My English homework xD

[Loome]

This is my English homework. Got 10/10 for this xD. We had to summarize our favourite animated series.
Meanwhile, evil me spoiled the revival of the Hokages to my best friend, that hasnt Internet since January.
Ehehehe xD
Btw, English is not my main language. I am in the 8th grade, the 5th year of studying English. So if there is any mistake, feel free to correct it. My teacher asked me to read it aloud, so she couldnt correct every single mistake.

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[Kages]

Haha there were barely any errors.

 

[NeverEnding]

Yep you'll get an A for sure!!!

 

[Loome]

Yep you'll get an A for sure!!!

In my country(Romania) the highest grade is 10, the lowest is 1.
And I got 10 for this xD.

 

[Jobrjo]

Well done

 

[HashiramaDescendant]

I'm sure it's great. Sorry, I hate reading cursive writing.
It's sort of exhausting. xD

 

[Filo]

Good job! Great summary for a 2 page essay!

 

[chitrambanerjee87]

You would do great in both English and Narutology ...

 

[Loome]

Really? You dont write with cursive?
My handwriting is somewhere between cursive and normal. In my country, the 8th graders are obligated to write in cursive to get the highest grade in Literature and Grammar exam.

 

[alexu9696]

This is my English homework. Got 10/10 for this xD. We had to summarize our favourite animated series.
Meanwhile, evil me spoiled the revival of the Hokages to my best friend, that hasnt Internet since January.
Ehehehe xD
Btw, English is not my main language. I am in the 8th grade, the 5th year of studying English. So if there is any mistake, feel free to correct it. My teacher asked me to read it aloud, so she couldnt correct every single mistake.

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i always get 10 at english , the language is to simple !!!

I wish to see a english guy learning romanian language !! They would learn it in more then 2 years because our language is very hard

i am from romania to so..... bravo tie

 

[Codawg]

Well done, for English not being your main language, it was well written. Cursive's not really a big thing for some places anymore, though I wish calligraphy was pushed more :/

 

[Voltron]

good job!
couple of corrections:
might want to say "throughout" instead of through
say "older brother" instead of "his brother" (could refer to SO6P)
"A long time after this" just needed an A
Village hidden in the leaves. might want to make an apositive....where the main character, Naruto Uzumaki, was born.....
~Out of time~ XD
OT: Nice summary. a bit short.... it's kinda hard to summarize in two pages... XD
well done!

 

[ThatWeirdGuy]

Lmao, not bad :scorps:

 

[Zee Seh]

nicely summarised the story...

 

[Yusuke Urameshi]

As a fellow NarutoTard, I don't know whether to be proud or sad after reading that. lol Good job, nonetheless.

 

[HashiramaDescendant]

Really? You dont write with cursive?
My handwriting is somewhere between cursive and normal. In my country, the 8th graders are obligated to write in cursive to get the highest grade in Literature and Grammar exam.

Not when I don't have to. xD
I only write in cursive when I'm signing something. Other than that, it's print... With a few fancy curves here and there.

 

[Altaneen]

The only error I can pick out of that isn't anything to do with an English class lol. The So6P did not create the 10tails, beyond that, I could not see any errors that would matter for your class.I had a hard time reading it though, so I can't be sure.

 

[Machiko]

Your handwriting.... is exceptionally beautiful (for being a guy xD)

 

[Loome]

Your handwriting.... is exceptionally beautiful (for being a guy xD)

I am a girl... T_T

 

[Loome]

The only error I can pick out of that isn't anything to do with an English class lol. The So6P did not create the 10tails, beyond that, I could not see any errors that would matter for your class.I had a hard time reading it though, so I can't be sure.

I wanted to make him look like a bigger badass than he is xD