Shin Kaito's Basic five's Training under Selendrile

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(Futon: Ressenpū) - Wind Release: Violent Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user gushes a powerful stream of wind from their mouth towards their enemy.

o_o A stream of wind won't push me upwards now.

A good one, but there are much better choices.
 

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A good one, but there are much better choices.

(Fūton: Senmōfū) - Wind Release: Rotating Ferocious Wind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user concentrates wind chakra into their sword/s and releases the chakra by slashing down infront of them to create a large gust of wind.

how about this?
 

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(Fūton: Senmōfū) - Wind Release: Rotating Ferocious Wind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user concentrates wind chakra into their sword/s and releases the chakra by slashing down infront of them to create a large gust of wind.

how about this?

Best of the lot. :p

Next..

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

Focus your katon chakra into your lungs, and then release it. As you release it, shape the chakra into a large fireball. When the fireball reaches my clone, explode the fireball, causing a massive maelstrom of fire.

-Creates clone-

I use..

(Doton: Iwa no Gōremu) – Earth Release: Stone Golem
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user expels a large creature composed of stone from his mouth. The rock golem has a fair amount of stamina and brute strength, being able to bite and tear off flesh with its mouth and hands respectively. If used from above the target then the user can use the earth golem to drop down onto the opponent like a bomb and crush them.
 

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Best of the lot. :p

Next..

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

Focus your katon chakra into your lungs, and then release it. As you release it, shape the chakra into a large fireball. When the fireball reaches my clone, explode the fireball, causing a massive maelstrom of fire.

-Creates clone-

I use..

(Doton: Iwa no Gōremu) – Earth Release: Stone Golem
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user expels a large creature composed of stone from his mouth. The rock golem has a fair amount of stamina and brute strength, being able to bite and tear off flesh with its mouth and hands respectively. If used from above the target then the user can use the earth golem to drop down onto the opponent like a bomb and crush them.

Lucky Guess :bouncy:
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- I focus my katon chakra into my lungs and concentrate it, before releasing it from my mouth. As i release it, using nature and shape manipulation respectively on the chakra, i change it's form into a large fireball and send it towards your clone. Upon reaching the clone, with my command, the fire ball explodes creating a large fire maelstrom engulfing the clone in it.-

Adv: The fire ball explodes upon contact so the target or the defensive wall will be blown away backwards. If the defensible jutsu covers a little area the, close to the opponent then the maelstrom of fire will get around it burning the opponent.

Dis: suppose i raise a pillar of D rank in the way of fire ball in the middle of the distance between me and my opponent, the fire ball will explode upon contact with the pillar, so the fire shouldn't reach me. or should it??
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Fast jutsu.
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Bad Move. The golem is quite small as seen in the five kage summit and also released from the mouth. if the golem is still close to the user then the fire will get around the golem also blast it backwards causing some damaged to the user.
 

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Lucky Guess :bouncy:
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- I focus my katon chakra into my lungs and concentrate it, before releasing it from my mouth. As i release it, using nature and shape manipulation respectively on the chakra, i change it's form into a large fireball and send it towards your clone. Upon reaching the clone, with my command, the fire ball explodes creating a large fire maelstrom engulfing the clone in it.-

Adv: The fire ball explodes upon contact so the target or the defensive wall will be blown away backwards. If the defensible jutsu covers a little area the, close to the opponent then the maelstrom of fire will get around it burning the opponent.

Dis: suppose i raise a pillar of D rank in the way of fire ball in the middle of the distance between me and my opponent, the fire ball will explode upon contact with the pillar, so the fire shouldn't reach me. or should it??
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Fast jutsu.
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Bad Move. The golem is quite small as seen in the five kage summit and also released from the mouth. if the golem is still close to the user then the fire will get around the golem also blast it backwards causing some damaged to the user.

The fiery shrapnel would go backwards and cut you, and your immediate vicinity would still be covered in fire.

Next..

(Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.

Focus and then knead your chakra in your body. Then stomp on the ground, releasing the chakra into the earth under you. Transform the chakra into fire, creating three pillars of fire in front of you. This should defend you from my summon who is flying close to the ground towards you.

