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631 - Hope dies last
The death itself cam across battlefield !, What exactly Tobirama's words mean ?!
Everyone: ?!
Hashirama(confused face while waving his arms up and down): Whoa... whoa. Brother what do you mean by death itself cam across battlefield, it is not funny you know
Hiruzen(serious with sadness on face): We have to hurry, they may be in danger !
Minato(worried): *Naruto...*
Sasuke: *Naruto, stay alive we are comming !*
[Tobirama slowly stand up as everyone look at him with confusion, worry and sadness.]
Tobirama(turns first to Hashirama): I am pretty serious brothers, I couldn't sense so many deaths at battlefield even in previous shinobi world, amount of corpses is...(pause) terryfing. Besides this powerfull vibration comming from ground, there is even stronger then Kyuubi was emiting.
Hashirama(worried): *That mean Madara could summon it...*
Tobirama(turn his head back and look forward): Hiruzen is right, we have to go before it will be too late
Hashirama: but brother...
Tobirama: Silence !
Hashirama(feel depressed as he walks away a little): I wanted to enjoy our stay in Konoha here, you are so mean
[Everyone except Hashirama and Tobirama is sweatdropping now. Silence between them is interrupted by Tobirama cause everyone to snap out from their thoughts and pull their attention to Tobirama.]
Tobirama(serious): I will teleport us to the nearest water source, that how my Space Time Ninjutsu called Hirashin works(glance at them)
Minato(smiles): There is no need for that Tobirama-sama. I can teleport us whenever my marks are, my marks are working as anchors. One who is fighting at battlefield is my son, and I incorporated my mark in his seal when I sealed Kyuubi Yang half into him.
Minato(smirks): Minato, Minato Namikaze and thank you for your praise Tobirama-sama
Tobirama(suprised): Namikaze ?!, My son Senjuu Tarima married Namikaze Antasia as far I remember. Unfortunetly I couldn't be with them when their chould could be born(sad). It is high probable that you could be my grandson. Do you remeber your Mother name or father ?
Minato(sad): Unfortunetly no..., I didn't get even chance to know my parents...
Hiruzen: Minato was brought to Konoha as war orphan, so I don't know anything else. However Namikaze Antasia was taken as hostage so your son came to resuce her, and that was last time I heard about him. He probably died.
Tobirama(dissapointed then smiles): I see but it looks like you raised great shinobi Hiruzen. I am proud of you
Hiruzen: Thank you for your praise Tobirama-sama(tear drop on ground)
Orochimaru(step forward while annoyed): Can we cut your chit chat and finally go *I began to regret that I gave them free will...*
Minato(snap out of his thougths): That right. Hashirama-sama please come closer to us. Everyone put your hand on my shoulder. While I will search for anchors which respond to my Hirashin.
[Minato squat down as he put his one finger of right hand at ground, Hashirama come closer as he put his hand on Minato's shoulder, everyone else put heir hands on Minato's shoulder as well. Minato closes his eyes as he is shown very focused and calm.]
[Minato slowly open his eyes as last stream of chakra hit him cause him to widden his eyes as he is turned back to rest. Minato stand up fast as he turns around to face them. Everyone has confused face as Minato face expression become serious.]
Minato(calm): I pinpointed where Madara along with uknown man, as well as Naruto(smiles). There is indeed so many deaths it is terrible.
Tobirama(smiles): *Not only mastered my Hirashin, but sensor too. Adding his calm behaviour. He would really fit to be my grandson *
Hiruzen(enthusiastic and nervous): Then's for what we are waiting ?!, Minato teleport us them.
Tobirama(calm): *His face expression suddenly turned serious, what it could be ?*
Hashirama(concerend): What wrong is 4th your face suddenly become pale ?
Minato(turns around to them): Hashirama-sama, I found out Tsunade chakra too
Hashirama(cheering): That excellent
Tobirama(cold): Silence brother !That interrupt The 4th
Hashirama: !!, Take me there right away, I beg you 4th
Minato(worried and serious): Don't worry I will do it, but it is hard as her chakra is dissapearing almost.
[Minato squat down as he touch ground with his finger of right hand, while he become serious and little nervous as he closes his eyes. He looks like very focused while behind his back Taka and rest kage are shown, with different face expressions. Hashirama looks very worried and angry, Tobirama try to keep his calmness but small signs of anger appear on his face. Hiruzen is worried and sad, Orochimaru is shown thinking, Sasuke showns signs of sadness while Juugo and Karin look at them with blank faces.]
[Elsewhere Onoki is shown panting and sweating very badly as he is shown with his arms extended forward with hands turned outside. His hands are directed at where was top of hill but now only top of hill is not there anymore. Dust and smoke is floating from destroyed part of hill which is now few inches shorter then before. Tsunade is laying down at ground as she slowly dying, for moment she smiles as she looks at Onoki's direction who is just twenty meters away from her right side.]
Onoki(panting and sweating): It looks like Madara really understimated as..., if it was only original this war would be half way closer to be ended in our favour...
Tsunade(smiles as her breath become less and less regular): Amazing job... Onoki. You showed them where is their place.
Onoki(worried): I hope rest of kages are alive still... *Raikage couldn't die so easily *(smirks)
Onoki(turns around to Tsunade laying down on ground with sad face): *I wish I could save you princess, at least I and rest of kages could prove that her saving our lives was good choice*
Onoki(began to walk forward in Tsunade direction): Tsunade... Do you have any last wishes...
Tsunade(thinking): I ?!
Tsunade, Onoki: ?!
