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Ok this is my third one of the day...i think So yeah fill out the template, make it look cool, take some pride in it, and be original.

Level of Sharingan: (Mangekyou, Eternal Mangekyou, Pure)

Unique powers

Left Eye:

Right Eye:

Pure power: (if you chose it)


Susanoo: Yes/No
-Susanoo Details:


Degrades eyes:Yes/No

Story of how you unlocked it: (Make it flashy) :)


If you're wondering what "Pure" is, its basically sharingan that's been freed from the curse of hatred and unlocks a EXTREMELY POWERFUL NEAR DIVINE POWER. This is something of my own creation, merely made for fun. Go nuts guys
 

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The Harugan

Right eye: Crying
Left eye: More crying
Special power: Uselessness

I couldn't help it. XD

^this
/my life
 

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Level of Sharingan: Eternal Mangekyou

Unique powers:

Left Eye: The ability to absorb the target's luck for yourself. You gain good luck and the target gains bad luck in the process.

Right Eye: The ability to give your luck away. Suppose a dear friend is about to be killed, why not take a bullet for your friend instead?

*Note that everybody has a certain level of luck that they're born with here and that there's something called the conservation of luck. Basically, if I were to absorb somebody's luck, the luck slowly drains from me and goes back to the victim if either good things happen to me or bad things happen to the target because of luck (so it has a certain amount of uses). Other then that, it's a "permanent status" until the target dies. You can also stack multiple peoples' luck at one time.

Susanoo: No

Degrades eyes: No

Story of how you unlocked it: I have always been cursed with bad luck. I once attempted to help a child survive a construction accident, but I ended up failing. All that came out of that was an injured leg. The medical ninja said that it would heal in a few weeks, and finally I believed that good luck had showered upon me. But during my stay at this medical center, my father was murdered by bandits attempting to rob our house. They were tried in court, but they were found innocent due to bribery of the judge. That was when I unlocked this unique power, but I didn't want to tell anybody.

Later, I figured out that my brother had worked for a gang to ensure our financial stability after my father's death. This caused him to have a great deal of enemies, and for my protection commit suicide to feed the resentment of his enemies and to protect both my mother and I in the long run. I tried to use my abilities to save him, but not even luck could bring him back from the dead. In his suicide note, he left me with his eyes. With these eyes, I will go on a journey in search of the truth. I will judge if the world deserves to be destroyed or saved, and will act accordingly with these strange powers of mine.
 

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The Harugan

Right eye: Crying
Left eye: More crying
Special power: Uselessness

I couldn't help it. XD

Not once would I EVER think I would hear that from a diehard Sakura fan. ^_^
 

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The Harugan

Right eye: Crying
Left eye: More crying
Special power: Uselessness

I couldn't help it. XD

LOL.
I find this even more funny because you're also a Sakura fan hehe.
 

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Level of Sharingan: EMS, and Pure

Unique powers

Left Eye:Mirror jutsu. This jutsu warps reality and switches the users and victims places in the midst of battle. So lets say someone throws a kunai at you the user sights the enemy notes his position and his enemy then switches places with him so that the kunai hits his enemy in the users place instead. This is a variant of space time techniques

Right Eye: Consuming Darkness jutsu: Similar to amaterasu, this attack turns the enemies shadow against them. The shadow starts to attach itself to the person slowly covering the persons whole body. Once consumed the enemy's mind is attacked and ultimately erased then the body, which becomes an empty carcass, becomes a slave to the user.

Pure power: After reaching Pure sharingan the eye color becomes blue and see's the world in a whole new perspective. This perspective literally sees the flow of time and allows the user to move outside the flow. This makes the user seem like they're moving at in human speeds when in actuality they're moving at base speed. Their attacks are not inhibited by reality, making them 10 times stronger than what they seem to be. However when the person cancels this technique, they become greatly weakened by shock of re-entering reality.

Susanoo: Yes
-Susanoo Details:


Degrades eyes:No EMS Prevents

Story of how you unlocked it: The EMS was unlocked after losing sight from excessive use of my MS. I stole the eyes from another Uchiha as I do not have siblings. Then after countless battles and mistakes i started to see what i did was wrong. I stopped fighting for some years and hid in shame. Then during the 3rd ninja war, i was forced to fight again. Caught in a trap with my company, i made a diversion so they could escape while i stayed to fight and die. Accepting my fate as death with almost NO chakra, i felt a new force arise within me. It was not chakra, but something else, then i awakened my pure sharingan with new power. I defeated my enemies and staged my death. My eyes are too powerful for this world, so now i hide for eternity.
 

