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Message: [QUOTE="Ańbu Juniør, post: 22154461, member: 15719"] Updating: [URL]https://animebase.me/threads/custom-jutsu-submission-iv.764493/post-22074641[/URL] - Updated chakra values to align with the update (Yang Specialist) - Edited duration to align with new guidelines [B](Yōton: Kokū no Zantō - Shinsei) Yang Release: Remnants of the Void - Nova Type:[/B] Supplementary [B]Rank:[/B] A [B]Range:[/B] Short [B]Chakra: 30 (-20 per turn) Damage:[/B] N/A (+30) [B]Description:[/B] Derived from the Power of the Sun technique, Nova is a supplementary technique created by Kōtetsu Inuzuka to empower the physical abilities of his ninken. Through direct physical contact, he infuses their bodies with Yang energy that surges throughout them, increasing their strength and speed and granting them resistance to physical damage. The physical strength boost they gain equates to an addition of +30 to their physical attacks, a x3 base speed increase, and -40 damage reduction from incoming physical attacks. Unlike with Power of the Sun, the ninken aren’t granted passive healing from this technique, and their inexperience with handling Yang energy results in their base speed being reduced by -3 and a damage reduction of -20 from their physical attacks for two turns when this technique ends. Additionally, while under the effects of Nova, Ninken will be unable to merge with their Inuzuka partner. [B]Notes: - This technique can be used three times per battle. - This technique lasts for three turns.[/B] [COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)][B]Declined: This needs reigning in to be in line with the current standards even more. For one it's based on power of the sun which is S rank and yours is A rank. It's chakra value is only 30 for some insane buffs to multiple targets. The chakra cost for power of the sun is 30 per turn and yours is only 20 but it's buffing multiple targets. Then to the actually buffs. 30 damage, x3 speed and 30 dr on multiple targets. The only cannon yang tech to buff on contact is Ring of Hell. This is buff +20 to tai, +2 speed levels, x1.5 tracking and -15 of physical clashes. The better version is x2 tracking, +4 levels to their speed to +20 damage and fly at 3x their speed.[/B][/COLOR] [B][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]With all this in mind through the cannon techniques, what you're aiming to achieve here is way beyond that and either needs bringing in line with the cannon or greater drawbacks. You have no limit on how many you can effect either. [/COLOR][/B] Updating: [URL]https://animebase.me/threads/custom-jutsu-submission-iv.764493/post-22122727[/URL] - Updated chakra values to align with the update (Yang Specialist) - Edited duration to align with new guidelines [B](Yōton: Kokū no Zantō - Nisshoku) Yang Release: Remnants of the Void - Eclipse Type:[/B] Defensive/Supplementary [B]Rank:[/B] S [B]Range:[/B] Short [B]Chakra: 40 (-20 per turn) Damage:[/B] N/A [B]Description:[/B] The user performs [B]three[/B] handseals and releases Yang energy in an outward surge up to 180 degrees in a given direction, giving off a faint yellow glow and radiating a soft warmth that permeates up to short range. Used as a defensive measure, the energy released by this technique serves to burn away entities or objects, such as tools and spiritual parasites within range that are produced through the use of Yin Release by overloading them with Yang energy, which can be achieved as long as the chakra used to create the entity is less than that which exists within this technique. Especially useful against techniques that seek out and feed upon Yang-based energy, when faced with such a technique of equal chakra cost, Eclipse will prevent the user’s chakra from being drained and stop spiritual parasites and tethers from latching onto the user and allies within the technique’s range. While active, the user cannot use Genjutsu, Yin release, Yin-Yang release, or any non-elemental ninjutsu (including special fields like Fuuinjutsu). [B]Notes: - This technique lasts three turns and can be used twice per battle. - This technique requires a three-turn cooldown upon expiring.[/B] - The user is unable to use Yang Release techniques above A-rank for two turns after this technique expires. [B][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]Approved[/COLOR] Updating: [URL]https://animebase.me/threads/custom-jutsu-submission-iv.764493/post-22128613[/URL] - Updated chakra values and S&W to align with the update (Unspecialized) - Edited duration to align with new guidelines (Inton: Kokū no Zantō - Eisei) Yin Release: Remnants of the Void - Satellite Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: S Range: Short - Long Chakra: 40 (-20 per turn) Damage: 80 Description: Inspired by the ‘Night Parade of a Hundred Demons’ folktale, this technique allows the user to create their own small hoard of imaginary creatures. After performing three handseals and releasing a surge of Yin energy throughout their body, the user can create up to five creatures from their imagination or mimic the form of a beast from memory. Reaching the same size as the Phantom Dragons, these entities can act independently, have a strength over Elemental Ninjutsu, neutrality to Ninjutsu fields, a weakness to Senjutsu, and possess -20 damage reduction from Spiritual techniques. The user cannot use Yang Release or Yin-Yang Release techniques while this technique is active. Notes: - This technique lasts three turns and can be used twice per battle. - This technique requires a three-turn cooldown upon expiring. - When the entities are removed from the battlefield, the user is unable to use spiritual techniques such as Yin Release and Genjutsu above A-rank for three turns. [COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]Declined: I'm not sure why a spiritual entity should get a 20 DR from spiritual techs. The strength over elemental nin isn't in effect yet. Both ideas in the update say "likely to be updated" and "may change". I'd rather you remove that bolded from the jutsu as then it will automatically fall in line with the final decision made. "In addition to that, Y/Y will likely be updated to be strong to Ninjutsu and equal to Senjutsu. This may change to a Strength over elemental ninjutsu and neutrality to Nin fields and Weakness to Senjutsu, but I'm going over the natural energy options first."[/COLOR][/B] [/QUOTE]

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