Tsunade(try to shout instead spilling blood as her vision become blurry): Onoki !
Onoki(coughs spilling blood at ground): GHE!! ARGH !!!
Onoki(lower his head in pain spot end's of root sticking up from his chest)
(Before Onoki and Tsunde could say something, Madara's wood clone emerges in front of Onoki. Onoki spot wood clone emerging from ground as he looks with anger at clone, while Tsunde just watches on.)
Onoki: You!!!, but (caugh) how ?! (spill blood )
Madara's clone(smirks): It was really close Onoki, you destroyed two other clone but I jump down from cliff in last second before you shot off your Participle style structure and reduced other two clones along with top of cliff to dust(turns around to look at cliff then turns his head to face Onoki.)
Tsunade(whisper): Bastard...
Madara's clone(cold tone): You lowered your guard again Onoki and thinking that we understimated you forgot to think that you may overate yourself and understimate your enemy. It is double edged sword, you know Onoki.(evil smirks)
Onoki(try to extend his both hands in wood's clone direction): I may made mistake, but it isn't too late to correct it !
Madara's clone(suprised as he forms handseal): ?!
(Before Onoki could extend his both hands forward, roots sticking up from his chest began to stretch enveloping around both Onooki hands.)
Onoki:Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique ?!
Onoki(grimace of pain on face): GARGH !!! (cough spilling blood) ARGH!!! *Damn...*
Madara's clone(pull his both hands apart as he lower them): I am afraid you wouldn't get chance to correct your mistake ,Onooki. (smirking maliciously)
[Onooki falls on his knees with roots still sticking up from his chest, then he spill even more blood as blood is flowing down from his mouth as Onoki vision slowly become blurry.]
Onoki: *Kitsuchi son I hope you will be good Tsuchikage, looks like Kurotsuchi my grandaughter was right... I should step down from being Tsuchikage when I had chance, maybe I could lead happy elderly life...*
Onoki(snap out from his thoughts): No, There is nothing more better than die at battlefield while protecting your people and your wishes, opinions !
Madara's clone(shakes his head then turns serious): what a pitty... you lost your mind so badly Onoki that you are talking to yourself some nonsense(sigh) Anyway I will have some mercy for you so I will make your death short.
Tsunade,Onooki:?!
[Madara's clone activates his EMS in both eyes, as he blood begin to flowing down fron his right EMS's eye across his cheek then dropping down on ground, make noice of water dropping. Tsunade and Onoki look in fear and powerlesness at Madara's clone.]
Madara's clone: You fought well Onoki, you proved that you are great warrior(smirks). You deserves to die from this technique... Fare well Onoki...
[Small breeze came across of them, moving grey hair of Onoki at side, as his eyes become wider and wider with each second passed. Everything seems to slow down, he could feel each tear blood dropping on ground, his hear become to beat even faster as his all body was shivering from pressure gathere in Madara's clone eye. ]
Madara's clone(widen his right EMS'eye so nerves are visible):Amaterasu !
Onoki(scream in pain): ARGH!!!!
Tsunade(scream how loud she can in her mind): NO!!
(Elsewhere A is shown exchanging some blows with both Sussano armored cloaked Madara's clones. A is shown slowly puffing and little sweating while fighting in lighting armor level two. Madara's wood clones are shown not even exhausted. )
A(enraged): Dammit, I have enough of these clones !
Madara's clone(mocking tone): Come Raikage and show us everything what you got
A: I wil rip you apart bastards.
(A is shown charging at two Madara's wood clones. One of Madara's clone leap backwards while another one just stand there. A enraged by Madara's wood clone behaviour uses lariat on one of them, but Armored Sussano cloaked Madara's wood clone block A' lariat with Sussano hands.)
A(changes his only fist to all finger straight pointed at Armored Sussano cloaked Madara's clone ): I have enough of you stupid clones ! Lighting release: chain of lightnings !
(A pierces thorugh Madara's wood clone Armored Sussano then hitting this clone, as powerfull lighting sparks completly cover clone body cause him to dissolves. Another of Madara's clone weaves through handseal as he blows powefull fire stream at A brom behind his back.)
A: ARGH !!!! (fire stream hit A and explosion occur as smokescreen occur covering great part of battlefield.)
A: ?!
Madara's clone(emerges from smokescreen behind A try to punch him in chest): Block that punch A, if you can (smirks)
A(spot Madara's clone incomming as he blocks Madara's clone punch): Hmpf..., stupid clone *Why he isn't wear Sussano* it looks like you forgot to activated your Sussano before attacking me. I will finish you (smirks)
Madara's clone(smirks maliciously): Really I couldn't be so sure of it Raikage...
A(raises his head to face off Madara's clone, face to face): ?! *that pattern in his eyes *
Madara's clone(Ems is glowing in his both eyes): Tsyukomi ! (widden his left EMS)
A(everything become black and swirling): SHIT ?!
Madara's clone: it looks like you noticed (pause as evil smirk appear on his face) too late unfortunetly
[In real world A is shown fozen in place as well, as saliva is flowing down from his mouth. His eyes are unnaturally widden as nerves are shown. Slowly A vision begin to become blurry as life is leaving his eyes, in front of him Madara's clone is standing smirking at him.]
Madara's clone(comes forward):Sussano ! (swings vertiacally forward Sussano swords to A chest, piercing through him, as end's of sussano swords are sticking up out of chest.)
(A coughs spilling blood on ground as his body began to fall backwards but is kept in place by Sussano's swords.
Madara's clone leap backwards as he prepares to destroy A' body as he prepares magatama.)
