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629 - Unbeatable evil duo
[Obito and Madara are shown standing in front of Naruto and Kakashi along with some shinobi alliance. In background behind Madara and Obito are shown Alliance Shinobi fighting against Juubi, while Juubi is at rampage. Huge Stream of fire,large wave of water, wide chains of ligthinings, gigantic earth spikes, great spheres of wind and some more jutsu are flying at Juubi.]
Madara(calm): playtime is over, let's reconnect to Juubi
Obito: and then show them how futile their attacks are
Madara: to crash their hopes at least
(Obito and Madara smirk to each other with nodding their heads to each other while Naruto and Kakashi take battle stance after finishing talking with rest of shinobi )
Obito(smirks): let's create distraction and clear our path first
Madara(smiles): very well
(Madara weaves through few handseals with finishing at ram seal, suddenly many roots sprout from ground covering wide area impaling many Alliance shinobi, then raising some injured shinobi and lifeless bodies in air. Naruto changes to full bijuu mode form and try to cover how many shinobi he can with Kurama tails, destroying some deadly roots with bjuu dama barrage. Bijuu dama's barrage sent in all directions explode while destroying all roots in range. Huge smokescreen covering almost all battlefield occur. Impact of explosion, cause cracked rocks and rubble to shot off in all directions.)
Naruto(cover everyone and himself from flying rocks and rubble): Tsk !
Kakashi: shit, I can't even look through this smokescreen with my sharingan
(Smokescreen slowly dissappear, as clouds of dust are falling down on ground slowly fade away. many quite big craters are shown randomly placed around battlefield. Rocks and rubble stop shooting off ground as smokescreen completly clear up, revaling all battlefield. Naruto and Kakashi look at Madara and Obito were to notice lack of their pressence, while revaling many lifeless corpses hanging impaled on roots.)
Naruto(mad): so many deaths, Cursed Madara and Obito !
Kurama(shout): stay focused Naruto, you can't protect everyone even with my power !
Kakashi(put hand on Naruto shoulder): Naruto, don't loose focus. This may be horror but this is shinobi path
Naruto(pull his tails back, then changes back to Bijuu mode): Damn, they dissappeared. I will get them
Kakashi(calm and serious): worse I can't even find their presence, but I have idea where they could head
(Meanwhile, Obito teleported himself fast and Madara took off ground heading in Juubi direction right away after bijuu dama barage exploded creating huge smokescreen. Madara is shown runing in Juubi direction, being in half distance away from Naruto and Kakashi pressences. Smokescreen completly clear up, cause remaning shinobi who survived or escaped deadly roots to attack him. Immediately rain of shurikens and kunai was shot off in Madara direction backed up with strong elemental Ninjutsu and some Shinobi weapons, Madara spots all attacks incomming stops for moment before being hit by all attacks. Sealing shinobi squad is sent forward right away in Madara's direction to after smokescreen clear up notice Madara being unharmed while being cloaked by Full skeleton form Sussano, which changes to armored version in next second.)
Madara(cold tone): annoying bugs, fade away from this world
(Madara's armored Sussano swings it's two swords around, aim for all shinobi around including sealing shinobi squad. Before sealing Shinobi squad could react, Sussano'swords are already almost connecting with their bodies to be caught and pulled away in last second by Kurama's chakra arms. Madara notices sealing shinobi squad being rescued and out of Sussano range, with quite numbers of shinobi' cut bodies fall down on ground.)
Madara(annoyed): nine tails jinchurki again,(sigh) * doesn't matter, reconnecting to Juubi is only important now *
Naruto(breaths slowly ): uff, Everyone go and back up shinobi fighting Juubi and let me handle Madara myself.
Madara(emotionless): hmpf *yes follow me, Ninetails and soon you will be captured* (smirks)
(Madara's armored Sussano buckle it's knees than take off jumping high, Naruto took off after Madara. While all remaining shinobi are heading in Juubi direction to back up their comrades. )
(Meanwhile, yamanka clansmen are shown with their arms extended in Juubi direction. Some of them are knelling near their rest fallen clansmen bodies on ground. Suddenly air behind few of them begin to swirling revealing Obito from whirl, caught off guard unable to react Yamanka clansmen are throwing shurikens and kunai at Obito, but Obito become intangible cause all of shurikens and kunai passing through. Not giving even few seconds before they could even move, they find themselves few inch from Obito with roots extending from his arms. )
Obito: Die bugs !
Obito: ?!
(Before Obito roots can reach Yamanka clansmen they are cut by raikiri kept by Kakashi, who appeared in last second to rescue them. Kakashi is shown holding Obito's extended forward right hand with his left hand lowered to ground, then Kakashi try to imaple him with raikiri, extending his right hand with raikiri through Obito chest to pass through him again. Kakashi after passing through Obito is kicked in his back by Obito right away, cause Kakashi to fall forward.)
