[Predictions] NARUTO MANGA 628 PREDICTION [by KCMNaruto]

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Legend:

() - actions
() - emotions
[] - descriptions of scenery/surrondings
** - thoughts

Description: begining of my prediction is this page:

628 - Way to defeat Evil duo

While Everyone is listening Hashirama'story, meanwhile somewhere at battlefield !

[Madara and Obito are standing in front of Naruto in Bijuu mode and surrounded by Shinobi Alliance randomly placed around them. In the background Juubi is shown with some Shinobi Alliance standing on it. Obito look enraged and begin to shout while Madara stay clam for a while, look at Naruto in front of him. Wind is blowing violently accros them cause moving their hear slowly as they are staring at each other. ]

Obito(enraged ): There is no way you can win, Uzumaki Naruto !
Madara(cold tone): Looks like we understimated you, Naruto and your Alliance no Jutsu
Naruto: It is too late to apologize, Madara and Obito. There is no way you can win ...
Kakashi(thinking): Don't let them reconnect with Juubi !
Madara(fast whisper): Obito, let's reconnect to Juubi fast !
Naruto(low tone then shout): no way, I won't let you.
Madara(smirks): You really thinks so ?!

(Suddenly swirling whirl is incomming at distracted Madara, who pull out his gunbai from behind his back and cover himself with it while placing it in front of his chest. Swirling whirl is pushing him slightly back while colliding with gunbai, but Madara reinforce his grip on gunbai and with more strength put thrown away swirling whirl, who is revaled to be Kiba in kurama cloak.)

Madara(calm): pathetic attempt

(Almost instant Madara find himself surrounded by bugs floating around him, swirling gunbai kept by his right hand around himself Madara thrown away all bugs, spoting Shino in kurama cloak in secnd to be almost caught by shadow incomming at him on ground in next second. )

Madara(annoyed): *cursed bugs, I will clean up this shit !* damn !

(Meanwhile Obito calm down himself and try to come up with new strategy, but suddenly is interrupted as spot huge fists incomming at him from above.)

Obito(spot huge fists): futile attempt !

(Obito leap back just in time avoiding powerfull smash by gigantic fists, who are revaled to belong to Giant Chouji in kurama cloak. Obito barerly catch a breath but suddenly he spot female fists comming from his side at him, he avoids it just in last second thanks to his sharingan while leaning back.)

Obito(caught off guard): what ?!

(Female fists revaled to belong to Hinata's in kurama cloak are following after him, forcing Obito to leap even futher back. Suddenly while continue to leaping back Obito spot Ino with angle of his sharingan, who has hands connected with each other in shape similliar to triangle aimed in his direction.)

Obito(enraged): *that hands formation, Yamanaka !* Shit !

(Madara just leap back in time to notices shadow comming after him still, then he raises his head for moment to spot Shikamaru smirking at him. Suddenly Madara is kicked up in air, barerly having time to put his both hands crossed in front of himself as he spot Lee in kurama cloak on ground with stretched leg in air, then second later another green beast appear above him to kick him down, but this time Madara fast place his gunabi in front of himself, cause when kick connect with his gunbai to thrown away this green beast revealed to be Gai in kurama cloak. Sheer strength behind Gai'kick send Madara flying down, who land on ground in kneeling position. Catching his breath he spot annoying shadow to follow after him as he continue to leap back.)

Madara(calm): *Annoying weaklings, I can't even focus my chakra as they keep attacking one after another* these worms work on my nerves

(Meanwhile Obito try to dissappear before Hinata's gentle taijutsu could reach him, but in last second Obito spot Sakura falling from above, just few inch from his face forcing Obito to become itangible in last second to let Sakura pass through him and avoid damage she has done landing her leg smashing in ground cause to ground to shake and cracking, creating small crater. Obito becomes tangible again as he try to attack Sakura, but instead is forced to avoid incomming Hinata gentle fist. After dodge Obito continue leaping back with Hinata comming after him from left side and Saukra join comming from right side.)

Obito(mad): *These unending attacks, I can't even counter damn* shit !