Madara's clone: I will show you mercy Raikage and make your death shorter, you fought well even with only one arm. (pauses)
(prepares magatama, but suddenly strange kunai is flying at him so Madara's clone evades as he is about to shot it off )
Madara's clone: Sussano: Yasaka Magatama ?!
[Madara's clone dissolves after being hit by Rasengan from new comer who just arrived there. Smoke screen occur covering battlefield.]
[Elsewhere Madara's clone is shown standing over Tsunade amost lifless body as she has barerly strength to keep her conscionous.]
Madara's clone(look at her with respect and pity): You have great stamina, Senjuu princess (pauses) To last so long but (pauses) You are pitful in compare to your grandfather Hashirama.
Tsunade: *Grandfather..., help me... I can... protect my precious... people*
Madara's clone: Fare well Senjuu princess... (extend his sword with right hand and prepares to swings it from above) ?!
Hashirama(scary and serious face): Don't dare to put your hand at my granddaughter, Madara !
[Tsunade is still schocked that that finall blow didn't come so she slowly open her eyes to widden them as she spot Madara's clone with end'sof root siticking up from his chest. Few moments later clone dissolve as Tobirama, Hiruzen, Orochimaru, Sasuke and rest slowly approaches while dissolving clone uncover Hashirama standing behind him]
Hashirama(angry but slowly calm down): *So it was only wood clone... cursed Madara*
Tsunade(forcing herself to speak): Gran...dpa ?!
Hashirama(snap out then with worry on face rush to Tsunade side, putting his hand on her head): Tsunade !!, what the hell did happen to you ?!
Tsunade(whisper barerly hearable): tree...
Hashirama(spot huge tree on Tsunade, hiting himself in head): How dumb..., don't worry Tsunade I remove this huge branch right away. Wood release: unending roots !
Hashirama(spot Tsunade being cut in half in fear): Tsunade !!!
Hiruzen(widden eyes as he rushes to Tsunade): oh my god, Tsunade, princess what did happen to you ?
Orochimaru(watches with blank face): Even I didn't wish to see in that state, Tsunade
Sasuke: Tsuande-sama, Hokage what did happen here ?!
Tsunade(barerly conscionous): Uncle, Sensei..., Orochimaru ?!(glance at him for guess that he joined them somehow) and Sasuke ?!, Oro...chi...maru and sa..suke why are...you he...re
Hashirama(in hurry and sadness): save your breath and don't speak any more word, Tsunade... I will heal you just wait (put his both hands close to her as roots sprout from ground and envelops around Tsunade body.)
Tobirama(put his hand on Hashirama's shoulder ): Brother (pauses) that enough she will die, even you can't save her in that state...
Hashirama(becoming sobbing as tears are falling down on ground): NO!! I will activate sage mode and then heal her, there is no way I will ?!
Hiruzen(put his hand on Hashirama' other shoulder): I am afraid Tobirama-sama is right, I wish we could save you Hashirama-sama...
(Orochimaru and Sasuke finally decides to come closer as suddenly Minato appear few inches from them, as he walks forward to them as well with lowered head. Tsunade spot Orochimaru and Sasuke in front of her as rest try to calm down Hashirama.)
Orochimaru: Tsunade, I am here to help Shinobi Alliance. Besides I could save you if we had still some more time and from your current state I can say that you are dying from half a hour at least. Unfortunetly I can save you.
Sasuke: Tsunade-sama, I decided to follow my borther Itachi wishes, that why I will protect Konoha at all costs, I can't let my borther wish to be waste. I apologize for all my attacks I know that my be not enough but ?!
Tsunade(smiles): you... couldn't... be ...forg...iven in nor...mal sit...uta...tion, but in tim...e of war I will do exce...ption
Orochimaru: Your Senjuu and Uzumaki liange is keeping you in living world... how are you feel when you die, Tsunade ?
Tsunade(smiles as she began cough even more blood): Happy, that my former teammate and Uchiha avenger decided to return to save precious people to me.
[Minato comes to Tsunade side as he looks with sadness on his face as he began to talk, pulling everyone attentions.]
Minato: It looks like I saved Raikage body but I arrived too late... he is dead.
Tsunade(widden eyes): no...
Tobirama: Tsunade what the hell did happen here ?!
Tsunade: M ?!
Minato: Please stop Tobirama-sama. There is no need to bother her as she is dying(tear fall down on ground) I know everything from Raikage already.
Tsunade: Minato...
Everyone: ...
Minato: Raikage is dead, Tsuchikage is not visible anywhere so I can assume that he is dead as well...
Tsunade(her vision become very blurry and she loses her consciounses): you..are..right (cough blood) Mina...to. Tsuchikage (cough) was burnt by black flames (cough)(cough)(blood flowing down from her mouth)
Hashirama: Black flames ?!, Amaterasu !.Madara ?! (spot Tsunade closes her eyes) Tsunade no, please don't leave us !
Tobirama(try to cheer gentle his brother): ... *Tsunade...*
[Rain drops began to fall down of them slowly as all their faces are turned to Tsunade. Hashirama can't stop crying, Tobirama, Hiruzen and Minato are sad while Orochimaru and Sasuke and Juugo look concerned.]
[Silence occur across everyone as small breezes are blowing around, gently moving Tsunade'hairs as well as other. Sky begin to blast as small lighting appear across sky as small rain drops falling down changes to rainstorm. Everyone has lowered their head look at ground..]
Hashirama(scream as he raises his head to look at sky ): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Everyone: ?!
Hashirama(fall on knees): WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!