Obito(enraged): stop stepping in my way, trash !
Kakashi(in pain): ARGHH !
Obito(mad): I will wipe out all of you !
(Obito take deep breath while weaving through handseals with finishing at tiger seal as Obito breath huge amount of fire stream from his mouth, to be made swirling by using Kamui in next second. Ring of flames is expanding in all directions from Obito, burning all Yamanka and other Alliance Shinobi in it's path. Some of Alliance Shinobi even lucky by escaping in last moment are burnt and injured, Kakashi dissappear in last second in whirl.)
Obito(evil smirk): Fire release: schorching ring of flames !
Kakashi: Shit !
(Ring of flames slowly dissappear leaving smoking corpses laying around on ground, with some suriving badly burnt and injured, kneeling on ground in pain. Obito watches on his work with emotionless face, as he dissappear again in swirl.
Kakashi appear second later as he watches carnage made by Obito in Yamanaka clan, then clench his fists in anger as he dissappear in whirl again.)
(Meanwhile Madara and Naruto are shown clashing with each other. Madara is using complete Sussano unstabilized form against Naruto in full bijuu mode, naruto/kurama try to pierce through Madara with kurama right paw, but Madara's complete Sussano stop attack with it's one of arms while swinging anoother one with sword at Naruto/Kurama. Naruto/Kurama catch Sussano's sword with left paw blocking it's movement while standing on two hind paws because two forepaws are occupied with Madara's Sussano.)
(Elsewhere, Juubi is shown struggling to move, as many big shadows are comming from it to Nara clan memebers powered by kurama cloak. While Juubi is strugging to move, all Akamichi Shinobi with some of them completly turned in giants with rest of bodies partialy turned in gaint try to keep Juubi in place. Juubi is surronded by Cement prision while being attack by five elemental Ninjutsu one after another made by huge groups of shinobi. Killer bee in hachibi form is shown enveloping all Juubi legs with it's tentacles while having small bijuu dama in mouth prepared in emergency.)
(Madara spot Juubi being caught, then turns around in Sussano, while strugling with Naruto then take deep breath while weaving through few handseals finishing at tiger seal blowing gigantic wave of flames hitting distracted Shinobi. Before flames hit distracted Shinobi, Obito appear form whirl, shooting off roots in from his hands in all directions, piercing great numebrs of shinobi,killing them.)
Madara: Fire release: weave of flames !
Naruto: Oh, no. EVERYONE ESCAPE !
(Gigantic weave of flames created huge smokescreen covering great area of battlefield. After smokescreen clear up Juubi is shown on loose again with bijuu dama kept in it's mouth, while around of battlefield many casualites are seen laying dead, some are half of dead with rest being injured. Shinobi are looking in fear at Juubi aiming it's bijuu dama in at them. Obito use this opportunity and disappear then reappear close to Madara, then both of them dissapear in Obito whirl. Kakashi appear in front of very damaged Shinobi of Alliance army, try to rescue them somehow, Naruto distracted by Juubi bijuudama let Obito and Madara disappear as he is heading at flash speed to protect Kakashi and rest.)
Shinobi: WE ARE DOOMED !
Kakashi: Shit, it's quite big *I have to use all my chakra to send it, there is no other choice*
Obito: Madara, let's come
Madara: yeah
Naruto: *No I have to catch up to them before it will be too late. * NO !!
[One page showing all edo Hokages standing at their heads, then all of them + Taka gathered ready to leave in Konoha are shown in next panel.]
(Action comes back to Battlefield. Suddenly Juubi shoot it's bijuu dama, then powerfull explosion occur covering all battlefield. After smokescreen clear up, Naruto and Killer bee are shown bleeding back in normal state in front of Alliance Shinobi army, while Kakashi is shown with widden eyes and mouth wide opened.)
Naruto(with one eye closed): looks like I was able to make it in time (hehe)
Kurama: 20 minutes passed this time, if I was only complete then our connection would be unlimited by time
Killer Bee(struggling to standing with Samehada): that beast give us death taste
Gyuuki: Umm, bee it is bad
Kakashi: This can't be !
shinobi alliance: !
(In front of them Madara and Obito are standing at Juubi, ready reconnect. When Suddenly Juubi begin to glow and is enveloped by powerfull chakra/aura.)
Everyone: Shit just got real !
