Feel free to correct mistakes. ^_^ #First Biography

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"No one... Needs me?"

"No one would if was gone.
No one feels that they need me.
The world wouldn't change if I was gone."


Basic Information

Name: Yomi Takanashi
Nickname: Dead master/ Rolling girl.
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Clan:
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Uzumaki Clan

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Looks:
She has green eyes and wavy dark hair and wears a (school) uniform. Her beauty is comparable to an adult's.
Often people commented on how tall Yomi is; but Yomi says she has a "complex" about being tall.
In the anime series, she now wears eyeglasses.

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Personality:
Yomi is a gentle, good-natured girl who speaks politely and calmly; she is very mature for her age.
Yomi's personality is somewhat different in that while she is still calm, reserved, and polite, she is also extremely aloof to the point where she is unwilling to make friends.
However, she is prone to having very dark feelings of loneliness and jealousy; she tends to keep these to herself.
Yomi has 'another self' which is known as her evil self.

She seems to enjoy volleyball.

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Village Info

Village of Birth:
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Kumogakure.
Village of Alliance:
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Amegakure.


Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin.
Specialty: -
Elements:
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Water: Needs training.
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Wind: Needs training.


Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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Background Info

History:
About 19 years ago a little girl named Yomi was born in Kumogakure with special mystical green eyes,
which over the years allowed her to see through and know the exact chakra from opponent(’s jutsus).
Though she stated that she was never originally any good at using ninjutsu, Yomi apparently became famous for her strong-willed spirit, and her unique style of ninjutsu.
She was send out to a lot of missions abroad and succeed them every-time.
At the age of twelve after returning to her village with her team from a B-ranked mission that her father has been killed by some ninja claiming that he was working under the serves of Hanzō. Once Yomi heard this, she knew his mother wouldn't be save anymore without her dads protection. She rushes home to find her mother whom was killed too.
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This caused her to lose control of herself and began to rage. Before anyone tried stop her, Yomi managed to calm down and to search for this guy called Hanzō who sent someone to kill her parents. About 2 years later while still searching for Hanzō, meanwhile she moved to Amegakure where she possibly can find this man. She currently lives there, where she trained and grew stronger.

-The story-

Rain fell above from the dark clouds of Amegakure.
Yomi stand up from sitting down on the ground.


It's finally time.. My revenge shall taste good soon.

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-To be continued-

Other
Her primary weapon is her "Dead Scythe"[1].
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Battles

Won: Many.
Lost: Even.
 
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shycatgirl00

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I'm pretty sure this is in the wrong place.....
 

Insidious Smile

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Great Bio . You can inprove your Biography by placing Center tags .
 

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To be your first bio, it's seriously really good. Great work! *_*
 

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Nice for a first! And Im not sure if you can be in the uzumaki clan...
 

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Wrong place though. You should ask a mod to move it to biographies section.
 

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It's really well bio

Even though i don't like uzumaki clan
 

Sachiko

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she looks retarded.
Uzumaki clan have red hair!
Oh.. Sorry, but I really want her in the Uzumaki Clan.
I'm pretty sure this is in the wrong place.....
Really? I thought this was the right section.
Great Bio . You can inprove your Biography by placing Center tags .
Thank you, sir. I'll do it right away!
naruto is blonde because of minato, maybe she has another parent who is brunette
Exactly! :p
To be your first bio, it's seriously really good. Great work! *_*
Wow, thank you very much!
Nice for a first! And Im not sure if you can be in the uzumaki clan...
Thanks! Oh. Wells we will see.
Wrong place though. You should ask a mod to move it to biographies section.
I'm sorry, I thought I was in the right section.
It's really well bio

Even though i don't like uzumaki clan
Thank you!

Sorry.
 

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she looks retarded.
Uzumaki clan have red hair!
You look Homosexual, did it feel good to hear that?

And she can have any hair she wants :|
Nice for a first! And Im not sure if you can be in the uzumaki clan...
Uzumaki clan aren't restricted.
Wrong place though. You should ask a mod to move it to biographies section.
She was asking for opinions.

Btw, remove the four elements you want training in... It isn't necessary to list all of them, just one.

Other than that, it's perfect other than the lack of Weapons. Lol, you can state in the "Other" section if she has a weapon, you can have as many weapons as you want.
 

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You look Homosexual, did it feel good to hear that?

And she can have any hair she wants :|

Uzumaki clan aren't restricted.

She was asking for opinions.

Btw, remove the four elements you want training in... It isn't necessary to list all of them, just one.

Other than that, it's perfect other than the lack of Weapons. Lol, you can state in the "Other" section if she has a weapon, you can have as many weapons as you want.
Thank you! I will edit it right away. Thanks again! :)
 

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Just a question, what anime is this character from?
 

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"No one... Needs me?"

"No one would if was gone.
No one feels that they need me.
The world wouldn't change if I was gone."


Basic Information

Name: Yomi Takanashi
Nickname: Dead master/ Rolling girl.
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Clan:
You must be registered for see images
Uzumaki Clan

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Looks:
She has green eyes and wavy dark hair and wears a (school) uniform. Her beauty is comparable to an adult's.
Often people commented on how tall Yomi is; but Yomi says she has a "complex" about being tall.
In the anime series, she now wears eyeglasses.

You must be registered for see images


Personality:
Yomi is a gentle, good-natured girl who speaks politely and calmly; she is very mature for her age.
Yomi's personality is somewhat different in that while she is still calm, reserved, and polite, she is also extremely aloof to the point where she is unwilling to make friends.
However, she is prone to having very dark feelings of loneliness and jealousy; she tends to keep these to herself.
Yomi has 'another self' which is known as her evil self.

She seems to enjoy volleyball.

You must be registered for see images


Village Info

Village of Birth:
You must be registered for see images
Kumogakure.
Village of Alliance:
You must be registered for see images
Amegakure.


Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin.
Specialty: -
Elements:
You must be registered for see images
Water: Needs training.
You must be registered for see images
Wind: Needs training.


Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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Background Info

History:
About 19 years ago a little girl named Yomi was born in Kumogakure with special mystical green eyes,
which over the years allowed her to see through and know the exact chakra from opponent(’s jutsus).
Though she stated that she was never originally any good at using ninjutsu, Yomi apparently became famous for her strong-willed spirit, and her unique style of ninjutsu.
She was send out to a lot of missions abroad and succeed them every-time.
At the age of twelve after returning to her village with her team from a B-ranked mission that her father has been killed by some ninja claiming that he was working under the serves of Hanzō. Once Yomi heard this, she knew his mother wouldn't be save anymore without her dads protection. She rushes home to find her mother whom was killed too.
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This caused her to lose control of herself and began to rage. Before anyone tried stop her, Yomi managed to calm down and to search for this guy called Hanzō who sent someone to kill her parents. About 2 years later while still searching for Hanzō, meanwhile she moved to Amegakure where she possibly can find this man. She currently lives there, where she trained and grew stronger.

-The story-

Rain fell above from the dark clouds of Amegakure.
Yomi stand up from sitting down on the ground.


It's finally time.. My revenge shall taste good soon.

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-To be continued-

Other
Her primary weapon is her "Dead Scythe"[1].
[1]
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You must be registered for see images

Picture: See Bio.

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Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won: Many.
Lost: Even.


Wrong section, and you would have won 0 and lost 0, it's your first bio.
 

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Good bio especially for a first time, But yes wrong section, oh and you can be an Uzumaki and no they do not all need red hair, i would have thought Naruto would be a large enough amount of proof of that alone to the people saying otherwise.
 
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