[Everyone come closer to Hashirama as Hashirama stop sobbing and screaming instead keep hiding his head behind
his both hands, then slowly Hashirama clam down as sky begin to clear up and rain being to less and less intense, so now only shower made of single rain drops is falling on them and lightinin dissapeared as well as thunder sound.]
Hashirama(slowly uncover his face as he move his hands at side): This time (pauses) Madara... I will make sure that you will(pauses) stay dead (Hashirama determined and deadly face is shown as wind stop moving his hairs, hashirama intent to kill is very powerfull and make everyone shiver except Tobirama who is just sweating lightly).
Tobirama(serious face): Finally you took right decision brother, it should be done long time ago...
Hiruzen: For sake of young people
Minato: and the elders
Orochimaru: For sake of the World safety
Sasuke: And my brother wishes
Everyone(together at the same time): Madara and Masked Man's plan will be stopped !
Naruto(look around himself): puff, puff (widden eyes) THIS CAN'T BE
Kakashi(widden eyes as he try to calm down): Even as shinobi, this amount of dead corpses it is unforgivable (clench his fists in anger)
Gai(widden eyes and serious face mixed with anger): this looks like they weren't joking when they said that our World will come to end soon, DAMN!!!(punch ground with his fists)
(Konoha Rookies along with rookies from other villages are shown approaching slowly Naruto from his behind as they have widden eyes, scared expression face as mouth opnend as they just saw ghost. Slowly generals are comming: Shizune, Darui, Kitsuchi and Mifune in Naruto's direction. In front of them Madara and Obito are standing as Juubi behind them i shown in perfect form, just finished transformation.)
Madara(extend his right hand in Killer bee direction):Bansho Tenin !
Killer bee: What the ?!
(Killer bee is shown being pulled by force as he is flying in Madara's direction, Madara watches as Killer Bee come closer and closer then siwtches to Sussano as it's reaches out it hands to catch Killer bee, who try to protect himself with Samehada.)
Madara(activates Sussano): Sussano !
Killer bee(caught by strong grip of Sussano' hands): UGH!! (twist Samehada as he try to swings it as Sussano, but suddenly Samehadara is kicked from his hand by Obito)
Obito: No, you won't use Kisame sword thief.
Naruto: No, let's him go !
(Naruto rush from place as he charges in Madara's and Obito's direction, Kakashi fast follow after him along with Gai.)
Obito(charges at incomming Naruto): you won't stop our plans Naruto !
(Naruto extend his fist to punch Obito but Obito become intangible as Naruto punch pass through. As Naruto continue moving, Obito become tangible to use wood root to pierce Naruto.)
Obito(extend his wood root in Naruto's direction after turning around): You are done Naruto !
Kakashi:Raikiri !
Obito(spot Kakashi with raikiri almost connecting with his body): ?! (become intangible as Kakashi with Raikiri pass through him as well)
Gai: Konoha Senpuu !
(Gai appear from Obito left and try to kick him vertically at side but Obito's lean backwardas avoiding it.)
Kakashi: Shit
Gai: Damn you
Obito(watches Kakashi then glance at Gai): *so you tried to use same strategy to hit me Kakashi, thanks to Gai I would be forced to become intangible and then you would attack me in my dimenssion* I have enough of you trashes, die !
(Naruto is almost approaching Madara as he uses Sussano to throw Killer Bee away behind him in air. Madara disactivates Sussano as he charges at Naruto with his war fan while evil smirk appear on his face.)
Obito: That is end
Madara: of yours World
(Lower part of page shows Madara being hit in chest by wood shaped hand which send him flying backwards, while Obito is slammed in back By rasengan .)
?????????:Wood Release: Hotei Technique !
Madara: It can't be, Hashirama ?!
??????: Rasengan !
Obito: Minato sensei ?!
(Page Twenty show perfect Juubi swallows Killer bee )
Finally they arrived, but isn't it too late ?!
END
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631 - Hope dies last
The death itself cam across battlefield !, What exactly Tobirama's words mean ?!
PAGE ONE
Tobirama: Indeed, Death itself came across battlefieldEveryone: ?!
Hashirama(confused face while waving his arms up and down): Whoa... whoa. Brother what do you mean by death itself cam across battlefield, it is not funny you know
Hiruzen(serious with sadness on face): We have to hurry, they may be in danger !
Minato(worried): *Naruto...*
Sasuke: *Naruto, stay alive we are comming !*
[Tobirama slowly stand up as everyone look at him with confusion, worry and sadness.]
Tobirama(turns first to Hashirama): I am pretty serious brothers, I couldn't sense so many deaths at battlefield even in previous shinobi world, amount of corpses is...(pause) terryfing. Besides this powerfull vibration comming from ground, there is even stronger then Kyuubi was emiting.
Hashirama(worried): *That mean Madara could summon it...*
Tobirama(turn his head back and look forward): Hiruzen is right, we have to go before it will be too late
Hashirama: but brother...
Tobirama: Silence !
Hashirama(feel depressed as he walks away a little): I wanted to enjoy our stay in Konoha here, you are so mean
[Everyone except Hashirama and Tobirama is sweatdropping now. Silence between them is interrupted by Tobirama cause everyone to snap out from their thoughts and pull their attention to Tobirama.]
Tobirama(serious): I will teleport us to the nearest water source, that how my Space Time Ninjutsu called Hirashin works(glance at them)
Minato(smiles): There is no need for that Tobirama-sama. I can teleport us whenever my marks are, my marks are working as anchors. One who is fighting at battlefield is my son, and I incorporated my mark in his seal when I sealed Kyuubi Yang half into him.