END
630 - Unreal Power shake World
I know it might be to long, but please read
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Legend:
() - actions
() - emotions
[] - descriptions of scenery/surrondings
** - thoughts
629 - Unbeatable evil duo
[Obito and Madara are shown standing in front of Naruto and Kakashi along with some shinobi alliance. In background behind Madara and Obito are shown Alliance Shinobi fighting against Juubi, while Juubi is at rampage. Huge Stream of fire,large wave of water, wide chains of ligthinings, gigantic earth spikes, great spheres of wind and some more jutsu are flying at Juubi.]
Madara(calm): playtime is over, let's reconnect to Juubi
Obito: and then show them how futile their attacks are
Madara: to crash their hopes at least
(Obito and Madara smirk to each other with nodding their heads to each other while Naruto and Kakashi take battle stance after finishing talking with rest of shinobi )
Obito(smirks): let's create distraction and clear our path first
Madara(smiles): very well
(Madara weaves through few handseals with finishing at ram seal, suddenly many roots sprout from ground covering wide area impaling many Alliance shinobi, then raising some injured shinobi and lifeless bodies in air. Naruto changes to full bijuu mode form and try to cover how many shinobi he can with Kurama tails, destroying some deadly roots with bjuu dama barrage. Bijuu dama's barrage sent in all directions explode while destroying all roots in range. Huge smokescreen covering almost all battlefield occur. Impact of explosion, cause cracked rocks and rubble to shot off in all directions.)
Naruto(cover everyone and himself from flying rocks and rubble): Tsk !
Kakashi: shit, I can't even look through this smokescreen with my sharingan
(Smokescreen slowly dissappear, as clouds of dust are falling down on ground slowly fade away. many quite big craters are shown randomly placed around battlefield. Rocks and rubble stop shooting off ground as smokescreen completly clear up, revaling all battlefield. Naruto and Kakashi look at Madara and Obito were to notice lack of their pressence, while revaling many lifeless corpses hanging impaled on roots.)
Naruto(mad): so many deaths, Cursed Madara and Obito !
Kurama(shout): stay focused Naruto, you can't protect everyone even with my power !
Kakashi(put hand on Naruto shoulder): Naruto, don't loose focus. This may be horror but this is shinobi path
Naruto(pull his tails back, then changes back to Bijuu mode): Damn, they dissappeared. I will get them
Kakashi(calm and serious): worse I can't even find their presence, but I have idea where they could head
(Meanwhile, Obito teleported himself fast and Madara took off ground heading in Juubi direction right away after bijuu dama barage exploded creating huge smokescreen. Madara is shown runing in Juubi direction, being in half distance away from Naruto and Kakashi pressences. Smokescreen completly clear up, cause remaning shinobi who survived or escaped deadly roots to attack him. Immediately rain of shurikens and kunai was shot off in Madara direction backed up with strong elemental Ninjutsu and some Shinobi weapons, Madara spots all attacks incomming stops for moment before being hit by all attacks. Sealing shinobi squad is sent forward right away in Madara's direction to after smokescreen clear up notice Madara being unharmed while being cloaked by Full skeleton form Sussano, which changes to armored version in next second.)
Madara(cold tone): annoying bugs, fade away from this world
(Madara's armored Sussano swings it's two swords around, aim for all shinobi around including sealing shinobi squad. Before sealing Shinobi squad could react, Sussano'swords are already almost connecting with their bodies to be caught and pulled away in last second by Kurama's chakra arms. Madara notices sealing shinobi squad being rescued and out of Sussano range, with quite numbers of shinobi' cut bodies fall down on ground.)
Madara(annoyed): nine tails jinchurki again,(sigh) * doesn't matter, reconnecting to Juubi is only important now *
Naruto(breaths slowly ): uff, Everyone go and back up shinobi fighting Juubi and let me handle Madara myself.
Madara(emotionless): hmpf *yes follow me, Ninetails and soon you will be captured* (smirks)
(Madara's armored Sussano buckle it's knees than take off jumping high, Naruto took off after Madara. While all remaining shinobi are heading in Juubi direction to back up their comrades. )
(Meanwhile, yamanka clansmen are shown with their arms extended in Juubi direction. Some of them are knelling near their rest fallen clansmen bodies on ground. Suddenly air behind few of them begin to swirling revealing Obito from whirl, caught off guard unable to react Yamanka clansmen are throwing shurikens and kunai at Obito, but Obito become intangible cause all of shurikens and kunai passing through. Not giving even few seconds before they could even move, they find themselves few inch from Obito with roots extending from his arms. )
Obito: Die bugs !
Obito: ?!
(Before Obito roots can reach Yamanka clansmen they are cut by raikiri kept by Kakashi, who appeared in last second to rescue them. Kakashi is shown holding Obito's extended forward right hand with his left hand lowered to ground, then Kakashi try to imaple him with raikiri, extending his right hand with raikiri through Obito chest to pass through him again. Kakashi after passing through Obito is kicked in his back by Obito right away, cause Kakashi to fall forward.)
