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the Chikara arc was just pointless and don't ever mention that abomination again

I LOVED it. It got a bit weird at the end but it was far more interesting than all the war business that was going on around it. They actually put effort into that little mini arc.
 

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An arc with the K10 members on a mission and plenty of bonding moments.

Seriously, kishi always calls them "friends", yet there's scarcely any interaction between them, which is hella akward.
 
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An arc with the K10 members on a mission and plenty of bonding moments.

Seriously, kishi always calls them "friends", yet there's scarcely any interaction between them, which is hella akward.

they're more like acquaintances
 

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baby making arc... plus all the konchi get bigger boobs
 

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~The Enigma that is Danzo~

Basically starts off when Danzo flees from the Kage Summit. Only this time, Danzo successfully escapes into hiding, but only due to the sacrifices of his two bodyguards. Because of his actions, Danzo is dubbed banished from the village and his Hokage position is stripped. However, from the shadows, Danzo still has power within the interior of Konoha: via Root. Danzo's kinjutsu allows him to communicate with all who possess his curse mark. Sai has taken it upon himself to act as a double agent against his master. Even the Konoha 11 are dragged along into this, and forced to fight some of Root's best fighters on the way. In the meantime, Danzo is also dealing with Tobi (who is trying to find Danzo's position). He begins to see through Sai's plans, and orders him dead. He's only saved by Sakura's intelligence and familiarity with him, understanding the key signs he uses to bypass the curse mark's power of silence.

In the end, Obito finally finds Danzo and has Sasuke do battle with him yet again. Basically the same thing that happened last time but in a different battlefield of some sort. Then Nauto and co. arrive at about the same time they did canonically.
 

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~The Enigma that is Danzo~

Basically starts off when Danzo flees from the Kage Summit. Only this time, Danzo successfully escapes into hiding, but only due to the sacrifices of his two bodyguards. Because of his actions, Danzo is dubbed banished from the village and his Hokage position is stripped. However, from the shadows, Danzo still has power within the interior of Konoha: via Root. Danzo's kinjutsu allows him to communicate with all who possess his curse mark. Sai has taken it upon himself to act as a double agent against his master. Even the Konoha 11 are dragged along into this, and forced to fight some of Root's best fighters on the way. In the meantime, Danzo is also dealing with Tobi (who is trying to find Danzo's position). He begins to see through Sai's plans, and orders him dead. He's only saved by Sakura's intelligence and familiarity with him, understanding the key signs he uses to bypass the curse mark's power of silence.

In the end, Obito finally finds Danzo and has Sasuke do battle with him yet again. Basically the same thing that happened last time but in a different battlefield of some sort. Then Nauto and co. arrive at about the same time they did canonically.

That was f*cking rad. I did always want to see more of Root and more Sai is never a problem. Then plus maybe throughout the arc Konoha 11 could uncover really messed up things that have happened to the Leaf because of Danzo.
 
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I want an arc focusing on Danzo. We keep getting told about how ruthless he was, yet we are shown very little. You know you have to be a serious badass to be known as ruthless in their messed up world.

Basically, I'd want to see more about his ideals, his organization, how he thinks and why. I want more knowledge about his and Hiruzen's relationship (he clearly respected the man). I wouldn't mind being shown an alternate path, one where he continues to be Hokage, or even one where he manages to kill Sasuke. Or, just flesh out Danzo's character a bit more, and have his death have a little more impact - Sasuke assassinated the current Hokage and everyone just shrugs it off. Seriously, were there any major ramifications of Danzo's death?

Other than that, if I could just add an arc at whatever point in the story, I'd show a lot more of the Konoha 11, both in part one and in Shippuden, but especially in Shippuden, for obvious reasons. More interaction between the teams we rarely see, like a collaboration mission - Why can't they be sent of to warn the Jinchuriki, for instance? Why can't they meet dangerous foes and learn new abilities? Why should that be restricted to Naruto, Sasuke and whichever new character Kishimoto makes up?

Oh, and lastly: an arc with Jiraiya and Naruto's travels. Do it. The places they went, the training they had (although I wonder if they had any training, Naruto neither learned anything new nor grew up) and so on. There is unlimited potential in that. I'm surprised there aren't more awful fanfics about that.
 

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I would just want to see an excuse for the Konoha 11 to try and take out Sasuke without letting Team 7 know. Of course this would have to be before the Kage Summit because sadly they wouldn't really stand too much of a chance. It'd probably be led by Shikamaru and i'd just love to see the Leaf Village trying to clear up it's own mess. And then that could result in some really interesting character development for Naruto where like he doesn't talk to them for ages until the war begins.
 

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I would just want to see an excuse for the Konoha 11 to try and take out Sasuke without letting Team 7 know. Of course this would have to be before the Kage Summit because sadly they wouldn't really stand too much of a chance. It'd probably be led by Shikamaru and i'd just love to see the Leaf Village trying to clear up it's own mess. And then that could result in some really interesting character development for Naruto where like he doesn't talk to them for ages until the war begins.

Aye. The fact that Tsunade didn't let her Ninja chase down a wanted criminal just because she felt sorry for Naruto is actually a huge blunder on her part. Of course I realize Sasuke wouldn't have died, and I know he'll most likely save the day in the current arc, but it would've been nice to see the other teams actually do something.
 

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sasusaku arc

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inner sakura : hell yeah

seriously I want an arc about what happened in chunin examas when naruto left who become chunin jounin that would be great

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team 7 old missions some bonds with them

or romance arc sakura and new guy lol thats would be good too since sasuke is meh and naruto+hinata

I would like to see a new love interest for sakura someone like usui or ren cuz sakura is similar to misaki and kyoko
 
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Shino vs Konaha arc

Shino seeks to sue Konaha for being put through the entire Chunin Exam (almost getting killed multiple times) and in the end he never even got a chance to show his improvements during the finals, this making it impossible to become a chunin that year.

Results: Konaha wins the case and Shino says f*ck it, joins Akatsuki. He later gets murked by Taka in Part II and is not revived with Edo Tensei for the war.

Kishi wouldn't have missed him anyways.
 
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