PAGE TWO
Tobirama: ?! You can use Hirashin as well, and even teleport us whenever you marks are. I see (pause) clever idea to use your marks are anchors where you can teleport. What is your name, 4th Hokage ?Minato(smirks): Minato, Minato Namikaze and thank you for your praise Tobirama-sama
Tobirama(suprised): Namikaze ?!, My son Senjuu Tarima married Namikaze Antasia as far I remember. Unfortunetly I couldn't be with them when their chould could be born(sad). It is high probable that you could be my grandson. Do you remeber your Mother name or father ?
Minato(sad): Unfortunetly no..., I didn't get even chance to know my parents...
Hiruzen: Minato was brought to Konoha as war orphan, so I don't know anything else. However Namikaze Antasia was taken as hostage so your son came to resuce her, and that was last time I heard about him. He probably died.
Tobirama(dissapointed then smiles): I see but it looks like you raised great shinobi Hiruzen. I am proud of you
Hiruzen: Thank you for your praise Tobirama-sama(tear drop on ground)
Orochimaru(step forward while annoyed): Can we cut your chit chat and finally go *I began to regret that I gave them free will...*
Minato(snap out of his thougths): That right. Hashirama-sama please come closer to us. Everyone put your hand on my shoulder. While I will search for anchors which respond to my Hirashin.
[Minato squat down as he put his one finger of right hand at ground, Hashirama come closer as he put his hand on Minato's shoulder, everyone else put heir hands on Minato's shoulder as well. Minato closes his eyes as he is shown very focused and calm.]
PAGE THREE
[Minato and everything around him is now shown as astral projections. It zoom out to show us anchors spreaded in many places as these marked anchors began to glow with chakra which is now traveling at amazing speed in Minato's direction. Zoon in back at Minato, who is shown squating down as streams of chakra from marked anchors hit him. Last very small stream of chakra hit him as he recognizes this marked anchor to be noone other then Tsunade.][Minato slowly open his eyes as last stream of chakra hit him cause him to widden his eyes as he is turned back to rest. Minato stand up fast as he turns around to face them. Everyone has confused face as Minato face expression become serious.]
Minato(calm): I pinpointed where Madara along with uknown man, as well as Naruto(smiles). There is indeed so many deaths it is terrible.
Tobirama(smiles): *Not only mastered my Hirashin, but sensor too. Adding his calm behaviour. He would really fit to be my grandson *
Hiruzen(enthusiastic and nervous): Then's for what we are waiting ?!, Minato teleport us them.
Tobirama(calm): *His face expression suddenly turned serious, what it could be ?*
Hashirama(concerend): What wrong is 4th your face suddenly become pale ?
Minato(turns around to them): Hashirama-sama, I found out Tsunade chakra too
Hashirama(cheering): That excellent
Tobirama(cold): Silence brother !That interrupt The 4th
PAGE FOUR
Minato: However she is dying and her chakra is barerly visible.Hashirama: !!, Take me there right away, I beg you 4th
Minato(worried and serious): Don't worry I will do it, but it is hard as her chakra is dissapearing almost.
[Minato squat down as he touch ground with his finger of right hand, while he become serious and little nervous as he closes his eyes. He looks like very focused while behind his back Taka and rest kage are shown, with different face expressions. Hashirama looks very worried and angry, Tobirama try to keep his calmness but small signs of anger appear on his face. Hiruzen is worried and sad, Orochimaru is shown thinking, Sasuke showns signs of sadness while Juugo and Karin look at them with blank faces.]
[Elsewhere Onoki is shown panting and sweating very badly as he is shown with his arms extended forward with hands turned outside. His hands are directed at where was top of hill but now only top of hill is not there anymore. Dust and smoke is floating from destroyed part of hill which is now few inches shorter then before. Tsunade is laying down at ground as she slowly dying, for moment she smiles as she looks at Onoki's direction who is just twenty meters away from her right side.]
Onoki(panting and sweating): It looks like Madara really understimated as..., if it was only original this war would be half way closer to be ended in our favour...
Tsunade(smiles as her breath become less and less regular): Amazing job... Onoki. You showed them where is their place.
Onoki(worried): I hope rest of kages are alive still... *Raikage couldn't die so easily *(smirks)
Onoki(turns around to Tsunade laying down on ground with sad face): *I wish I could save you princess, at least I and rest of kages could prove that her saving our lives was good choice*
Onoki(began to walk forward in Tsunade direction): Tsunade... Do you have any last wishes...
Tsunade(thinking): I ?!
PAGE FIVE
(Suddenly roots comming behind Onooki back pierce him sticking up from his chest outside. Tsunade and Onooki are in total shock with widden eyes and Onoki face is covered by pain expression.) Tsunade, Onoki: ?!
Tsunade(try to shout instead spilling blood as her vision become blurry): Onoki !
Onoki(coughs spilling blood at ground): GHE!! ARGH !!!
Onoki(lower his head in pain spot end's of root sticking up from his chest)
(Before Onoki and Tsunde could say something, Madara's wood clone emerges in front of Onoki. Onoki spot wood clone emerging from ground as he looks with anger at clone, while Tsunde just watches on.)
Onoki: You!!!, but (caugh) how ?! (spill blood )
Madara's clone(smirks): It was really close Onoki, you destroyed two other clone but I jump down from cliff in last second before you shot off your Participle style structure and reduced other two clones along with top of cliff to dust(turns around to look at cliff then turns his head to face Onoki.)
Tsunade(whisper): Bastard...
