hey guys. I finally got 50 posts. permission for bio

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name:Ryuthan Tatsain
nickname:none
gender:male
age: 16
Clan:none

looks:
personality: a goody two shoes. follows all rules. very loving

Village of Birth: Leaf Village
Loyal to: Leaf Village

ninja rank: jounin
speciality: blood summonings
elements. varies(read history){ i hope this is okay}
ninjutsu:need to learn

history:, Ryuthan was a typical ninja in konoha, he was born March 11. He had two loving parents who he stills live with. he graduated from the academy at 12. His skills were good enough for him to become a chunin at 14 and chosen to be a jounin at 16. Fearing being typical forever, he copied jiraiya's stunt of summoning without a contract. He was transported to a Mount Tatsyuma where Ninja Dragon live. He was granted many dragon qualities like increased sight and hearing. Hie best ability was his "Dragon Chakara" which allows him to perform many elemental ninjutsu. He was also given seven young dragons based on the basic ninjutsu elements and yin and yo. named Hi, Kaze, Kaminari, Tschui.Mizu, In, and Yo. they can perfrom simple elemental jutsu. He was also granted Kessho's armour and sheild which is made out of Crystal.

Theme Music.
Battles: N/A

Again I am new please if i broke any rules forgive me
 
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Narutohokage7

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I think your ninja rank goes by your posts, so Genin. Not a bad bio but spruce it up.
 

Joten Uchiha

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Needs more pictures, here's the template for you to follow just in case you didn't know it was there.
 

Gokillerz

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congratulations on reaching 50 posts, now fight for your bio
 

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mostly because i cbf reading all the other comments im just going to put one big one here

so to start i think i told you this on your other thread but you cant have a specility unless you have mastered it,plus to my knowledge blood summonings isnt even a jutsu on nb
secondly your ninja rank is genin it does go by you rank in the forum and yours is currently genin
as for element being a genin you may only have 1 element and you may pick which ever you like(lightning wind water fire or earth) and then find a sempai or sensei to train you in that element
with ninjutsu you automatically start with all E rank academy ninjutsu meaning that you have some basic techniques

other then all of that its a good first attempt,as a tip id add some accuall writing to looks,add more to his personality and maybe some more pictures but thats just my opinion

if this gets approved have fun rping :)
 

Caliburn

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Outside the fact that you didn't follow the template correctly, you are a genin, not a jounin. You didn't learn any elements, you have no specialties and you can't just make abilities up like that in your history.
 
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