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Message: [QUOTE="Joon, post: 22156569, member: 84468"] (Zangerin) - Cutting Flower Ring Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short [B](The range extends to mid-range when used with a sword)[/B] Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 (+20 damage when[B] infused [/B]with elemental chakra) Description: [B]The user channels raw chakra around their body by performing the hand seals Tiger → Ram[/B], then releases it in a circular formation. [B]The energy quickly expands into a radiant ring[/B] that surges outward, tearing across the battlefield with destructive force. When infused with elemental chakra, the ring transforms: fire blooms into scorching petals, lightning crackles through the arc in violent flashes, and water sharpens into slicing blades that cut through the air, etc. [B]Channeling the raw or elemental chakra through a sword and concentrating along the blade's edge releases a perfect circle around the body, striking multiple opponents at once and creating a devastating, wide-area attack.[/B] ~ Requires 3 in MIND/BODY/SPRT [B]~ The user cannot perform other elemental kenjutsu or ninjutsu in the same turn[/B] ~ Can only be used 3 times per battle [COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]Declined - This needs refining. The first part is a circle of chakra you release out. The second is infused with elements. the third part involves a sword thats somehow a perfect circle around your body? The last bolt makes little sense as it doesn't really correlate to the rest of the jutsu. Raw chakra is weak to elements, then elemental chakra is natural stronger. So the +20 damage buff doesn't make sense as the natural clashes of chakras will accomodate for that. Also that note of ninjutsu... in the same turn. The restriction would basically leave you only able to use genjutsu in the same turn and tai. Are you really happy with that?[/COLOR] (Fūin: Shadoukaotikkukānibaru no jutsu) - Sealing: Shadow Chaotic Carnival Technique Rank: S Type: Supplementary Range: [B]Short-Mid[/B] Chakra 40 (-10 chakra per turn) Damage: N/A Description: The user performs three hand seals, causing their shadow to spread outward into a wide circular zone. Within this area, the shadow is intertwined with sealing formulas that unfold into thin, [B]vine[/B]-like patterns across the ground, [B]capable of merging immediately with any Nara Clan shadow technique used during the same turn.[/B] Anything within the circle — opponents, weapons, or chakra constructs — is touched by these shadow‑seals. [B]Once contact is made, the sealing threads bind to the target’s chakra network, disrupting the efficiency of chakra flow. Instead of suppressing movement, the seal forces the opponent’s chakra output to become unstable and wasteful. Any attempt to mold chakra — whether forming hand seals, channeling chakra into a weapon, or activating a ninjutsu — requires significantly more chakra than normal. Because the seal forces excess chakra to leak out during molding, most techniques fail to form properly, misfire, or collapse before release. High‑cost techniques become nearly impossible to execute, while weaker techniques drain far more chakra than intended. Any opponents attempting to use any chakra‑based technique while inside the sealing field must pay an additional +20 chakra points to execute the technique. If they cannot meet this increased cost, the jutsu fails to form or fizzles out.[/B] ~ Requires 4 in MIND/BODY/SPRT ~ Can be used in the same turn as Nara Clan Techniques. ~ Cannot use Nara Clan Shadow Techniques of A-rank and above while the Jutsu is active or after the Jutsu is canceled or ended. [B]~ Can only utilize 1 Nara Clan Technique per turn while this jutsu is active. ~ No Nara Clan Techniques for 1 Turn after the jutsu is cancelled or ended[/B] ~ Can only be used 2 times [B]per battle[/B] and lasts 3 turns max [I][color=#00b29b]Approved. Keep in mind this only causes opponents to spend more chakra, it doesn't stop the formation of jutsu as long as they pay the extra +20. [/color][/I] (Kisō Eijutsu: Genran Jūjizan) - Twin Demon Shadow Jutsu: Chaotic Phantom Cross‑Slash Type: Offensive, Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short Chakra 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user performs three hand seals while channeling chakra into their blade. As they advance, their Sōma no Kō activates, causing the secondary body to erupt from their frame in rapid, shifting bursts. Both bodies execute overlapping sword strikes, each following a different rhythm and angle. Simultaneously, the main body user’s shadow stretches outward and splits into multiple mirrored silhouettes, each one mimicking distorted versions of the sword movements. These shadow‑slashes flicker unpredictably, creating the illusion of several real attacks converging at once. The opponent is assaulted by a tri‑layered offensive pattern: [LIST=1] [*]Primary body’s strike [*]Secondary body’s offset strike [*]Shadow‑phantom slashes that distort timing and perception [/LIST] The chaotic interplay of real and shadow‑based movements overwhelms the opponent’s ability to track or counter, forcing them into defensive errors that the real blades exploit. Even if the opponent successfully blocks the physical blade, the user's shadow quickly rises to capture their silhouette, momentarily immobilizing them. [b][color=#00b29b]This prevents the opponent from evading or counterattacking during that brief interval, keeping the pressure of the assault active even when the blade is stopped.[/color][/b] Note: Can only be used by Sōma no Kō bios. ~ Does not count as a full merge or full separation. ~ Cannot be combined with A‑rank or higher Kenjutsu or Taijutsu techniques in the same turn. ~ Cannot utilize Nara Clan techniques in the same turn ~ Can only be used 3 times max [I][color=#00b29b]Declined. I'm gonna need you to be clearer and more specific. You say it overwhelms an opponents ability to track and counter, but don't specify the actual numbers. This isn't gonna apply to everyone because people have different numbers they can track, and the shadow is gonna follow the speed of Nara jutsu, not your speed. Bold: Clarify. If someone is faster than you, why wouldn't they be able to?[/color][/I] [/QUOTE]

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