Check this out guys

[NarutAwesome]

Check this out guys, I recently wrote this for a girl that I met recently, it happened just like this, jk, but I met her when I was playing ball in front of my house....she seemed sad and I asked her why and we started talking ever since
check it out

Spoiler

It was an ordinary day
I was playing ball and shooting hoops
when this pretty girl passed my way
like an angel out of the blue
and I stopped and I waved
she smiled back and said hey
and as she walked away my mouth opened to say

“Hey Girl,
Do you know the language the love
it’s when
two hearts speak and can rise above
from the sadness and the pain
and everything else in this world

So do you know the language of love
cause our
hearts can rise into the sky above
and we can stop the time and pain
and listen to the words our hearts can sing”

yeah

so she turned back to me
and I saw tears roll down her cheek
and she asked me
about the pain- in her heart that I could see

and I walked up to her
and said, i didn’t have to question what my heart felt first
cause I felt the pain your heart
and saw the love that you lost

“Girl
you know the language the love
it’s when
two hearts speak and can rise above
from the sadness and the pain
and everything else in this world

And I know the language of love
cause our
hearts can rise into the sky above
and we can stop the time and the pain
and listen to the words our hearts can sing”

And that was when she told me
she left him cause of in-fi-del-la-t (infidelity)
cause he broke her heart
And I said, “Then I’ll put it back together piece by piece.


“Cause Girl
you know the language the love
it’s when
two hearts speak and can rise above
from the sadness and the pain
and everything else in this world

And I know the language of love
cause our
hearts can rise into the sky above
and we can stop the time and the pain
and listen to the words our hearts can sing”

“Cause Girl
you know the language the love
it’s when
two hearts speak and can rise above
from the sadness and the pain
and everything else in this world

And I know the language of love
cause our
hearts can rise into the sky above
and we can stop the time and the pain
and listen to the words our hearts can sing”

 

[-Raviel-]

U get to second base with her?

 

[John Lucifer]

nice

 

[SEEDLESS]

fresh meat! awesome foo yah foo!!! =]

 

[NarutAwesome]

U get to second base with her?

not yet, but that's the plan, jk, she's still depressed, i met her last week, lol

 

[NarutAwesome]

fresh meat! awesome foo yah foo!!! =]

lol

 

[Ciao]

I already wrote the music to go with it. In my head of course.

 

[Outrageous]

That's good.

 

[Chibiusa]

Aww <3

That's so cute or whatever likee

 

[DrProof]

I've actually done the same thing. If I can find the song in my computer I'd link it to you.

OT: It's a great song, and I hope you get to Second Base with her. Don't strike out.

 

[NarutAwesome]

I already wrote the music to go with it. In my head of course.

lol, that's awesome

 

[NarutAwesome]

I've actually done the same thing. If I can find the song in my computer I'd link it to you.

OT: It's a great song, and I hope you get to Second Base with her. Don't strike out.

thanks bro, I'll love to hear it

 

[The Demonic Kazekage]

its pretty good

 

[DeadManWonderLand]

Stop making us other guys look bad lol jk

But really that's pretty thoughtful hope it cheers her up

 

[Fair Warning]

too long didnt read, but from the posts it seems nice so good luck

 

[Supreme x Uchiha]

If you're planning to sing this to her, don't. Not if you want to smash her.

 

[Chibiusa]

If you're planning to sing this to her, don't. Not if you want to smash her.

He wouldn't write her a poem if all he wanted to do was smash!

.......At least I hope not :shrug:

 

[SBL7]

Thats pretty good.

 

[NarutAwesome]

too long didnt read, but from the posts it seems nice so good luck

well.....thanks

 

[Nero Uchiha]

Good luck with it mate, sounds good