a mini story that i made today

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Once upon a time, there was a woman that took a taxi, with that woman, there was a boy, a baby boy, then there was a man who, in his own, was running in the street as if he was a thief, the woman looked at him while getting in the taxi and LAUGHED, she said to the driver "please, will you follow that guy" the taxi driver asked "but, why?",

She said "this man was my husband about a year ago, he was my lover, yet one week after marriage he said to me "we are getting divorced, darling I'm sorry but (in TIME you'll understand)" and just like that he took off, I was like WTF just happened, i tried to CONTACT him but he kept sending me this MESSAGE (in TIME you'll understand),

Then I found out that I was pregnant, as soon as I was sure, I CALLed him, and told him, do you know what he said, he said "so what'll you do, keep the baby, or abort the baby, anyways it's your CALL" then I said WTF? You know what he said, he said (in TIME you'll understand),

Every day from that day on i kept CALLing him, yet he'd always say (in TIME you'll understand),

As you can see, I kept the baby, but the thing is, he did CALL me the day i was in the hospital and whispered (the TIME has come to understand) that I’m a NINJA.

"Oh and by the way, we both have the UNLIMITED plan"
 

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Nice story. How old are you? ^_^

EDITED: Look at my post count. Damnn.~ :bouncy:
 

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Nice story. How old are you? ^_^

EDITED: Look at my post count. Damnn.~ :bouncy:

You have officially joined the 'Wasting your life on the Internet!' club :)
 

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21 but still have a childish part for these kind of things (stories)
 

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That was not a mini story.........it took me a hour to read the whole thing :|
 

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Did you know you can separate distinct ideas into sentences rather than using a **** ton of commas? Also, you're story wasn't very good...
 

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Did you know you can separate distinct ideas into sentences rather than using a **** ton of commas? Also, you're story wasn't very good...

Come on, not everyone has grammatical prowess. No need to be a **** about it man :).
 

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Crocodile being friendly?

impossibru!
 

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Wesobi watch out it is a trick he will crush you if you fall for it
 

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Come on, not everyone has grammatical prowess. No need to be a **** about it man :).
I knews, hims once tells me to goes an learns da engrish, but me no lets he botha me, so shuts ups stoopid pandas!
 
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