(Obito and Madara continue leap back leading them closer and closer with their attackers following after them. Suddenly Obito and Madara hit each other with their backs turned to each other. Suddenly Hinata and Sakura stop moving just few meters from Obito, with shadow stopping few inch from Madara. )

Obito(spot Madara behind himself): ?! *what they are plotting ?!, I will fade in ground*
Madara(spot Obito behind himsef) ?! *what is their strategy ?!, I will use my Sussano*

(Distracted Obito and madara suddenly find their answers, as they hear some words "Shin", while spotting Ino and other Yamanka with arms stretched in their directions formed in triangle shape. Before Madara and Obito could react physically Ino and other Yamanka fnish their sentence, activating Mind Body Switch Technique in same second as Obito grab Madara back with his right hand, cause both of them to become itangible just second before Mind Body Switch Technique could reach them, which cause Ino's and other yamanka's bodies fall down on ground. )

Madara,Obito: *It was close !*
Madara(cold tone): let's show them our power
Obito(enraged): They will pay for that !

(Obito and Madara become tangible again, as Obito and Madara weaves through few handseals at great speed cause spiky roots sprouting from ground around them, forcing Hinata and Sakura to jump back from them. Obito unleashes then more roots at still fallen Yamanka bodies which are blocked in last second by Hinata's rotation and Sakura punches and kicks. )

Obito: let's clean annoying crap first !

(Suddenly Kakashi appear behind Obito with his raikiri chirpping in has right hand as he is about to pierce Obito with it.)

(Before Kakashi's raikiri can came in contact with Obito, suddenly Obito is cloaked by Sussano full skeleton along with Madara as Madara smirks evilly at shocked Kakashi's face expression.)

Madara
(smirks): this won't be that easy

(Obito spot Kakashi as he turns around while stretch root from his arm ready to strike Kakashi.)

Obito(mad): That is your end Kakashi !

(Suddenly Kakashi is pulled back by kurama chakra arm comming from Naruto with another keeping mini bijuudama aimed straight at distracted Obito being out of Sussano range. )

Kakashi(look behind): ?! *Naruto !, I am safe*
Naruto(look at Obito): got you !
Obito(schocked): No way !

(Before Naruto mini bijudama could connect with Obito, suddenly Naruto spot Sussano's big arm stretched form madara's Sussano come down at him fast )

Naruto(spot Sussano big hand): shit !

(Naruto leap at side, cause him to lose focus for few seconds on his kurama's chakra arms, allowing Obito to become intangible in last second, while avoiding Sussano's hand smash humself. From all these battle impacts huge somescreen occur, covering partialy Uchiha duos as well as Shinobi Alliance, while Kakashi land close to Naruto.)

Kakashi(concerned): It looks like they can coperate along very well to help themselves..., it won't be easy
Naruto(worried and serious): I noticed it, they are able to support each other very well, covering each other back and any weakness we can explore.

Madara
(annoyed and angered): I can't believe that they are giving us so much trouble
Obito(eraged then slowly calm down): there is too many of them, they have us outnumbered...
Madara: They are working at our nerves, although we can go all out now. We have to be on guard and be prepared for whatever they may plan. it looks like Juubi is at rampage (look behind himself)

[In the background, Juubi is shown at rampage, shooting lasers at Shinobi Alliance, who divded in few great squads are shown shooting huge fire stream, huge wave of water, huge ball of wind, large earth spikes, big lightining bolts, all these jutsu covering huge area incomming at Juubi. ]

[In meanwhile somewhere at Konoha. *Flashback for use readers, but normal in flow of manga*Hashirama finished telling his story, and now is asking Sasuke's for answers.]

(Back at Battlefield. Naruto and Kakashi are shown thinking, while being surronded by many alliance shinobi around them. Madara and Obito finish their talking as they are staring now at Naruto and Kakashi along with Shinobi Alliance. )

Kakashi(thinking): *They are really hard to defeat..., what can we do*
Naruto: Kakashi-sensei, do you have any plan ?
Kakashi: they are supporting each other very well, I can't find simply solution
Naruto: That it, if we could separate them, it would be easier
(Suddenly Naruto realizes himself what he just said as Kakashi was looking at him back smilling)

Kakashi
: That exactly what we will do Naruto, let's separate them and
Naruto: defeat as they won't have each other support !

(Madara and Obito cold facial expressions are shown, as they are calm while staring at Naruto, Kakashi along with some alliance Shinobi around them. )

(Closure of Madara's and Obito's postures, with wind blowing violently their clothes as well as moving their hairs. Naruto's and Kakashi's worried faces are shown. )

Will it really be that easy as it sounds ?

END

629 - Unbeatable evil duo ...