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Not once would I EVER think I would hear that from a diehard Sakura fan. ^_^

I don't actually think she's really useless on her own terms, but the opportunity was right there..... xd
 

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Level of Sharingan: (Eternal Mangekyou,)

Unique powers Genjutsu can be contacted without eye contact

Left Eye: Freeze time your peception of time

Right Eye: Creates false memories and emotion

Pure power: (if you chose it)


Susanoo: No


Degrades eyes: No

Story of how you unlocked it: Killed the love of his life and best friend after catching them in bed together
 

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Well, since you allowed for such a creative adventure, allow Daisy to dive in!!!

Level: Pure EMS

Design: I want an inverted colour scheme like Sasuke. I want the initial design to be an X shape, intersecting at the pupil. In between the elongated portions of the X, There will be small dots, about half the size of my pupils.

Story. I am a lone Uchiha boy who comes from a broken family. I was abandoned as a child and brought up by a very rich family. I awakened my 1 Tomoe Sharingan as a small boy of only 4 years old, and had matured it into a 3 tomoe by the age of 6. One day, tradgedy strikes and my host family is killed. In the midst of the pain of their sudden loss, I awaken my Mangekyou. I am left on the streets once again as I travel alone honing my abilities and mastering my Mangekyou, when I notice that I have progressive vision loss. This is temorarily alleviated with glasses.

One day, I meet a girl names Lillith, who also has the Mangekyou and we decide to travel together, honing our skills, training, and forming a relationship. One day, She and I are attacked by rogue ninja of an opposing clan. In the wake of the battle, Lillith is mortally wounded. In my fit of rage, I activate my Final Susano'o and bruitally slaughter all enemies in sight. However, I lose my vision almost completely.

After the battle, I realize that Lillith is not able to be saved. Before she dies, she gives me her Mangekyou as a parting gift and makes me swear that I will fight for justice and not for my own selfish desires. Upon transplanting the eyes, I gain the Eternal Light and power beond my wildest dreams. Lillith's spirit lives on within me and takes the shape of my NEW Susano'o. After the tragic events of my life unfold, I become a traveling warrior who fights to protect the light. . .

Sharingan Abilities



  • The Left Eye: Kamui
    The first of my abilities will be Kamui. I want to be able to trasport my body to an alternate dimension and teleport to distant places at a near instantanious speed at will. Also, by sending different parts of my body to the dimension, I can gain the ability to allow solid objects and ninjutsu to phase harmlesly through my body. This would also allow me to walk through walls like a phantom.

  • The Right Eye: Amaterasu
    I want to be able to utilize the Black Flames of Amaterasu. Anything in my right eye's line of sight will be ignited with the black flames of amaterasu. With my other eye, I will be able to manipulate the flames and achlive the sacred elemental nature; Inferno Style!!!
    • Inferno Style
      With this, I will be able to manipulate the flames of Amaterasu into blades and shields. I can create a wall of flames, a pillar of flaming blades, or coat my Susano'o in its flames. This nature style and the Amaterasu can be used in conjunction to Kamui and augment my Susano'o.

  • The ultimate ability that rests in BOTH eyes. . . Susano'o
    Well, allow me to tell you my perfect desigh on Susano'o

    It will be activated by the power of Justice.

    My Susano'o will be that of a female warrior and white in colour.

    Susano’o Ribcage: The ribcage will look the same as all others. It can be used in conjunction with Inferno Style (enton) to get coated in Amaterasu flames. It will be a white silver colour

    Skeletal Susano’o: The Skeletal form will form the basic 4-armed skeleton with no major protrusions. It will be able to manifest 4 strait blades that can be held in all 4 of her hands. It can also be coated in Amaterasu Flames to deliver blazing sword slashes and flaming punches.

    Incomplet Susano’o: The Susano’o will begin forming skin and muscular tissue on the bones. The endurance will increase and will be able to weave handsigns for alternate Jutsu. The abilities remain unchanged.

