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Message: [QUOTE="Sinthorus, post: 22156156, member: 80925"] [B]Custom element Japanese name:[/B] [I]Nāguru no Honshitsu[/I] [B]Custom element English name:[/B] Essence of Nurgle [B]The element is based on:[/B] The Essence of Nurgle is a biological/viatality affliction resulting from the mutation and combination of the Ketsuryūgan Dōjutsu's blood manipulation abilities, the persistent biological decay inherent to the Scarlet Rot, and a highly corrupted, malignant form of Yang Release chakra that grants it sentience and drive. [B]Though this, a biological sentient fungus is created that seeks a host to corrupt and make its own. Through the use of custom kinjutsu, this can make use of the dead as a host. Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):[/B] The creation of the Essence of Nurgle is supported by existing Naruto lore. Bio-weapons and parasitic techniques are common threats, as seen with the [I]Iburi Clan[/I], [I]Tayuya's[/I] infections, and [I]Orochimaru's[/I] experiments. The Scarlet Rot already provides the base biological decay. The Rot gains its aggressive sentience from a corrupted use of Yang Release, the life-force energy used in the [I]Creation of All Things[/I]. By infusing the Rot with this Yang energy, it gains a self-preserving "will to thrive" like any infection wanting a host. The Ketsuryūgan completes the process by providing the means of delivery; its blood manipulation power allows the Essence of Nurgle to quickly spread through the host's bloodstream, control the body, and actively contaminate new targets, making it a stable, self-propagating biological weapon. [B]How it works:[/B] The Essence of Nurgle works similarly to Blood Release, only denser, and is controlled by the user's chakra, whether it's released from their own body or manipulated from infected blood already present on the field. [B]It's appearance is that of a flesh like viral infection that is a deep red in colour with a green hint like veins that spread through it. It is the consistency of mud release. [/B]The severe effects, called "Nurgle's Blessing," begin immediately upon contact with a living person. Nurgle’s Blessing is a terrifying system with three integrated functions. First, Blood Control (Ketsuryūgan) rapidly spreads the infection through the bloodstream, turning the blood pale red and giving the affliction control over the host's body to cause disfigurement, paralysis, or trigger explosive spreading. [B]To infect a target, the viral infection must enter their system. This can be through piercing their body or through entering through an opening like their mouth or eyes etc. Upon entering their body, this element will blend with their bloodstream to cause the true deadly infection. [/B] Second, Decay and Spread (Scarlet Rot/kinjutsu) ensures the infection is lethal, causing constant, agonizing biological decay [B]to weaken the host to make it ripe for the viral infection to take control and become the host[/B]. The affliction's sole purpose is to spread through [B]the target to take control of the host as a medium to find and spread to more hosts. As it's used through the aspect of the scarlet rot, just like it's base component it will seek to corrupt and bloom while being purged by fire. [/B] Third, a corrupted [U][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)]Yang Release grants the affliction Sentience and Infection Drive,[/COLOR][/U] [COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)][U]giving it a basic "will to thrive" that continuously forces the host's body and mind to spread the plague[/U][/COLOR].[B] The yang/kinjutsu release in this aspect is create a deadly sentient viral infection that is solely focussed on weakening the vitality of the targeted host so the host can easily gain control and reanimate it in it's own image[/B]. This sentience is what causes the "Zombie" effect: should the target die, the sentient plague maintains control of the corpse by manipulating the blood, forcing the host to continue simple actions (like walking or grabbing) without using chakra, like a puppet driven by the plague's urge to infect others, until the body fully decays. [B]Upon penetrating the opponent and entering their body, the viral infection would spread through the target's body in their blood stream seeking to corrupt their vessel. With this the infection will deal time over time until purged or cleansed to weaken the host until they are weak enough for the viral infection to take control (when they are dead). [U][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)]This process is slow dealing a damage per turn where Nurgle's blessing will deal more damage per turn the stronger the jutsu. S rank variants will deal 20 damage per turn, A ranks 15 damage per turn, B ranks 10 damage per turn[/COLOR][/U]. Due the complex nature of the element, all techniques will be B rank and above. With the viral infection having taken over a host (when they die), due to the yang aspect,[U][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)] the viral infection will be able to mutate the host to empower it to help spread it's infection to more hosts[/COLOR][/U]. When this infection takes over a host, the body will turn black with a red like glow to it. The black being the corruption of the host that has spread through the body. [U][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)]The enhancements to the host being similar to the effects of the Change Into hell technique.