Sorry if it is too long, I hope you enjoy reading it :)

Sorry for any grammar/typing mistakes

Please give me feedback :)
 
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628 will be back to the 5 kage and tsunade
maybe I am not sure, anway I wanted to show what was happening at battlefield while hashirama was telling his flashback more then showing half dead five kages, but you may be right.

From last chapter it can go in many directions so it's up to Kishi
 

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the dialogue of the characters does not suit them

Kakashi(thinking): *why they stay there still, ?! they are plaining to reconnet to Juubi ! I have to tell them* ?!
Madara(fast whisper): Obito, let's reconnect to Juubi fast !
this does not seen like what the characters would do, it's obvious that they would want to reconnect to the juubi, and there would be no need to tell everyone.

the characters actions feel very bad. kakashi saying die but thinking sorry?
the number of times obito says "shit!"

i think you rushed this without thinking of how the characters would behave

good attempt though
 
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the dialogue of the characters does not suit them



this does not seen like what the characters would do, it's obvious that they would want to reconnect to the juubi, and there would be no need to tell everyone.

the characters actions feel very bad. kakashi saying die but thinking sorry?
the number of times obito says "shit!"

i think you rushed this without thinking of how the characters would behave

good attempt though

Thanks a lot for your input and constructive feedback even if criticism.

I will try to fix it later :), and now I know at what aspects of writing prediction I have to work

I will try to improve my predictions and make them more and more enjoyable :)
 
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Please give me more feedback guys, even if it is criticism, it means a lot for me.

Like or dislike, no matter just share your opinion with me :)

I will work on my weak sides in writing predictions so I can write better and more enjoyable prediction in future :)

Thanks a lot for help
 

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I really, really enjoy your predictions. Unlike a lot of people here, I don't have a short attention span so I read long threads and yours always have good substance. I have a very imaginative mind so I can visualize your entire prediction :). This makes it more enjoyable.
 

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I really, really enjoy your predictions. Unlike a lot of people here, I don't have a short attention span so I read long threads and yours always have good substance. I have a very imaginative mind so I can visualize your entire prediction :). This makes it more enjoyable.
thanks a lot for your input friend :), yeah I know people are lazy to read something long especially if begining of it is boring or doesn't pull their attention even if later action is developing and entertaining. Congrutalation with great imagination I know it help visualize entire prediction , especially when I always try to describe manga pictures with text in addition to standard dialogs and actions.

I appreciate your feedback sir
 
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I really liked the amount of action you put in this chapter. It was also an interesting read because you didn't incorporate the kages entering the battlefield quite yet. We also had the same idea to separate Obito and Madara in order to win haha. Good attempt man
 
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I really liked the amount of action you put in this chapter. It was also an interesting read because you didn't incorporate the kages entering the battlefield quite yet. We also had the same idea to separate Obito and Madara in order to win haha. Good attempt man
Thanks a lot for your input. Yeah I focused mainly on action which could show what was happening at battlefield , while Hashirama was telling his story, cause these both Hashirama telling his story and action on battlefield to was happening at the same time.

I hope Kishi won't skip all action on battlefield and just make Kage entering battlefield but instead rewind back in time, showing us what was happening on battlefield while Hashirama was talking, showing us that both actions was happening at the same time with normal flows on manga.

Yeah Madara and Obito cooperating and supporting each other could be very hard to defeat, especially that they could cover each other weakness, so I came with idea of separating them as this is the most simple strategy to win against two expletive each other enemies :)

Your Welcome, and you prediction was epic too, I read it already ;)

I encourage you to read continuation of my prediction as well:

Great minds think alike ;)
 

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Nice prediction you put a great amount of thought in it ..... but somehow it was a little hard to read don't know why but other than that it was epic
It was little hard to read maybe cause I chose no simply words to describe actions, moreover maybe it added too much content in just each scene/action. However I did it on purpouse, trying to let's visualize pictures(scans of manga) with words(surronding, background, enviroment) then focus on presenting actions well to could show reader picture with all details of each action. Some dialogs may not fit characters too, but I was trying my best and i hope to improve with each next prediction.

Moreover english is not my first language, and although I can write and speak in english, I still make grammar/typing mistakes while writting especially with so much content. ;)

Thanks a lot for your input sir :), I really appreciate your opinion

EDIT: If you have time and will I encourage you to read my continuation here:

Have a nice day
 
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