As Zero-sensei announces its time for a little freeforn taijutsu, I waste no time and start running towards Fusion, as I come within short range from him, I jump up into the air and make a front flip, as I then drop down above fusion, I hold out my right leg and drop down with the heel of my right foot over his skull.
Simple. An advance, a jump and a heel-drop. The description's a bit clumsy, but you mention which leg you use and where you aim it. Good.
*As I see you run to me, i then run to you as you jump to make a front flip. Before you can even jump over me, I grab you leg and slam you on the ground infront of me. Thinking that you can even do anything to me, i then knee you on your leg, causing it to be shattered. I then stomp on your stomach as i repeatedly do so. Now that you have blood all over your face, i then take my cigar out of my mouth and throw it at your face as i stomp on it also.
A counter-charge followed by... what?
The 'timeline' looks as such in Yashiro's move:
-Charge
-Jump
-Jump turns into flip.
-In the middle of the flip, his right leg's stretched out.
-Right leg's smashed towards your skull.
In
your move, however, you 'grab' an
unspecified leg
before the flip's even initiated. That's not really a terrible problem though, the problem's when you 'slam Yashiro into the ground before you'. How do you do that to a guy who
just jumped?
The bolded part is, eh, wut?
And then you use an unspecified knee to 'knee' Yashiro's unspecified leg.
You're not describing your counter-attack; you're describing a beatdown.
As you grab my leg and slam me to the ground I notice that you are about to give me a knee drop to the leg, as you are about to drop down with your knee I slip my foot behind your other leg and trip you, by doing that I bring you down to the ground on your back, I then take my other leg and slam it to your chest as you are dropping to the ground and slam you into the earth leaving dust all around us.
You take the damage, I can respect that... but are your legs made of rubber? Say you're 'slammed to the ground'. You'd probably be lying on your back, no? He leans forwards, lifts his leg and shits more weight onto the 'earthbound' leg...
How do you 'slip your foot behind' that? And even if you can generate enough pressure to trip him over, chances are that he'll fall forwards due to the fact that he's
moving his weight towards you, in trying to 'knee' you.
You'd end up in a mighty uncomfortable position, boys.
You should've just gone with the simple kick to the chest you describe later.
*As i see your one leg slip through my other leg, i then continue to knee your leg with my other leg while putting my leg up to avoid your foot from tripping me. I then smash my foot on you ankles, causing you to lose your mobility. I then look at you for a moment as i leave to sit on a rock.
"I went to far with this one.... Zero-San's gonna kill me.."
This is what happens when limbs aren't specified... seriously, read that sentence three times in quick succession and you'll choke.
And you're putting your leg up to avoid being tripped? What?
WHATWHATWHATWHAT?
Your description doesn't make what you are trying to do possible, If you continue with the knee drop then you won't be able to lift up your other leg.
How are you able to give a knee drop and jump up at the same time? Doesn't make sense U_U
The underlined part also is a bit vague, for my foot is moving at a fast pace for enough power to trip you, if you then jump up (which is the right way as you are on 1 leg) my foot will be moving to fast away for you to catch it and slam me on the ankles.
And here comes the arguing. Both of you are on thin ice, really. There's no case for either of you because the
both of you popped cyanide in Grandpa's spaghetti.
Look through the Taijutsu-list. Pick one technique from either the E-ranked, D-ranked or C-ranked ones and attempt to perform it.