    Complete Susano’o: Upon entering the (grounded) complete form, the torso will begin to take on a curvacious and feminine appearance with a proportionally c-cup breast. The appendages will be sleak and non-muscular in appearance. The face will be soft and have a blank expression on it. The hair growing from her head (and the bones) will be a bit of a silverish colour and be darker than the white colour of the rest of her body. She will hold two jagged blades in her posterior forearms. The anterior arms will be coated in Amaterasu Flames and be used for direct melee attacks and to form handsigns.

    The complete Susano'o that emerges from the ground, forms a lower body and stands on its own two feet will have the same structure as the torso-only complete Susano'o. The legs and hips will be curvacious to match the rest of her body. The skin will also be sleek and nonmuscular to match the theme. The abilities will remain the same, however it will gain the ability to run and jump. It’s speed will be comparable to that of 5th Gate (Gate of Closing) Rock Lee.

    Final Susano’o: Upon entering the Final Susano'o stage, The body will gain a dress, similar to that worn by Daisy. The body will be covered and the sleaves will cut off just past the shoulders. The dress will reach to the ground, covering her feet. The dress will be embellished with a skull-shaped pendent in the middle of her breast. The dress design itself will be sleek with lacey embroarderments. It will also be a white silver in colour.

    Perfect Susano’o: Now when the chakra is stabolized, the Perfect form will be achieved. Upon achieving this form, the Susano'o will undergo a change in dress. The dress will look the same, but it will take on an armored look starting at the hips and traveling downwards until it reaches the ground. Her upper arms will be lightly armor plated as well. Her hair will become black in colour and erupt in the Black Flames of Amaterasu. Her anterior forearms will be covered by armour that will also be ignited in Amaterasu. The posterior forearms will maintain the same blazing armour as well as hold two large claymore-style braudswords that expand the length of her entire body. In adition to the armour and weapons, she will have angelic wings sprouting from her back. The edges of the feathers will be coated in Amaterasu’s Flames.

    Upon drawing the claymore, the blade's edge will be coated in Amaterasu. When she slashes, she will have enough power to destroy entire mountain ranges in an instant. In addition to that, In the wake of the slash, a stream of Amaterasu Flames will be left and a wildfire of unprescedented proportions spreading for miles and miles at a time will be left with every single slash.

    The unarmed hands will be used to blast high powered streames of Amaterasu Flames and utilize Yasaka Beads (which will also be coated in Amaterasu). If an absolute deence is needed, her dress and all armour plates will erupt in the Black Flames of Amaterasu.

    As with the two previous forms, It will be able to use handsigns.


    Special Abilities:
    • Strength that allows it to rival that of a nuclear warhead in brute force.

    • Blades that can slash through entire mountain ranges at a single time

    • The ability of flight when in its Perfect form.

    • Amaterasu in the form of Inferno style

      • Inferno Style: Yasaka Beads
        Yasaka beads bound by a chakra string and launched with 10x the force of a tank blast. They will be coated in Amaterasu and will leave small pools of Amaterasu upon impact.

      • Inferno Style: Wildfire Blast
        After weaving a handign, Susano'o will extend her palm (or both palms) and blast a high-powered stream of pure Amaterasu Flames at the opponent. A large river of Amaterasu will be left in its wake.

      • Inferno Style: Flame Fist
        Wit her fist coated in Amaterasu Flames, Susano'o will throw a powerful punchat the opponent. A large area of Amaterasu will be left on contact.

      • Inferno Style: Flame Control Blade/Dual Flame Control Blades
        Susano'o will draw either one or both of her claymore. The edges of the claymore will be ignited in Amaterasu Flames. Anything they come in contact with will be ignited in Amaterasu Flames. Amaterasu Flames are alsodischarged whenever a slash is made. These blades have the power to destroy and ignite entire mountain ranges in a single slash.

      • Inferno Style: Hellfire Slash
        When Susano'o swings her claymore, the shockwave slices entire mountain ranges to ribbons. In it's wake, a river of Amaterasu covers the entire area in which the slash' path traveled.

      • Inferno Style: Blazing Shield
        As a defensive maneuver, all armour, her hair, and er wings will be ignited in amaterasu Flames, preventing contact with opposing forces.