-Summons Azure who flies at you-


I use..

( Suiton: Nagareru no Yari ) - Water Release: Flowing Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates crescent shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements attacking opponents infront of them or they can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around them.
 

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The fiery shrapnel would go backwards and cut you, and your immediate vicinity would still be covered in fire.

Next..

(Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.

Focus and then knead your chakra in your body. Then stomp on the ground, releasing the chakra into the earth under you. Transform the chakra into fire, creating three pillars of fire in front of you. This should defend you from my summon who is flying close to the ground towards you.

-Summons Azure who flies at you-


I use..

( Suiton: Nagareru no Yari ) - Water Release: Flowing Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates crescent shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements attacking opponents infront of them or they can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around them.

-I focus and then knead my fire type chakra inside my body and then stomp on the ground with my right foot. As i stomp, i release all the chakra into the ground under me.Then i transform the chakra into fire and shape it into 3 pillars which emerges from the ground infront of me. each of the pillars are several meter high. as azure flies at the me, the fire pillar acts as a defensive wall and blocks his path. the pillars block him and upon contact burning him partially.-

Adv: Good defense against attacks which covers a large area. Specially against flying summons and solid stones ect.

Dis: Like the jutsu you used, which path can be changed can't be properly blocked by this tech. That kind of jutsu will turn and avoid the pillars.

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Fast jutsu.
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Good counter as i said in the disadv.
 

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-I focus and then knead my fire type chakra inside my body and then stomp on the ground with my right foot. As i stomp, i release all the chakra into the ground under me.Then i transform the chakra into fire and shape it into 3 pillars which emerges from the ground infront of me. each of the pillars are several meter high. as azure flies at the me, the fire pillar acts as a defensive wall and blocks his path. the pillars block him and upon contact burning him partially.-

Adv: Good defense against attacks which covers a large area. Specially against flying summons and solid stones ect.

Dis: Like the jutsu you used, which path can be changed can't be properly blocked by this tech. That kind of jutsu will turn and avoid the pillars.

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Fast jutsu.
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Good counter as i said in the disadv.

You haven't learned shadow clone, right?
 

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Nope only C rank nin.

Alright, we'll skip that one then.

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(Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.

Focus your chakra, and then perform the Tiger hand seal. Release the chakra, change it into fire, and shape them into dragon headed fireballs. Compact the fire to the point where it takes on a solid aspect to the fire.

-Creates clone-


I use..

(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.
 

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Alright, we'll skip that one then.

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(Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.

Focus your chakra, and then perform the Tiger hand seal. Release the chakra, change it into fire, and shape them into dragon headed fireballs. Compact the fire to the point where it takes on a solid aspect to the fire.

-Creates clone-


I use..

(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.

I like it when s tech is being skipped xD.
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-I put my hand together and perform the tiger hand seal, then i compress a huge amount of chakra inside my body. As i expel the chakra, i change it into fire and shape it into dragon headed fire balls. using the chakra i concentrate the fire to the point where it's density resembles the same of a solid materiel. This also increases the temperature highly and send it towards your clone.-

Adv: The fire is very condensed as if a solid materiel. And the temperature is very high, even if a partial touch can burn the opponent. Sould be able to break through solid walls as well.

Dis: The fire can be deflected as a solid projectile unlike a stream of fire.
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Fast tech. Though it includes one hand seal.
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Good Counter. using the hand of the golem the fire balls can be deflected slightly and letting them pass while the golem attacks the opponent.
 

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I like it when s tech is being skipped xD.
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-I put my hand together and perform the tiger hand seal, then i compress a huge amount of chakra inside my body. As i expel the chakra, i change it into fire and shape it into dragon headed fire balls. using the chakra i concentrate the fire to the point where it's density resembles the same of a solid materiel. This also increases the temperature highly and send it towards your clone.-

Adv: The fire is very condensed as if a solid materiel. And the temperature is very high, even if a partial touch can burn the opponent. Sould be able to break through solid walls as well.

Dis: The fire can be deflected as a solid projectile unlike a stream of fire.
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Fast tech. Though it includes one hand seal.
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Good Counter. using the hand of the golem the fire balls can be deflected slightly and letting them pass while the golem attacks the opponent.

