Old Ventalus (Feburary) vs New Ventalus (May)

[Ventalus]

Old vs Today's Ventalus :

Old (February):

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New (May):

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His anatomy may not look the best. Could've been a error photo that I took, since he look better on paper. Still, I am working on it. I don't wanna make Ventalus way to close to marvel style where they are all big chested and so much muscular xD

This is only the beginning. 3 months of practice = this resault. Now imagen 3 years, what will be the resaults then o_o, then again. What will be the resaults after 30 years? lol. Better never stop drawing

As well it's not a boring front view ^^ Also... Yes it is the same character that I planned long time ago. Meh. But I did really change a lot of his looking pass the times. I am still not happy with his design...



After all, I Still got 4 rivals that I need to catch up with XD

Tools used : HB Pencil, eraser, shading pencil(paper to smooth out the HB so it gets differents kind of tones of shadings.)

 

[Supermacaquecool]

Aha, Overall I see you have improved your shading a lot. Seems legit, keep it up.

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

Your improvement is good bro, yeh I hope I get to see your work in three years time

 

[Hoshi]

Your improvement is just brilliant, always doing the best you can... I like your styles big brother
Well done, as always

 

[Ventalus]

Aha, Overall I see you have improved your shading a lot. Seems legit, keep it up.

Yeah! I love shading and should defiantly make sure that I master it! ^^

Your improvement is good bro, yeh I hope I get to see your work in three years time

I hope so as well. Since I want you to be one of the persons that reads my manga about Ventalus in the future (Maybe 7 - 10 years in the future, that is at least what I have planned so far.)

So. If Narutobase would close down one day before that... Then we gotta make sure that we add each others on a online chat or any other programs so we can still be in contact!

Your improvement is just brilliant, always doing the best you can... I like your styles big brother
Well done, as always

Thank you Sister ^_^ You keep up doing your best as well! Our mangas and arts will be a evolution of manga history XD

 

[asparticus]

hmm, is he wearing clothes?
if not, regard this

next thing you might wanna work on is clothing folds. because with the hood you have some folds but theres no folds on the bottom

 

[Ventalus]

hmm, is he wearing clothes?
if not, regard this

next thing you might wanna work on is clothing folds. because with the hood you have some folds but theres no folds on the bottom

Yeah forgot that I deleted the mention about that. Anyway yes. I did skip it becuase I am still unsure how his robe over his steel armor is gonna be. I think I got an idea how it will look like. Still I will try to do that when I am drawing full body Ventalus.

 

[Frozenstein]

you improved quite a bit.

 

[- Їиfєяио -]

great improvement

keep up the good work ​

 

[asparticus]

Yeah forgot that I deleted the mention about that. Anyway yes. I did skip it becuase I am still unsure how his robe over his steel armor is gonna be. I think I got an idea how it will look like. Still I will try to do that when I am drawing full body Ventalus.

look @ references

 

[Zorø]

i really like it man =D