      • Inferno Style: Grand Hellfire Annihalation
        The strongest move in Susano'o's arsenal. This move is only to be used as a last resort, as it's destructive power cannot be very well controlled. Susano'o weaves 10 handsigns and claps her hands. In that instant, an OCEAN of Amaterasu Flames erupt from all around for about a 10 mile radius. Explosions of Amaterasu, Amaterasu rain, Flaming Pillars of Amaterasu, and even literal waves of Amaterasu (similar to that of the ocean) erupt in a totally chaotic fashion, leaving not even dust in it's wake. All things are reduced to nothingness.

      • Inferno Style: Flame Depression
        This is a different ability of Susano'o, as it causes some (or all) of Amaterasu's flames to be extinguished. This can clear the battlefield of the black Flames and remove the Flames from Susano'o's body itself.




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Wadaya think? Bada$$? Too hax? Unoriginal? Tell me how ya like it!!!
 
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Not to diss on your guys' creativity, but c'mon seriously? be original and not so overpowering
 

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Level: Pure EMS
Powers:
Left eye:Makes a man crave ramen until he dies
Right eye: Legend has it that he can cast the world into infinite tsukuyomi where all the people eat ramen.
Note: Also allows the user to have Ramen style

Ultimate Ability: Rameno'o
This power allows the bowl of Ramen and it's legacy to live. The ramen takes form of the sage of six paths himself thus casting the edo tensei on your own Rameno'o and control the Sage of Six Paths himself under the edo tensei.

Story:
Teuchi was born.
 
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Not to diss on your guys' creativity, but c'mon seriously? be original and not so overpowering

Unoriginal? Can you tell me what is unoriginal about our ideas? I mean I have a Susano'o that takes the form of a demonic angel and a pretty unique story that I ripped out of my journel (edited slightly of course).

And how are our ideas any less creative or spectacular than yourse?
 

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Unoriginal? Can you tell me what is unoriginal about our ideas? I mean I have a Susano'o that takes the form of a demonic angel and a pretty unique story that I ripped out of my journel (edited slightly of course).

And how are our ideas any less creative or spectacular than yourse?

I wasnt referring to you mostly towards sephs. Though I dislike using something thats already existing in the anime such as amaterasu and kamui, but if you like it that much, who am i to say it sucks. I just like making new things. Your Susanoo on the other hand is remarkably creative and detailed mine pales in comparison.
 

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I wasnt referring to you mostly towards sephs. Though I dislike using something thats already existing in the anime such as amaterasu and kamui, but if you like it that much, who am i to say it sucks. I just like making new things. Your Susanoo on the other hand is remarkably creative and detailed mine pales in comparison.

Oh. I understand now. And I do think that he/she could have diversified some of the abilities.

And Thanks for commenting about my Susano'o. I took the Ideas out of a story i'm writing. I updated the abilities to show a bit more details on Susano'o's arsenal.

And as for making up original abilities. . . Well other than Kamui and Susano'o (which are must haves for me), It wouldn't be fair in the Naruto world or AND anime world. . . All the top-tier abilities in my storylines involve breaking the laws of reality and obliterating entire solar systems in a blink of an eye. . . That's WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY to hax for THIS thread. And I think opening the gates of Hell is a bit ofa cliche'
 

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Sorry for the misinterpretation and i'll admit mine is a bit OP as well.
 

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Sorry for the misinterpretation and i'll admit mine is a bit OP as well.

Not really. . . It's kinda like Shadow Strangle Jutsu and KotoAmatsukami on sterroids. The story you presentessounds pretty nice and your design seems pretty neat.

But your "Pure Power" thing is haxed as F**K.

And I will admit. . . The Inferno Style varients I came up with are pretty hax as well. ESPECIALLY Grand Hellfire Annihalation. . . I didn't realize just how stupidly haxed that move was until I reread my post. But it IS just imagination. Just go with what you like! ^_^ And I would LOVE to see a Susano'o like the one I designed, but I don't think that'll ever happen.
 
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The Harugan

Right eye: Crying
Left eye: More crying
Special power: Uselessness

I couldn't help it. XD


LMAO, that really was easy, i would say:

Right eye: Looking
Left eye: More looking
Special Power: Find something to look at!!
 
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