Madara's clone(cold tone): You lowered your guard again Onoki and thinking that we understimated you forgot to think that you may overate yourself and understimate your enemy. It is double edged sword, you know Onoki.(evil smirks)
Onoki(try to extend his both hands in wood's clone direction): I may made mistake, but it isn't too late to correct it !
Madara's clone(suprised as he forms handseal): ?!
(Before Onoki could extend his both hands forward, roots sticking up from his chest began to stretch enveloping around both Onooki hands.)
Onoki:Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique ?!
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(Onoki try to extend his both hands by trying to overpower roots but roots began to grasp around his arms restricting his movement which cause him pain as roots sticking up from his chest tighten.)Onoki(grimace of pain on face): GARGH !!! (cough spilling blood) ARGH!!! *Damn...*
Madara's clone(pull his both hands apart as he lower them): I am afraid you wouldn't get chance to correct your mistake ,Onooki. (smirking maliciously)
[Onooki falls on his knees with roots still sticking up from his chest, then he spill even more blood as blood is flowing down from his mouth as Onoki vision slowly become blurry.]
Onoki: *Kitsuchi son I hope you will be good Tsuchikage, looks like Kurotsuchi my grandaughter was right... I should step down from being Tsuchikage when I had chance, maybe I could lead happy elderly life...*
Onoki(snap out from his thoughts): No, There is nothing more better than die at battlefield while protecting your people and your wishes, opinions !
Madara's clone(shakes his head then turns serious): what a pitty... you lost your mind so badly Onoki that you are talking to yourself some nonsense(sigh) Anyway I will have some mercy for you so I will make your death short.
Tsunade,Onooki:?!
[Madara's clone activates his EMS in both eyes, as he blood begin to flowing down fron his right EMS's eye across his cheek then dropping down on ground, make noice of water dropping. Tsunade and Onoki look in fear and powerlesness at Madara's clone.]
Madara's clone: You fought well Onoki, you proved that you are great warrior(smirks). You deserves to die from this technique... Fare well Onoki...
[Small breeze came across of them, moving grey hair of Onoki at side, as his eyes become wider and wider with each second passed. Everything seems to slow down, he could feel each tear blood dropping on ground, his hear become to beat even faster as his all body was shivering from pressure gathere in Madara's clone eye. ]
Madara's clone(widen his right EMS'eye so nerves are visible):Amaterasu !
Onoki(scream in pain): ARGH!!!!
Tsunade(scream how loud she can in her mind): NO!!
PAGE SEVEN
(Onoki is completly engulfed by black flames which appear from nowhere. His scream is spreading around and reflecting from rocks, ground.)(Elsewhere A is shown exchanging some blows with both Sussano armored cloaked Madara's clones. A is shown slowly puffing and little sweating while fighting in lighting armor level two. Madara's wood clones are shown not even exhausted. )
A(enraged): Dammit, I have enough of these clones !
Madara's clone(mocking tone): Come Raikage and show us everything what you got
A: I wil rip you apart bastards.
(A is shown charging at two Madara's wood clones. One of Madara's clone leap backwards while another one just stand there. A enraged by Madara's wood clone behaviour uses lariat on one of them, but Armored Sussano cloaked Madara's wood clone block A' lariat with Sussano hands.)
A(changes his only fist to all finger straight pointed at Armored Sussano cloaked Madara's clone ): I have enough of you stupid clones ! Lighting release: chain of lightnings !
(A pierces thorugh Madara's wood clone Armored Sussano then hitting this clone, as powerfull lighting sparks completly cover clone body cause him to dissolves. Another of Madara's clone weaves through handseal as he blows powefull fire stream at A brom behind his back.)
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A(spot fire comming at him): One down, Second to come ?!A: ARGH !!!! (fire stream hit A and explosion occur as smokescreen occur covering great part of battlefield.)
A: ?!
Madara's clone(emerges from smokescreen behind A try to punch him in chest): Block that punch A, if you can (smirks)
A(spot Madara's clone incomming as he blocks Madara's clone punch): Hmpf..., stupid clone *Why he isn't wear Sussano* it looks like you forgot to activated your Sussano before attacking me. I will finish you (smirks)
Madara's clone(smirks maliciously): Really I couldn't be so sure of it Raikage...
A(raises his head to face off Madara's clone, face to face): ?! *that pattern in his eyes *
Madara's clone(Ems is glowing in his both eyes): Tsyukomi ! (widden his left EMS)
A(everything become black and swirling): SHIT ?!
Madara's clone: it looks like you noticed (pause as evil smirk appear on his face) too late unfortunetly
PAGE NINE
[A is shown in strange world(Similliar to Itachi) but red color is even more blooded, A is shown frozen in place as few Madara's appear then comes froward as they pierce him with swords, pulling it back and moving forward in loop.][In real world A is shown fozen in place as well, as saliva is flowing down from his mouth. His eyes are unnaturally widden as nerves are shown. Slowly A vision begin to become blurry as life is leaving his eyes, in front of him Madara's clone is standing smirking at him.]
Madara's clone(comes forward):Sussano ! (swings vertiacally forward Sussano swords to A chest, piercing through him, as end's of sussano swords are sticking up out of chest.)
(A coughs spilling blood on ground as his body began to fall backwards but is kept in place by Sussano's swords.
Madara's clone leap backwards as he prepares to destroy A' body as he prepares magatama.)
Madara's clone: I will show you mercy Raikage and make your death shorter, you fought well even with only one arm. (pauses)
(prepares magatama, but suddenly strange kunai is flying at him so Madara's clone evades as he is about to shot it off )
Madara's clone: Sussano: Yasaka Magatama ?!