[/COLOR][/U] Jutsu Usage Examples: ( Nāguru no Shukufuku ) - Nurgle's Blessing[/B] Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: / N/A Chakra: N/A Damage: N/A ( -15 per turn and -3 Speed ) Description: Nurgle's Blessing is the sustained fungus, self-propagating infection of the Essence of Nurgle that afflicts any living being upon fluid or blood contact with the infected matter. The infection rapidly spreads through the bloodstream (Blood Control) causing the blood to turn a pale, sickly red. Once established, the affliction begins its aggressive Decay and Spread (Scarlet Rot), inflicting 15 damage per turn for a maximum of 3 turns. The agonizing decay also causes high-grade fever and internal hemorrhage,[U][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)] which reduces the target's Speed by 3 points[/COLOR][/U] (which doesn't not stack with any other reductions). [COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)][U]Infected targets also immediately fall under the Sentience and Infection Drive; the plague's corrupted Yang chakra grants it a basic will[/U][/COLOR][U][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)], which continuously compels the host to move toward living targets.[/COLOR][/U] The affliction also actively counters all forms of passive healing (e.g., Yang specialities, Sage Mode) and [U][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)]effectively halves the healing power of standard Medical Ninjutsu applied to the afflicted area[/COLOR][/U]. Like its base components, Nurgle's Blessing is exceptionally destructive to organic matter, including Wood Release and Shikotsumyaku, granting an effective elemental weakness against it. Curing and Removal: To cure Nurgle's Blessing, the infection must be purged with a Fire Release technique or Fire-based element that has a higher Chakra cost than the technique used to inflict the infection, targeting the exact point of entry/infestation. When successfully purged this way, the Fire Release technique's damage to the target is reduced by 50%. Alternatively, the infection can be removed by specialized Yang Release techniques aimed at purifying the malignant chakra, though a standard [I]Body Surge[/I] is insufficient. [B]Notes:[/B] [LIST] [*]The affliction lasts for 3[B] turns[/B] unless cured. [*]If the afflicted target is reduced to 0 health, the [B]Sentience[/B] initiates the [B]"Zombie" effect[/B], controlling the corpse to perform simple, non-chakra actions for [B]three turns[/B] to spread the plague before full decay occurs. [/LIST] [B]Conditions to be able to use it:[/B] Need blood eyes, scarlet rot, kinjutsu and yang. [B]Is weak to:[/B] Fire release and any heat based elements such as scorch. This is due to the fact that it will cauterise the infection. [B]Is strong against:[/B] Any organic elements such as DBP and wood release. It is neutral to all other elements. [B]Co-creator: Antares (hazure) Students I passed this custom element on too:[/B] ? & ? Custom kin purchase: [URL]https://animebase.me/threads/kumi-exchange-center-2-0.780607/post-22156516[/URL] [COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)]∞ Declined. While you've correctly added Kinjutsu to account for controlling corpses part, the element has now evolved into something else entirely, akin to a Kekkei Tōta. With four different fields merging into one behemoth we have to look at its abilities as listed so far: [/COLOR] [COLOR=rgb(0, 0, 0)][I]- [B]Only curable through Fire-based elements and Yang, like Scarlet Rot (Nurgle's Blessing)[/B]:[/I][/COLOR][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)] This is problematic because as a disease-focused bloodborne element that's circulating throughout an opponent's body unlike basic Rot which targets specific areas, it gets trickier to cure. Medical Ninjutsu would be most effective in these situations as it deals with pathogens and diseases specifically. I assume this is why you've added the ability to halve the effectiveness of such techniques. For balance reasons that would have to be removed, making this element curable by Med of equal or higher chakra, Fire-based elements of higher chakra, and Yang because of how it operates within the body. I'm willing to allow the ability to halt passive healing while infected, but in exchange the variable DoT rate (-10, -15, -20 per turn) will have to be replaced with a standard -15 per turn across all ranks, similarly to the Curse of Scarlet Rot, with durations in line with current Custom Jutsu Submission Rules. Finally, the speed de-buff, while included in Scarlet Rot's standard kit, is overkill in this element and only makes it appear that much more as just a stronger version of Scarlet Rot. For a higher rate of damage per turn than Rot and the ability to stop passive healing, you can afford to lose that de-buffing ability. [/COLOR] [COLOR=rgb(0, 0, 0)][I]- [B]Sentient fungus and control through infections (Yang)[/B]:[/I][/COLOR][COLOR=rgb(85, 57, 130)] As I stated in my previous check, Yang chakra making the infection 'sentient' with a will to propagate and also physically degrade the opponent is redundant in this case as Scarlet Rot already does all of this plus it will already be circulating and spreading throughout the opponent by virtue of their circulatory system. It also cannot take over a person's will and make them do things--that is beyond the scope of Yang. Kinjutsu could grant the corpses limited sentience to do what you want which is simple, non-chakra actions, so that is also redundant as it relates to Yang chakra. Then we have the issue where Yang is being used to enhance the corpses with effects similar to Ring of Hell. Scarlet Rot already modifies a host's body after death to sprout 'exotic plant life'. You should take advantage of this perk and change it slightly to fit the element rather than relying on Yang to do it. Right now, the addition of Yang only justifies higher chakra costs and damage to Nurgle Essence techniques. As I stated earlier in this check, the element is too much at once. Removing Yang would fix this as all of its contributions are already accounted for by either Kinjutsu or Scarlet Rot. - Zaphkiel ∞[/COLOR] [/QUOTE]

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