Obito(enraged): stop stepping in my way, trash !
Kakashi(in pain): ARGHH !
Obito(mad): I will wipe out all of you !
(Obito take deep breath while weaving through handseals with finishing at tiger seal as Obito breath huge amount of fire stream from his mouth, to be made swirling by using Kamui in next second. Ring of flames is expanding in all directions from Obito, burning all Yamanka and other Alliance Shinobi in it's path. Some of Alliance Shinobi even lucky by escaping in last moment are burnt and injured, Kakashi dissappear in last second in whirl.)
Obito(evil smirk): Fire release: schorching ring of flames !
Kakashi: Shit !
(Ring of flames slowly dissappear leaving smoking corpses laying around on ground, with some suriving badly burnt and injured, kneeling on ground in pain. Obito watches on his work with emotionless face, as he dissappear again in swirl.
Kakashi appear second later as he watches carnage made by Obito in Yamanaka clan, then clench his fists in anger as he dissappear in whirl again.)
(Meanwhile Madara and Naruto are shown clashing with each other. Madara is using complete Sussano unstabilized form against Naruto in full bijuu mode, naruto/kurama try to pierce through Madara with kurama right paw, but Madara's complete Sussano stop attack with it's one of arms while swinging anoother one with sword at Naruto/Kurama. Naruto/Kurama catch Sussano's sword with left paw blocking it's movement while standing on two hind paws because two forepaws are occupied with Madara's Sussano.)
(Elsewhere, Juubi is shown struggling to move, as many big shadows are comming from it to Nara clan memebers powered by kurama cloak. While Juubi is strugging to move, all Akamichi Shinobi with some of them completly turned in giants with rest of bodies partialy turned in gaint try to keep Juubi in place. Juubi is surronded by Cement prision while being attack by five elemental Ninjutsu one after another made by huge groups of shinobi. Killer bee in hachibi form is shown enveloping all Juubi legs with it's tentacles while having small bijuu dama in mouth prepared in emergency.)
(Madara spot Juubi being caught, then turns around in Sussano, while strugling with Naruto then take deep breath while weaving through few handseals finishing at tiger seal blowing gigantic wave of flames hitting distracted Shinobi. Before flames hit distracted Shinobi, Obito appear form whirl, shooting off roots in from his hands in all directions, piercing great numebrs of shinobi,killing them.)
Madara: Fire release: weave of flames !
Naruto: Oh, no. EVERYONE ESCAPE !
(Gigantic weave of flames created huge smokescreen covering great area of battlefield. After smokescreen clear up Juubi is shown on loose again with bijuu dama kept in it's mouth, while around of battlefield many casualites are seen laying dead, some are half of dead with rest being injured. Shinobi are looking in fear at Juubi aiming it's bijuu dama in at them. Obito use this opportunity and disappear then reappear close to Madara, then both of them dissapear in Obito whirl. Kakashi appear in front of very damaged Shinobi of Alliance army, try to rescue them somehow, Naruto distracted by Juubi bijuudama let Obito and Madara disappear as he is heading at flash speed to protect Kakashi and rest.)
Shinobi: WE ARE DOOMED !
Kakashi: Shit, it's quite big *I have to use all my chakra to send it, there is no other choice*
Obito: Madara, let's come
Madara: yeah
Naruto: *No I have to catch up to them before it will be too late. * NO !!
[One page showing all edo Hokages standing at their heads, then all of them + Taka gathered ready to leave in Konoha are shown in next panel.]
(Action comes back to Battlefield. Suddenly Juubi shoot it's bijuu dama, then powerfull explosion occur covering all battlefield. After smokescreen clear up, Naruto and Killer bee are shown bleeding back in normal state in front of Alliance Shinobi army, while Kakashi is shown with widden eyes and mouth wide opened.)
Naruto(with one eye closed): looks like I was able to make it in time (hehe)
Kurama: 20 minutes passed this time, if I was only complete then our connection would be unlimited by time
Killer Bee(struggling to standing with Samehada): that beast give us death taste
Gyuuki: Umm, bee it is bad
Kakashi: This can't be !
shinobi alliance: !
(In front of them Madara and Obito are standing at Juubi, ready reconnect. When Suddenly Juubi begin to glow and is enveloped by powerfull chakra/aura.)
Everyone: Shit just got real !
END
630 - Unreal Power shake World
I know it might be to long, but please read
sorry for any grammar/typing mistakes
I hope you enjoyed reading it, and I look forward to get feedback, be it praise or criticism, just please share your thoughts
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