PAGE TEN
??????:Rasengan ![Madara's clone dissolves after being hit by Rasengan from new comer who just arrived there. Smoke screen occur covering battlefield.]
[Elsewhere Madara's clone is shown standing over Tsunade amost lifless body as she has barerly strength to keep her conscionous.]
Madara's clone(look at her with respect and pity): You have great stamina, Senjuu princess (pauses) To last so long but (pauses) You are pitful in compare to your grandfather Hashirama.
Tsunade: *Grandfather..., help me... I can... protect my precious... people*
Madara's clone: Fare well Senjuu princess... (extend his sword with right hand and prepares to swings it from above) ?!
PAGE ELEVEN
(Madara's clone swings his sword from above as Tsunade is closes her eyes. Suddenly Madara's clone is pierced by as end's of roots are sticking up outside of clone chest and Hashirama is shown behind Madara's clone with deadly serious expression while keeping kunai to Madara's clone neck.)Hashirama(scary and serious face): Don't dare to put your hand at my granddaughter, Madara !
[Tsunade is still schocked that that finall blow didn't come so she slowly open her eyes to widden them as she spot Madara's clone with end'sof root siticking up from his chest. Few moments later clone dissolve as Tobirama, Hiruzen, Orochimaru, Sasuke and rest slowly approaches while dissolving clone uncover Hashirama standing behind him]
Hashirama(angry but slowly calm down): *So it was only wood clone... cursed Madara*
Tsunade(forcing herself to speak): Gran...dpa ?!
Hashirama(snap out then with worry on face rush to Tsunade side, putting his hand on her head): Tsunade !!, what the hell did happen to you ?!
Tsunade(whisper barerly hearable): tree...
Hashirama(spot huge tree on Tsunade, hiting himself in head): How dumb..., don't worry Tsunade I remove this huge branch right away. Wood release: unending roots !
Hashirama(spot Tsunade being cut in half in fear): Tsunade !!!
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Tobirama(widden eyes as he rushes to Tsunade): Tsunade ?!Hiruzen(widden eyes as he rushes to Tsunade): oh my god, Tsunade, princess what did happen to you ?
Orochimaru(watches with blank face): Even I didn't wish to see in that state, Tsunade
Sasuke: Tsuande-sama, Hokage what did happen here ?!
Tsunade(barerly conscionous): Uncle, Sensei..., Orochimaru ?!(glance at him for guess that he joined them somehow) and Sasuke ?!, Oro...chi...maru and sa..suke why are...you he...re
Hashirama(in hurry and sadness): save your breath and don't speak any more word, Tsunade... I will heal you just wait (put his both hands close to her as roots sprout from ground and envelops around Tsunade body.)
Tobirama(put his hand on Hashirama's shoulder ): Brother (pauses) that enough she will die, even you can't save her in that state...
Hashirama(becoming sobbing as tears are falling down on ground): NO!! I will activate sage mode and then heal her, there is no way I will ?!
Hiruzen(put his hand on Hashirama' other shoulder): I am afraid Tobirama-sama is right, I wish we could save you Hashirama-sama...
(Orochimaru and Sasuke finally decides to come closer as suddenly Minato appear few inches from them, as he walks forward to them as well with lowered head. Tsunade spot Orochimaru and Sasuke in front of her as rest try to calm down Hashirama.)
PAGE THIRTEEN
Sasuke: Tsunade-sama, I decided to follow my borther Itachi wishes, that why I will protect Konoha at all costs, I can't let my borther wish to be waste. I apologize for all my attacks I know that my be not enough but ?!
Tsunade(smiles): you... couldn't... be ...forg...iven in nor...mal sit...uta...tion, but in tim...e of war I will do exce...ption
Orochimaru: Your Senjuu and Uzumaki liange is keeping you in living world... how are you feel when you die, Tsunade ?
Tsunade(smiles as she began cough even more blood): Happy, that my former teammate and Uchiha avenger decided to return to save precious people to me.
[Minato comes to Tsunade side as he looks with sadness on his face as he began to talk, pulling everyone attentions.]
Minato: It looks like I saved Raikage body but I arrived too late... he is dead.
Tsunade(widden eyes): no...
Tobirama: Tsunade what the hell did happen here ?!
Tsunade: M ?!
Minato: Please stop Tobirama-sama. There is no need to bother her as she is dying(tear fall down on ground) I know everything from Raikage already.
Tsunade: Minato...
PAGE FOURTEEN
Minato: Madara was ressurected and fought against them, leaving them in close ot death states except ]Tsunade who as cut by giant branch(hashirama clench his fists and tears are falling down even faster). Tsunade then decieded to save them as she know that she couldn't survive this, and she saved them but Madara's clones waited form them. Tsuchikage decided to stop these wood clones but somehow two of them slipped away as they caught up to rest of kages, Raikage then decided to stop them letting rest Kazekage and Mizukage to escape.Everyone: ...
Minato: Raikage is dead, Tsuchikage is not visible anywhere so I can assume that he is dead as well...
Tsunade(her vision become very blurry and she loses her consciounses): you..are..right (cough blood) Mina...to. Tsuchikage (cough) was burnt by black flames (cough)(cough)(blood flowing down from her mouth)
Hashirama: Black flames ?!, Amaterasu !.Madara ?! (spot Tsunade closes her eyes) Tsunade no, please don't leave us !
