Naruto Chpater 622 Review (~Madara Uchiha~)

~Madara Uchiha~

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Hello Again...

Well Everyone another Wednesday has come.... Luckily the world has not ended or Kishi has not mysteriously died.... Lets just get right into it shall we?




Overview

-So the chapter starts off with Madara again asking who the boy is.... He tells them its Hashirama but says he cant tell him his "Surname" I suppose meaning full name
-Madara then tries again at throwing the stone but doesn't make it over again lol But Hashirama observes the way he threw it and infers that hes a Shinobi that must be good at handling Shuriken.... I would've never been able to infer that xD
-Madara gets really pissed and almost reminds me of Naruto's personality when he gets upset.... He blames it on Hashirama..... Hashirama distracted him by standing behind him while he threw it.... Madara is apparently sensitive when people are standing behind him xD
-Hashirama saddens and apologizes to Madara but Madara tells him that its alright and that he was just making an excuse... Wow Madara admitting to this is soooo not Madara
-Madara then says that hes confused and can never tell if hes a good guy or bad guy.... Hashirama responds back "But you do understand that I'm better at stone skipping!" Hashirama-1 Madara-0 xD Madara then says he use him next time..lol
-Hashirama gets sad... again and apologizes again and says he didnt want to make him angry and that hes prepared to be thrown into the river to make up for it.... ok seriously what a drama queen -_- .... But then Hashirama says this "I just hope i can make it over to the other side" Bwahahahh Hashirama....
-Madara tells him that he cant stand him and tells him to go away.... Hashirama excepts and starts walking away.... Madara tells him to stay.... they then spot a body that I guess floated down the river..... Hashirama runs out to check the body.. Madara suprised by this because hes walking on water infers as well that Hashirama could be a Shinobi
-Hashirama tells Madara that the war is going to be at the river soon and tells him to go home.... He also infers by the funky looking Symbol on the Ninjas cloths that hes from the "Hagoromo Clan"
-He then jumps off saying bye to Madara... Madara then finally reveals to Hashirama his name and says the same thing.... He cant reveal his surname to a stranger as well.... Madara then states that this is one of the Shinobi rules..
-Then I suppose we go back to Hashirama speaking in the present... saying that they had different personalities but somehow he felt close to him there... and that he also understood why he came to the river...
-We then move to a scene of graves and Hashirama saying someone's name.... "Kawarama"
- Someone with black and white hair is crying and we also see Hashirama,What appears to be Tobirama, and what looks like a more mean looking version of Hashirama..
-Mean Hashirama tells the black and white haired kid that Shinobi's don't cry and that every Shinobi is born to fight to the death... He tells him that he should be lucky they at least a part of his body... wow just.... wow
-Hashirama states that Kawarama was only 7 and asks hoe long will the war drag on...
-Mean Hasirama states that until they eliminate their enemies... the journey to peace will be very difficult... Hashirama snaps back... telling him that in order to achieve that they must kill children...
-Hashirama then gets a punch to the face :0 holy shi*
-He then yells back that he wont allow Hashirama to insult Kawarama... He tells him that he was a worthy Shinobi that died fighting not a child...
-The boy with black and white hair then asks him if "Brother Hashirama" is alright so i guess that tells us that they are related... Tobirama makes a smart a** remark telling Hashirama that he should know what heppens when you oppose "Father" hmmm Hashirama's looks with a little of Tobirama's personality and way of thinking.... shouldve guessed it at first
-Hashirama is then thinking to himself that he doesnt want to loose his brothers Tobirama and Itama in vain as well.... so the black and white haired boy is Itama... You know what sorry to get off topic but Itami's hair seeing it black and whit in this image almost reminds me of Zetsu.... Probably just me lol
-Hashirama then yells back at his father telling him... How can you say that the Senju are full of love and what is a worthy Shinobi...
-He tells him that both Uchiha and Senju are just ganging adults up and sending children out to fight to their deaths... both clans are not different...
-Their father tells them that its respect for their opponent... no matter if its a child with weapons its still and enemy.... and turning children into worthy Shinobi only means that you love them..... Well spoken u-u
-Hashirama snaps back again asking him if you have to die to become a worthy Shinobi.... That you just kill and get killed without even knowing where it started from.... that you cant even say your surname because its dangerous...
-This really pisses of his father.... Hashirama then finishes telling him that the World of Shinobi is definitely wrong... His father responds back telling him that its people like you that are called kids....
-His father is running at him.... but Tobirama stops him and tells him that Hashirama is just depressed and to forgive him.... His father tells Hashirama to cool down.... umm I think you both need to cool down here have some icecream :ice:
-We then go to the 3 of them alone... Tobirama is then saying.... Adults are stupid... if they really want to stop the War they should just make and agreement with the Enemy... Itama then says... Then what about your relatives,comrade's, or chagrin... I Honestly don't know what chagrin is xD
-Tobirama tells him he will die if he continues to think like that.... and i think he does die because why are we just now hearing about this guy...
-Tobirama goes on telling Hashirama.... that him and the adults are getting to fired up and that Shinobi should just suppress their feelings and make rules and abide by them... I usually agree with Tobirama but im going to say no on this one
-Hashirama then says that he wonders if its possible to form a real agreement... and alliance... Both Brothers are shocked by what he says....
-He starts talking about Shinobi's life span and how it has been lowered to the age of 30.... why is that... we go to a what looks like Itama a bit fast forwarded to the future and hes surrounded by Uchiha.... then what looks like Hashirama and 2 other Shinobi beside him jump down but are too late... Hashirama from the present then says Itama was the death the many children....
-Then we go back ways... because Hashirama looks younger.... We see him sitting in front of the river... Madara walks up behind him saying hi and he says its been awhile....
-Madara then tells him hes already depressed this time... He asks him what is wrong but Hashirama comes back saying nothing is wrong.... but Madara comes back telling him that's a lie... we go back and forth until Madara finally yells asking whats really up lol
-Hashirama tells him his younger brother died.... and the reason he came here is because when he watches the river... he feels like his vague feelings are just carried away... :,(
-Hashirama then tells him that he thought it was the same for him too... and he asks Madara if he has siblings.... Madara responds back saying he has 4 :0 holy sh** 4 brothers!?!?!?
-He then stands up with another stone.. he then says that he "had them" so I guess only Madara and Izuna lived through the war.... He goes on saying that they are both Shinobi and can die at any time... The only way to not die is to show our true feelings to their enemy without hiding anything... and become allies with them... but he says that thats not possible because its not possible to see someone's true feelings deep down inside... You dont even know if they seethe at all.... once again i have know intelligence and have no clue what seethe means xD
-Hashirama asks if its really impossible to show your true thoughts... Madara Responds back telling he doesnt know but he comes to the river every day in hope that a way exists... He tosses the stone and is able to make it to the other side... Go Madara!
-Madara finishes telling him that this time.. it finally looks like their is one..... at last not only you but i got to the other side as well.... Beautiful Speech Madara u_u



