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Message: [QUOTE="Mirai, post: 22156143, member: 86283"] Permission to submit and resubmit CEJ for Solar Wind: [URL='https://animebase.me/profile-posts/7522973/']Dec 17, 2020[/URL] Resubmitting: * Removed the the pretty minor fluff/cosmetic ability [B](Taiyofuuton: Hoshi no Jidai) Solar Wind Release: Age of the Cosmos[/B] Type: Attack, Supplementary, Defensive Rank: D - S Range: Short - Long Chakra: 10 - 40 Damage: 20 - 80 Description: Age of the Cosmos stands as the basic manipulation technique of Solar Wind. This technique in question allows the user to mold their respective Solar Wind chakra, be directly from their body or weaponizing the air surrounding them, it generates a brilliant emerald green cosmic energy. This energy in question respectively appears deceptively similar to normal Wind Release, but the key difference is the natural superheated nature of the element, rivaling temperatures to the surface of the Sun. It is energetic and free flowing but with key manipulation, can even be given physical composition. This allows the element to be weaponized into various shapes, sizes and forms - ranging from basic/crude armaments like swords and shields, to more sophisticated and destructive forms like tornadoes, localized blasts etc. The only limitation is one's own imagination. This technique is triggered either through sheer will power, by infusing their Solar Wind chakra (D- C Rank) into the respective medium, or via handseals for the more potent and power natured usage of Age of the Cosmos (B - S Rank), starting with one handseal and adding an addtional handseal per rank. The element can also be directly infused into a physical weapon, causing it to become superheated in nature though controlled in such a way that it doesn't completely melt said weapon. This application however requires one to be in direct contact with the weapon. The user can make use of the D to C Rank applications of this technique without any usage limitations and B five times per battle. A Rank can only be used three times per battle, though it places Age of the Cosmo's upper ranks (A - S) on cooldown for one turn after usage, while S Rank prevents usage of Solar Wind Techniques of A Rank and above on a two turn cooldown after usage and can only be used twice per battle. Age of the Cosmos can also be sustained, passively draining -10 chakra per turn regardless of the rank used. However sustaining S Rank applications places the user on an additional limitation, restricting their use of other elements minus Solar Wind, its subcomponent elements and other non-elemental abilities. Lastly, regardless of the rank sustained, it can only remain in play for two turns before naturally fading at the end of the respect last turn. As per outlined, the user is immune to their Solar Wind Release Techniques, thus can interact with this technique, like others without risk of taking damage or negative effects. [COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]Declined - This is better though still with a couple of issues. First of all, your previous version didn't mention anything about creating armaments. It stated " This can range from solidified solar wind constructs such as weaponry, blasts, tornadoes or anything within the realms of one’s imagination.". First of all, you need to limit the range of the techniques based on ranks. Secondly you should have a max use overall for the technique as overall right now it's a whole arsenal. Like what's the point in having any other techniques when this can do pretty much everything? You can either separate this out into two techniques where the lower ranks are mass uses, then higher ranks have an overall use combined or work something in that sense. Also -10 to sustain wouldn't suit the scaling rank. Why would sustaining a D rank require the same chakra to sustain as an S rank? If you wish to discuss this, you can DM me. But you have a lot going on in a basic technique. Before you had a drawback about melting things infused due to the heat which made sense which is now gone. The A rank doesn't actually have a restriction outside of not using this technique again. Which isn't really a restriction. Could still go spam another S rank with a different name.[/COLOR] [/QUOTE]

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