsuhono (Undying Flame) Rasutinguoiru (Lasting Oil)
Age: 38
***: Male
Date of Birth: October 8th
Affiliation: (Ex) Amegakure (Ex) Akatsuki
Occupation: Ninja Bounty Hunter/Mercenary
Shinobi Rank: A Rank
Nature Type(s): Fire release, Water release
Signature Jutsu: Katon Gōkakyū no Jutsu
Weapon(s): Usually wields kunai and shuriken.

Appearance: Fumetsuhono is five feet and nine inches tall. He shaggy brown hair, usually left alone to be wild. Fumetsuhono has ebony colored eyes, too. having grown up in Amegakure, Fumetsuhono has sickly looking pale skin. Usually kept under a long black robe. A single red strand crosses the center of the robe. To most, the robe wouldn't seem too odd. But it's a sign of belonging to the Akatsuki (Uniform prior to Yahiko's death). Dark colored loose fitting pants complete his outfit.

Background: Fumetsuhono grew up during the Second Great Shinobi War. Like many others, he was orphaned at a young age. Though, what differs from him and the other orphans is that shinobi from Amegakure had found him when they were returning from battle.

Taking pity on the child, one of the Amekagure shinobi took Fumetsuhono back to the nearest barracks where he spent a few months. Slowly picking up ninjutsu from the man who saved him. Fumetsuhono eventually enlisted in Hanzo's shinobi army after the war ended. There, he was taught further from his newest teacher.

His sensei was Mizutamari Makikomu (Engulfing Puddle). She (Mizutamari Makikomu) was one of the first to realize the incredible potential
Fumetsuhono had. When his elemental chakra control was good enough, Fumetsuhono seemed to spit fire balls out that had tremendous power. The average fireball taking on a blue-ish color, from the heat of the attack.

Fumetsuhono also became competent with water based attacks, though not nearly as good as he is with fire based ones. Eventually, after seeing not only his sensei but many other shinobi in Hanzo's army abuse those who couldn't fend for themselves, Fumetsuhono defected from Amekagure.

Though he defected, he did not leave. He soon found home with a group of peace makers, as he called them. They called themselves Akatsuki and they were led by a man named Yahiko. Yahiko took Fumetsuhono in and quickly used him against the many rogue shinobi that plagued the country side. A duty nearly all new recruits had.

As time passed, Fumetsuhono was trusted enough to meet and oppose the corrupt shinobi of Amegakure. He had several battles with old comrades and his former sensei, though he couldn't bring himself to kill any of them. As the months went by, Hanzo had approached Yahiko and offered peace. It was soon known to be a trap. Yahiko was killed and Nagato took over.

Within the course of a single year, nearly all of the original members were deceased. Konan, Nagato, Fumetsuhono, a few rogue ninja they had accepted were all that was left. At this, Fumetsuhono suggested to both Konan and Nagato that they surrender or flee the nation. Neither of them were willing to leave and forget Yahiko's dream of saving the country, though.

Both Nagato and Konan offered him a chance to leave if he truly felt that there was no chance at victory. Fumetsuhono took this and left to Kusagakure (The land, not the village itself). Fumetsuhono then began to start a somewhat successful career as a bounty hunter. Usually hunting low level ninja and bandits.

Though, he was hired by a thug named Gato once or twice to deal with issues in his business.

He remains a Mercenary of sorts to this day, usually spending a good deal of his time in The land of Water, mainly for the large population of rogue shinobi that can be found there.


Done! I think. . I hope that helps ya' out!
 
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