Tobirama(try to cheer gentle his brother): ... *Tsunade...*
[Rain drops began to fall down of them slowly as all their faces are turned to Tsunade. Hashirama can't stop crying, Tobirama, Hiruzen and Minato are sad while Orochimaru and Sasuke and Juugo look concerned.]
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Tsunade: I happy to see you all, I love grand..fat...her, un...cle and thank you for arrival. [Suddenly Tsunade's head fall down on it's side as her eyes are completly closed. Her body become numb as tears of happiness are still flowing form her eyes.][Silence occur across everyone as small breezes are blowing around, gently moving Tsunade'hairs as well as other. Sky begin to blast as small lighting appear across sky as small rain drops falling down changes to rainstorm. Everyone has lowered their head look at ground..]
Hashirama(scream as he raises his head to look at sky ): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Everyone: ?!
Hashirama(fall on knees): WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!
[Everyone come closer to Hashirama as Hashirama stop sobbing and screaming instead keep hiding his head behind
his both hands, then slowly Hashirama clam down as sky begin to clear up and rain being to less and less intense, so now only shower made of single rain drops is falling on them and lightinin dissapeared as well as thunder sound.]
Hashirama(slowly uncover his face as he move his hands at side): This time (pauses) Madara... I will make sure that you will(pauses) stay dead (Hashirama determined and deadly face is shown as wind stop moving his hairs, hashirama intent to kill is very powerfull and make everyone shiver except Tobirama who is just sweating lightly).
Tobirama(serious face): Finally you took right decision brother, it should be done long time ago...
Hiruzen: For sake of young people
Minato: and the elders
Orochimaru: For sake of the World safety
Sasuke: And my brother wishes
Everyone(together at the same time): Madara and Masked Man's plan will be stopped !
PAGE SIXTEEN
[Naruto is shown panting covered with great numbers of shinobi behind army of frogs. Fukusaku and Shima jump down from Naruto's shoulders as smoke screen and blinding light created by Juubi complety fade away, enourmous number of death corpses laying everywhere. Killer Bee is kneeling down on his one knee before Naruto while Kakashi and Gai are barerly standing on both Naruto's sides. Behind them and Naruto all rookies are shown with terrified expression of faces.]Naruto(look around himself): puff, puff (widden eyes) THIS CAN'T BE
Kakashi(widden eyes as he try to calm down): Even as shinobi, this amount of dead corpses it is unforgivable (clench his fists in anger)
Gai(widden eyes and serious face mixed with anger): this looks like they weren't joking when they said that our World will come to end soon, DAMN!!!(punch ground with his fists)
(Konoha Rookies along with rookies from other villages are shown approaching slowly Naruto from his behind as they have widden eyes, scared expression face as mouth opnend as they just saw ghost. Slowly generals are comming: Shizune, Darui, Kitsuchi and Mifune in Naruto's direction. In front of them Madara and Obito are standing as Juubi behind them i shown in perfect form, just finished transformation.)
Madara(extend his right hand in Killer bee direction):Bansho Tenin !
Killer bee: What the ?!
(Killer bee is shown being pulled by force as he is flying in Madara's direction, Madara watches as Killer Bee come closer and closer then siwtches to Sussano as it's reaches out it hands to catch Killer bee, who try to protect himself with Samehada.)
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Naruto: Killer Bee ?!Madara(activates Sussano): Sussano !
Killer bee(caught by strong grip of Sussano' hands): UGH!! (twist Samehada as he try to swings it as Sussano, but suddenly Samehadara is kicked from his hand by Obito)
Obito: No, you won't use Kisame sword thief.
Naruto: No, let's him go !
(Naruto rush from place as he charges in Madara's and Obito's direction, Kakashi fast follow after him along with Gai.)
Obito(charges at incomming Naruto): you won't stop our plans Naruto !
(Naruto extend his fist to punch Obito but Obito become intangible as Naruto punch pass through. As Naruto continue moving, Obito become tangible to use wood root to pierce Naruto.)
Obito(extend his wood root in Naruto's direction after turning around): You are done Naruto !
Kakashi:Raikiri !
Obito(spot Kakashi with raikiri almost connecting with his body): ?! (become intangible as Kakashi with Raikiri pass through him as well)
Gai: Konoha Senpuu !
(Gai appear from Obito left and try to kick him vertically at side but Obito's lean backwardas avoiding it.)
Kakashi: Shit
Gai: Damn you
Obito(watches Kakashi then glance at Gai): *so you tried to use same strategy to hit me Kakashi, thanks to Gai I would be forced to become intangible and then you would attack me in my dimenssion* I have enough of you trashes, die !
(Naruto is almost approaching Madara as he uses Sussano to throw Killer Bee away behind him in air. Madara disactivates Sussano as he charges at Naruto with his war fan while evil smirk appear on his face.)
PAGE EIGHTEEN
(Upper part of Page shows Obito comming at Kakashi and Gai with death blow crossed with Madara being shown swingng his fan at helpless Naruto.)Obito: That is end
Madara: of yours World
(Lower part of page shows Madara being hit in chest by wood shaped hand which send him flying backwards, while Obito is slammed in back By rasengan .)
?????????:Wood Release: Hotei Technique !
Madara: It can't be, Hashirama ?!
??????: Rasengan !
Obito: Minato sensei ?!
PAGES NINETEEN AND TWENTY
(Page nineteen show Taka and edo hokages revealed as smoke fade away)(Page Twenty show perfect Juubi swallows Killer bee )
Finally they arrived, but isn't it too late ?!
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632 - Hope returns, The most powerfull team: edo Hokages comming (never) seriously I can't write any more I lost all idea's and energy to do it
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