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Message: [QUOTE="El Alucard, post: 22158579, member: 207905"] [FONT=times new roman][B]Resubmitting Note: This technique is multi ranked due to the different effects selenium dust has dependent on the rank of the Selenium dust technique used. Effects can be found in my CJ thread named Selenium Dust: Wrath here [[/B][/FONT][URL='https://animebase.me/threads/inverted-reflections.660692/post-22056167'][FONT=times new roman][B]x[/B][/FONT][/URL][FONT=times new roman][B]], but I've also referenced it in this post. Note: I've added the sustainment cost[/B][/FONT] [COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)][FONT=times new roman]While I appreciate the fact that your element's effects are increased based on the rank due to your passive technique, unless it's obvious as to why the technique has multiple ranks, it wont have multiple ranks. With CE we allow it for stuff like basic creations or if changing the rank changes the size or scaling of a technique. The problem with what you have here is that it's still just a storm of your element and nothing more. Aside from it being a higher rank increasing the effects, there is actually no difference in your technique. Now if you wish to add a scaling factor to make the multi ranking mask sense, I'd suggest a variation in range or at the higher rank it does more than just rain the element down. If not you need to fix it to be one rank[/FONT][/COLOR] [FONT=times new roman][HR][/HR] [B]Serenton: Darude Sunaarashi | Selenium Dust: Darude Sandstorm[/B] Type: Offensive Rank: B-S Chakra: 20-40 (-10 per turn active) Range: Long Damage: N/A Description: The user performs 3 handseals which causes and massive sandstorm of selenium dust to rage over the entire battlefield. To the opponent this may seem like an attempt at blinding or messing with their vision, and although the storm is dense enough to hinder sight up to mid-range, the true intention of this technique is to expose the opponent to the toxic effects of Selenium dust, which vary according to the rank used. [B]Note[/B]: Can only be used 3 times per battle [B]Note[/B]: S-rank can only be used twice per battle, No S-rank or above Selenium techniques within the same turn or the next after S-rank usage. [B]Note[/B]: The storm lasts 3 turns[/FONT] [COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)] [FONT=times new roman]Declined - See above I guess.[/FONT][/COLOR] [FONT=times new roman][Spoiler=Serenton: Ikari | Selenium Dust: Wrath (Reference)] Type: N/A Rank: N/A Range: N/A Chakra: N/A Damage: N/A Description: Serenton is an amorphous element that not only has physical properties but also comes along with a variety of toxic effects(mentioned in submission) no matter the form it takes. The following effects are references to the effects that would take place if one were to absorb the substance; Whether it be orally, through the skin, directly into the bloodstream, inhaling it or even by it coming into contact with the eyes. The effects of the toxicity is determined by the rank of the dust technique in use i.e. Higher rank selenium dust techniques are more toxic than lower rank selenium dust techniques regardless of size. D-C Rank: Absorbing Selenium dust of these ranks through means mentioned causes minor effects such as headaches and irritability, enough to cause the affected to stumble or fumble with their weapons, or mess up the aim of thrown techniques. B-A Rank: In addition to previous effects, the target would feel extreme nausea along with partial blindness, they'd also suffer from the effects of Myocarditis. The nausea causes them to be unable to spew out techniques from their mouths that are S ranks or above due to the queasiness overwhelming them whenever they attempt to inhale or exhale too deeply. This would include Sound techniques or any other techniques of the nature that requires the user to inhale/exhale via yelling and such. The Myocarditis reduces the target's heart's ability to pump and also causes rapid or abnormal heart rhythms, this causes a decrease to a target's physical feats - Speed is reduced by one level and all techniques that rely on a target's physical feats get a -20 damage debuff. The partial blindness translates to an inability to see past mid range. S Rank and above: In addition to previous mentioned effects, the targets, if exposed to Selenium dust of this rank would suffer stronger forms of previous effects. Immense Headaches coupled with Irritability and complete blindness would reduce the target's overall tracking to half of its previous value. The immense nausea would render the target unable to spew out techniques that from their mouths that are B ranks or above (This would include Sound techniques or any other techniques of the nature that requires the user to inhale/exhale via yelling and such). The Myocarditis would translate to target's speed being reduced by two levels and the target becomes incapable of using Taijutsu beyond B-rank basics. Note: - By spending 20 chakra, the user can passively rid a target's body of excess Selenium so as to remove the effects. This requires the target to be in short range of a user. - After being effected, the targets can't lessen nor rid the effects unless they somehow cleanse the element from their system, though removing themselves from exposure would have the effects not further worsen. - The effects stack i.e. Getting exposed to 2 C ranks would incur B rank effects. Getting exposed to 2 A ranks would incur S rank effects and so on.[/Spoiler][/FONT] [/QUOTE]

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