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Message: [QUOTE="Typhon, post: 21243755, member: 22276"] Name: Nanaki Rank: Sage Custom Jutsus you wish to donate to become canon: [SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Hisou no Hyakki Torifogu) | Ninja Art: Flight of 100 Foggy Birds [SPOILER] Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user performs a brief series of three handseals while kneading chakra in their lungs. Once prepared, they'll then exhale two baseball-sized spheres of smoke so highly condensed that they may appear to be solid. Sometime during their trajectory path, the user will make another handseal, which causes the two spheres of smoke to burst into a few dozen small bird-like figures that'll flock towards the target. These bird-like smoke constructs rain down on the enemy from various angles, and packs force equivalent to that of a punch before dispersing into a small cloud of smoke on contact. After the assault is completed, the target is left bruised and bloodied in a large cloud of smoke. Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu. Note: Only useable thrice per battle. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Approved[/b]: partially reworded.[/COLOR][/center][/SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Gasu Fukumen) | Ninja Arts: Gas Mask [SPOILER]Type: Supplementary Rank: B Range: Short Chakra Cost: 20 Damage: N/A Description: When in a close combat situation the user will quickly raise their wrist launcher to the enemy's face and release a sudden burst of smoke. The smoke irritates the enemy's eyes and respiratory system causing them to start coughing and blinding them momentarily leaving them vulnerable to attack. -Requires a wrist launcher. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Declined[/b]: there isn't much difference between this and Blinding Smoke Screen Technique.[/COLOR][/center][/SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Hatsuendan Juugan no Jutsu) | Ninja Arts: Smoke Bomb Bullet Technique [SPOILER]Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Short-Long Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user makes a single handseal whilst kneading chakra in either their hands or mouth. With the point of origin wherever the chakra is pooled, they'll then release up to three highly condensed spheres of smoke that are launched with a great, pressurized force not unlike many Fūton techniques. Upon striking a target, each bullet erupts like a smoke bomb and goes on to release a large cloud of smoke around the target. Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Approved[/b]: partially reworded.[/COLOR][/center][/SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Kemuritadai no Jutsu) | Ninja Arts: Heavy Smoke Technique [SPOILER]Type: Supplementary Rank: B Range: N/A Chakra: 20 Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke Ninjutsu) Description: When preparing a Smoke technique, the user makes two extra handseals and adjusts the ratio of particulate matter within their initial technique. The increased particulate matter causes the smoke to become much thicker and heavier, giving it a darker gray tone. And due to the increased weight, the user's smoke hits with more force than is typical. In addition, this process will negate Smoke's standard weaknesses to both Water and Wind. Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu. Note: Only useable four times per battle. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Approved[/b]: partially reworded.[/COLOR][/center][/SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Kemuri Hokousha) | Ninja Arts: Smoke Walkers [SPOILER]Type: Supplementary Rank: B Range: Short-Long Chakra: 20 Damage: N/A Description: This technique allows the user or a clone to merge with a source of smoke and move covertly through it. This effectively enables them to conceal their presence and move about in total silence. They can't attack while in merged with the smoke and must reform before their turn ends. The speed they can move while in the smoke is slightly faster than a running ninja. Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu and their smoke-based clones. Note: Only useable thrice per battle. Note: Only useable in large smoke fields. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Approved[/b]: partially reworded.[/COLOR][/center] [/SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Yomi Haiki) | Ninja Arts: Underworld Exhaust [SPOILER]Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Short-Long Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user makes the Snake handseal, then slams their palms on the ground. This motion can easily be misconstrued as the initiation of a Doton technique, when in fact they're channeling dense smoke into the very earth beneath their target. Once released, the smoke erupts from the ground in a forceful torrent that damages the target's legs, in addition to knocking them high into the air. Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Approved[/b]: partially reworded.[/COLOR][/center][/SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Tsuin Kemuri-ryu) | Ninja Art: Twins Smoke Dragons [SPOILER]Type: Attack Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra Cost: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user forms three hand seals and then streams smoke out of a pair of wrist launchers. The smoke from each of the launchers forms into a dragon similar to the one produced by Kiho. The dragons race towards the target and can be controlled to change direction by the user. -Can be used twice per battle. -Requires two wrist launchers. -Cannot use smoke techniques above S-rank the following turn. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Declined[/b]: there isn't much difference between this and Smoke Dragon. I will make the canon technique multi-rank, and tweak the wording of it.[/COLOR][/center][/SPOILER] (Ninjutsu: Kemuri Sekkan) | Ninja Art: Smoke Sarcophogus [SPOILER]Type: Attack Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra Cost: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user forms three hand seals and releases a stream of smoke from their wrist launcher that rapidly envelopes a target and condenses around their body. This acts to restrict their movements while also suffocating them if they are caught in it for more than 2 turns. This can also be used to condense pre-existing smoke (created through smoke jutsu from the user) around them to bind the target. -Can be used three times per battle. -Must know the location of the target. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Declined[/b]: there isn't much difference between this and Binding Smoke Prison Technique.[/COLOR][/center] [/SPOILER] Smoke Technique: Propulsion [SPOILER](Kemuriton: Suishin) Type: Supplementary Rank: D Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 10 Damage: N/A Description: The user releases a jet of smoke from their legs in order to propel themselves in a desired direction. Note: Only useable thrice per battle. [center][color="#C487A7"][b]Approved[/b]: decreased the rank, seeing as it's a simple mobility technique.[/COLOR][/center][/SPOILER] [/SPOILER] Links to their approval from the official CJ submission thread: 100 Foggy Birds: [url]https://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=157594&page=17&p=6075215&highlight=smoke#post6075215[/url] Heavy Smoke and Gasmask: [url]https://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=157594&page=11&p=5899976&highlight=smoke#post5899976[/url] Underworld Exhaust and Smoke Walkers: [url]https://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=157594&page=8&p=5826448&highlight=smoke#post5826448[/url] Sarco****us and Twin Dragons: [url]https://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=157594&p=5666280&highlight=smoke#post5666280[/url] Propulsion: [url]https://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=28339&page=164&p=3157539&highlight=smoke#post3157539[/url] Some fairly simple techniques that would be a nice addition to the short cannon smoke jutsu list. :hint: [hr][/hr][center][color="#C487A7"][B]Checked & Added[/B][/COLOR][/center][hr][/hr] [/QUOTE]

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