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[QUOTE="Troi, post: 22154606, member: 204285"] ● (Rozaria no Yubi) - Rosaria's Finger ● Type: Weapon Rank: S Range: N/A Chakra: [B]N/A[/B] Damage:[B] N/A[/B] Description: Rosaria's Finger is a ninja weapon ring made by the Kaguya clan in the early days of Konohagakure rise, worn on the user's right or left thumb. It is set with the task of constantly feeding on the user's chakra. The user, while wearing this ring, loses -10 chakra per turn. It can be brought into battle, worn on the user and taken off. When it is off of the user, it does not sap chakra. However, once the user takes it off, it summons it to where it belongs and the user would have to manually re-summon it into battle to wear again. While sapping the user's chakra, it passively stores a portion of the user's chakra per turn and it is to be used to enhance the damage of an elemental or non-elemental jutsu, excluding taijutsu and kenjutsu/bukijutsu. This counts as a move used. This increase is +20, however, this is the only boost that can apply to the jutsu that is being used no matter what else is active, shall the user wish to use the ring's boosting ability and it costs 20 chakra from the ring's chakra pool to use. However this tool can only store a maximum of 140 chakra per match which would equal seven uses of the ring. Once a total of 140 chakra has been stored/used, it is not able to store chakra for the rest of the match and once all 140 chakra is utilized, this ability is no longer usable, however, the ring still drains chakra from the user every turn. You also cannot consecutively enhance a jutsu. It is limited to one technique per turn, and must wait a turn to do so again. De-summoning the ring is not free and costs a move shall the user deem so. Due to its inherent nature as a Kaguya heirloom, it was made to help them in times of war and was a pivotal cause of the Kaguya clan's downfall as this ring was eventually used against other members and factions of the clan by the member wielding it, seeking ultimate control and authority over the clan and eventually leading to the absolute destruction of the clan among disease and sickness. Passively, it is able to boost Shikotsumyaku techniques by +10 damage and -10 chakra needed to perform a Shikotsumyaku technique at the cost of 2 health per turn.[B] It is able to passively perform ( Sawarabi no Mai ) - Dance of the Young Ferns (and variations of) free of charge, every three turns from its initial use.[/B] [LIST] [*]Actively boosting a technique by +20 counts as a move and is only usable on one jutsu per turn, every other turn and can be the only boost applied to the jutsu being used [*]Once you use 140 of the sapped chakra, the active boost is no longer usable but the ring will continue to sap 10 chakra from its wearer per turn [*]De-summoning the ring counts as a move and the user must activate the generic summoning technique to summon the ring back. De-summoning and summoning the ring back does not reset the amount of uses left on the active ability. It is strictly limited to 140 chakra and 7 uses per match [*]Passive effects are always active as long as the ring is on the wearer's person in some way, shape or form (sapping 2 life points of the user per turn) [*][B]Can passively and freely perform Dance for the Young Ferns, and variations of, every three turns after initial use[/B] [*]Must be a Kaguya clan member to use [/LIST] Dropping [[URL='https://animebase.me/threads/custom-jutsu-submission-iii.711213/page-48#post-21234409']Wings of Venti[/URL]] whether this is approved or not. [B][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]Declined: While this is not a wild weapon, some parts need refining or bringing in line.[/COLOR][/B] [COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)][B][/B][/COLOR] [LIST] [*][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)][B]You have no chakra cost but it takes 10 per turn.[/B][/COLOR] [*][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)][B]You have no damage but later it says -2 to yourself peer turn.[/B][/COLOR] [*][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)][B]You're having two lots of boost in the technique, You don't say anything about if these can stack or those limits. Also the boost limits need to take in line the jutsu subs guidelines. +20 damage would fall in with A ranks with the following: [/B][/COLOR] [LIST] [*]Can only be used 3 times max and Lasts 3 turns max [/LIST] [*][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)][B]The passive Dance of thee Young Ferns, a giant bone forest from a ring, is not going to work. That's too much.[/B][/COLOR] [/LIST] [B][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]Refine these aspects and you can have an approvable weapon.[/COLOR][/B] [/QUOTE]
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