Correct, correct. A-ranks are finished. Perform a move like usual. :D
 

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Correct, correct. A-ranks are finished. Perform a move like usual. :D

-I focus my chakra inside my lungs and exhales a large fire ball aiming you. The fire ball upon contact will explode and engulf you inside a maelstrom of flames.-

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

-Just after releasing the fire ball, i stomp on the ground creating a tunnel between us. The 1st opening on the tunnel is right infront of me and the other part, is covered by a thin layer of ground over which you're standing. Then i release a strong fire inside the tunnel creating a large volume of lava inside. Then i perform a single hand seal causing the lava to erupt from the ground underneath you, engulfing you in lava. The burst will send you flying upwards while your body is covered by lava.-

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

Then i quickly slam my hands on the ground, summoning a huge amount of water in the sky above your head. The water will cool down the lava and turn them into solid rock making a burned, alive stone statue of your's. which them will fall inside the tunnel bellow.-


(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.
 

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-I focus my chakra inside my lungs and exhales a large fire ball aiming you. The fire ball upon contact will explode and engulf you inside a maelstrom of flames.-

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

-Just after releasing the fire ball, i stomp on the ground creating a tunnel between us. The 1st opening on the tunnel is right infront of me and the other part, is covered by a thin layer of ground over which you're standing. Then i release a strong fire inside the tunnel creating a large volume of lava inside. Then i perform a single hand seal causing the lava to erupt from the ground underneath you, engulfing you in lava. The burst will send you flying upwards while your body is covered by lava.-

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

Then i quickly slam my hands on the ground, summoning a huge amount of water in the sky above your head. The water will cool down the lava and turn them into solid rock making a burned, alive stone statue of your's. which them will fall inside the tunnel bellow.-


(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.[/spolier]
What do I say about forward techniques as a beginning move? ~_~
 

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So try again!! :dafq:

No way! read the full move will ya?

I used the first tech cause i needed time to perform the next jutsu. the jutsu however wull be stopped easily but it will explode upon contact with anything. so so i will stomp but no one could notice that. isn't that i awesome plan ??
 

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No way! read the full move will ya?

I used the first tech cause i needed time to perform the next jutsu. the jutsu however wull be stopped easily but it will explode upon contact with anything. so so i will stomp but no one could notice that. isn't that i awesome plan ??

-uses S-rank water to counter first tech, interrupting your entire move-


Try again. :)
 

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-uses S-rank water to counter first tech, interrupting your entire move-


Try again. :)

You you. :dunno:
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-Mugen strats by performing the following hand seals Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare. He then caused to emarge 4 pillars to raise around you, from each pillar, mugen send electrical bolts at you binding you in a place.-

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

- Mugen then quickly release a large fireball aiming you, the fire ball upon contact with you will explode and will burn you heavily.-

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.


-Just after releasing the fire ball, i stomp on the ground creating a tunnel between us. The 1st opening on the tunnel is right infront of me and the other part, is covered by a thin layer of ground over which you're standing. Then i release a strong fire inside the tunnel creating a large volume of lava inside. Then i perform a single hand seal causing the lava to erupt from the ground underneath you, engulfing you in lava. The burst will send you flying upwards while your body is covered by lava.-

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.
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Changed the 1st tech :p
 

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You you. :dunno:
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-Mugen strats by performing the following hand seals Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare. He then caused to emarge 4 pillars to raise around you, from each pillar, mugen send electrical bolts at you binding you in a place.-

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

- Mugen then quickly release a large fireball aiming you, the fire ball upon contact with you will explode and will burn you heavily.-

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.


-Just after releasing the fire ball, i stomp on the ground creating a tunnel between us. The 1st opening on the tunnel is right infront of me and the other part, is covered by a thin layer of ground over which you're standing. Then i release a strong fire inside the tunnel creating a large volume of lava inside. Then i perform a single hand seal causing the lava to erupt from the ground underneath you, engulfing you in lava. The burst will send you flying upwards while your body is covered by lava.-

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.
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Changed the 1st tech :p

Much better. S-ranks?!!
 
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