honestly..not ur best work fk...
first of all, the depth, you added to much blur to the BG, so it looks flat,....therefore, no depth
another thing that messed up the depth is that its empty, pretty much all around the render
the bullets are the sources emitting the light, so the placement of the lighting is good
BUT, the lighting on the render is too exaggerated, the light isn't that bright to completely change the color of the render
and did you sharpen the render? or saturate it?.....i don't like that, don't sharpen or saturate unless you're trying to fix the focal or render quality......if u did, then u overdid it
as for the flow of the overall sig,...its good...but i cant really judge the flow of it, since its empty.IMO
keep improving fk
