i wouldn´t go that far as saying a style sucks or whataver. Uhm, the stsylke of which we are speaking is your likeness towards a drawing character metrhod used in japanese manga and anime, mostly inthe 70´s.
Those elonged characters, hyperdetailed eyes, mercy praying faces and so on is part of "Candy, Candy", the geometric profiling "Astroboy", etc.
I f you´re looking to develop you´re aiming quite properly to assimilate maybe whataver´s been done in manga already is a good way to be yourself.
As much as you cover with clothes your characters, it´ll still tell me some of the proportions are wrong, so covering up never works

with FASHION
Try working out something, a scene, characters and colours that reflect something "you" are feeling.
Nice work, brave for showing. Though, not in the proper section xD