[Horror] Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 3

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The Hide Out !
This is the Full chapter 3 (No Parts)

Charcter Appearance's .....
[Sally]
Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
[Ageria]
Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
[Valton]
Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
[Reed]
Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.

-"Vampires !?.... You mean they existed" said sally. "Yes indeed, and they still seem to exist" said Valton in an confident voice. "We should hurry befo....!"-Valton. "Before What ?" Said a Voice from behind... Valton looks at the direction where the voice came from... "REED !" said Valton... "Its been a long time Hasn't it" said Reed. Valton Takes out his Weapon and Shoots him out of the hospital walls and picks up Sally and teleports someplace far from the hospital. Reed gets up from with in a pile of broken rocks and smirks...mean while people in the hospital are freaking out. "Where are we and who was that guy !?" asked Sally..."There is no time to explain...we won't be safe here for long....... He is Coming !" Said Valton in an angered voice.

"You didn't think for an second that a puny little attack like that would kill me ?" Said Reed teleporting to the location of Valton and Sally. "Lets skip all the little chatting...what do you want ?" asked Valton to Reed. "That is just like you ... getting to the point quick..... well if you want to know... i want that Girl !" said Reed. 'Forget it" said Valton teleporting behing Reed and is about to shoot him untill Reed teleports at a distance fro Valton...Volton raises his hand and a sword summons into his hand at the same moment Reed pulls out his sword and instantly clash causing a big explosion Sally barely able to see their movements...Continuously Clashing as the sky lightened and rain had started..... they landed on a cliff and Reed about to slash Valton before Valton pulls out his weapon and aims for his head and takes the shot the bullet pierce's through his head and causing him to fall down from the cliff ...while falling down smirking...

Valton teleports back to Sally ..."He is dead ?" asked Sally."No..But we have to escape while we can, lucky for us it will take him time to regenerate". Valton teleports from on place to another.... and they land in a mountain and there is a tunnel there, Valton and Sally keep walking into the tunnel untill a steel gate appears "Ahhh my Hide out" said Valton.. Valton opens the gate and an scientific lab appears in front of them..."Finally ...Home!" said Valton.

Mean while in the the battlefield lied Reed looking in the sky his wound had fully healed ..Looking at the Sky thinking about his early fight in all of a sudden a voice is heard "You lost ?" a man in a black cloak with an barely visible face due to lightning...
"Well you could say that ...its not like only i am the one who has improved since then" said Reed
The person in the black cloak :
"Huh..to think that one of my own creation would turn up against me..... I will make you pay for this.....VALTON"


Until Next Chapter ....

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Wow nice job bro.....:win:
 

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Nice one bro. This is getting quite interesting.:win: Good job .
 

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I like where this is heading....
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You didn't waste anytime getting right to the action, I like that! This story is progressing nicely. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
 

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You didn't waste anytime getting right to the action, I like that! This story is progressing nicely. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

Next chapter might be Late.... although i can't be sure.

Any way thank you so much :flowers
 

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The Hide Out !
This is the Full chapter 3 (No Parts)

Charcter Appearance's .....
[Sally]
Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
[Ageria]
Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
[Valton]
Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
[Reed]
Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.

-"Vampires !?.... You mean they existed" said sally. "Yes indeed, and they still seem to exist" said Valton in an confident voice. "We should hurry befo....!"-Valton. "Before What ?" Said a Voice from behind... Valton looks at the direction where the voice came from... "REED !" said Valton... "Its been a long time Hasn't it" said Reed. Valton Takes out his Weapon and Shoots him out of the hospital walls and picks up Sally and teleports someplace far from the hospital. Reed gets up from with in a pile of broken rocks and smirks...mean while people in the hospital are freaking out. "Where are we and who was that guy !?" asked Sally..."There is no time to explain...we won't be safe here for long....... He is Coming !" Said Valton in an angered voice.

"You didn't think for an second that a puny little attack like that would kill me ?" Said Reed teleporting to the location of Valton and Sally. "Lets skip all the little chatting...what do you want ?" asked Valton to Reed. "That is just like you ... getting to the point quick..... well if you want to know... i want that Girl !" said Reed. 'Forget it" said Valton teleporting behing Reed and is about to shoot him untill Reed teleports at a distance fro Valton...Volton raises his hand and a sword summons into his hand at the same moment Reed pulls out his sword and instantly clash causing a big explosion Sally barely able to see their movements...Continuously Clashing as the sky lightened and rain had started..... they landed on a cliff and Reed about to slash Valton before Valton pulls out his weapon and aims for his head and takes the shot the bullet pierce's through his head and causing him to fall down from the cliff ...while falling down smirking...

Valton teleports back to Sally ..."He is dead ?" asked Sally."No..But we have to escape while we can, lucky for us it will take him time to regenerate". Valton teleports from on place to another.... and they land in a mountain and there is a tunnel there, Valton and Sally keep walking into the tunnel untill a steel gate appears "Ahhh my Hide out" said Valton.. Valton opens the gate and an scientific lab appears in front of them..."Finally ...Home!" said Valton.

Mean while in the the battlefield lied Reed looking in the sky his wound had fully healed ..Looking at the Sky thinking about his early fight in all of a sudden a voice is heard "You lost ?" a man in a black cloak with an barely visible face due to lightning...
"Well you could say that ...its not like only i am the one who has improved since then" said Reed
The person in the black cloak :
"Huh..to think that one of my own creation would turn up against me..... I will make you pay for this.....VALTON"


Until Next Chapter ....

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And I forgot to enter this months FanFic Contest :NO: maybe next month
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I am going to be delaying the next chapter till may 16th .... have some other major problems to deal with :p
 

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i'm sorry late checking your fanfic
it's getting interesting =D did valton the one who slays all the Kill-Mach created by organization?
he is the hero right?
anyway..good joob, keep it up man
 

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How could a fourteen year old like ur self make such a nice fanfic :p
 

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i'm sorry late checking your fanfic
it's getting interesting =D did valton the one who slays all the Kill-Mach created by organization?
he is the hero right?
anyway..good joob, keep it up man

Lets keep the hidden things to me :p
 

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I thought for a second when that Reed character was first introduced, he would be “good” but ended up being the opposite lol And this must be who Valton was after. Reed’s attempt to attain Sally would imply that she is important and I wonder in what way. So the ending of this chapter has somewhat revealed the creator of these vampires but all of the organization’s members were killed. Thus, either this cloaked figure is the only surviving member or a Jail? Definitely your little FF is becoming more interesting with every release ^^
 

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I thought for a second when that Reed character was first introduced, he would be “good” but ended up being the opposite lol And this must be who Valton was after. Reed’s attempt to attain Sally would imply that she is important and I wonder in what way. So the ending of this chapter has somewhat revealed the creator of these vampires but all of the organization’s members were killed. Thus, either this cloaked figure is the only surviving member or a Jail? Definitely your little FF is becoming more interesting with every release ^^
Well i really wanna answer that:p thanks overall :flowers
 
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