Questions and Thoughts

~In this chapter we see Madara's true feelings.... and they really did surprise me... In this chapter we see him striving towards understatement and peace between the clans.... When did this change?
~What happened to Madara's other 2 brothers?
~Is Itama in any way related to Zetsu? (Just thought id throw this question in the spice it up lol)
~Could Madara's backside be his weakness and the key to defeating him in the War xD

Honestly i couldn't think of many questions for this chapter I mean to me it was pretty straight froward... It was quite a long chapter with a lot of dialogue but i hope you take the time to read it :)


Rating

:headband: :headband: :headband: :headband: :headband: ~ Im giving this 5 headbands... yes it was a lot of dialogue and no action but i believe it was definitely necessary U_U I hope Kishi takes his time with this... Id like to see more Anyways I really enjoyed seeing Madara and Hashirama as friends and seeing both of their personalities... I also enjoyed the convo between Hashirama's Father and the 3 brothers... Overall Awesome Chapter :cool:



Top Comments From Last Review

Hashirama's god tech made Kurama and PS look like trash <.<
This was my favourite page: . Five mountain tops sliced with a shock wave.


Question of the Week

Which part did you enjoy more.... The convo between Hashirama and his father or Madara's Speech at the very end?


Previous Reviews

Chapter 621 Review-
Chapter 620 Review-


Thanks for Reading
As always Narutobase if you took the time to read it thanks :) Sorry for the long chapter I apologies but it was 18 pages chocked full of dialogue that needed to be covered :eek: Anyways thanks and please give me feedback on the chapter... things I did well on things I can improve on stuff like that... Also Please Answer Question of the day xD and dont be afraid to share your thoughts on the chapter I really enjoy reading them until next time Narutobase ;)
 

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Beat you to rating the review!! xd
so you don't have to vm me.... good review! I would give it 5 stars
well, my favorite part was the end where madara and hashirama are drawing closer
 

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Its too long man. While reviewing you don't have to tell every little detail. Not trying to tell you what to do but this is one way of talking [writing] about it



Nice effort though.
 

~Madara Uchiha~

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Beat you to rating the review!! xd
so you don't have to vm me.... good review! I would give it 5 stars
well, my favorite part was the end where madara and hashirama are drawing closer
sorry didnt read but 622 = boring
dude it was tooooooo long... but i read it half.... nice review..
Its too long man. While reviewing you don't have to tell every little detail. Not trying to tell you what to do but this is one way of talking [writing] about it



Nice effort though.
1. Nice i would say the same
2. Im sorry you feel that way and please you dont have to waste your time telling me you didnt read it :)
3. Yah :eek:
4. Yes This is something i could definitely work on thanks for the feedback man ill try to improve :) I love Sawyer's reviews by the way :p
 

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Read most of it... good review... but just one wall of text. Try to use paragraph's, please :) more clearly... This kind of writing is ok, when writing a story, but then still... speech is accented. Try to create pauses for you audience...
 
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Its too long man. While reviewing you don't have to tell every little detail. Not trying to tell you what to do but this is one way of talking [writing] about it



Nice effort though.
Not nice effort it's good job. I personally don't like watching a video of some random person talking, much better reading it. Awesome Review Madara.
 
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Frankly, Who the f cares about how they grew up? We already had enough back story of how the clans didnt like each other and how the village came to be. It's like every single fight has a flashback that lasts at least three chapters that equals three wasted weeks. Cant they just fight with the info we already know? Does every single detail need to be adressed to the point that the story drags on? Why can madara just be evil because thats just how he is? Every character dosent need a reason for every thing. This flashback will probaly last atleast two more weeks but who cares? Its got nothing to do with whats going on in the plot. Just answer sasukes question and move on! (rant over.)
 

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As always good review bro.. U put in some sense of comedy that makes your review good..

Anyway next time try to break into point of paragraph ok cos this way makes it too long.. Good job madara :D
 
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