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Message: [QUOTE="Skorm, post: 22154334, member: 253471"] [CENTER][IMG]https://i.imgur.com/sGV4kBP.png[/IMG][/CENTER] [B]Custom element Japanese name:[/B] Raijara [B]Custom element English name:[/B] Radiolaria [B]The element is based on:[/B] Yang + Water + Lightning [B]Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):[/B] Radiolaria consists out of three components, Lightning, Water and Yang. The latter of them has been the cornerstone of hosting life into Ninjutsu through cannon techniques such as Change into Hell. Yang also has the capability of altering biological beings through metamorphism as well as acting as a poison agent, all shown in the cannon list techniques of the release. The two elemental natures that Radiolaria makes up with are also proven to co-exist in the Storm release. [B]How it works:[/B] Radiolaria is a liquid element in it's release form. It is slightly similar in aesthetics to that of milk, albeit translucent and radiant with passive electrical discharges added to it's sound and aesthetics as well as bioluminescent. The fluid hosts the microbes that are always present inside of the element and they can alter the course of the liquid themselves even after the element has been created by the user. This means that it spreads out, just like water in the beginning, but can then stalk targets or even escape containment. The movement of the microbes are between lightning and water in the speed list (3-15, depending on rank of the technique). The limitation is that the user cannot use any other Radiolaria techniques while the microbes are moving a present technique. Moving the element itself requires it to be in contact with the ground or in water, they cannot move the liquid if it is suspended in the air. Much like water and lightning release, Radiolaria can be formed from the users body but it can also be formed inherently through present water sources too. The microbes can also alter the tensile strength of the liquid, adjusting it so that even massive summons can stand on it without falling through. It will not impact the damage of the technique in anyway though, and is mostly just used as auxiliary. Because of the lightning element being a component of Radiolaria, it gives the fluid cutting capabilities towards solid elements such as earth and metals, the latter of which will rust on prolonged exposure making Radiolaria neutral to it even if it contains water as a component. It also is a key component of energy for the microbes that are hosts within the element. It also has tolerance against conductivity as the microbes are based upon the lightning release itself and they nourish it. This means that should one channel lightning release through Radiolaria, it will not spread out as easily as if it was channeled through water and instead will require equal amount of damage to channel through it/overcome it. That also means that should the user stand upon Radiolaria, they won't get electrocuted if lightning should be channeled into it automatically. Aside from physically manipulation of the liquid itself, the microbes are dangerous if they enter a bodies circulation. Since it's a liquid, it can penetrate the pores in the skin on direct contact with the element. Once the microbes has entered the body, either via skin contact or from being inhaled or digested, they will start the electrostatic metamorphism. Throughout the body there are 361 Tenketsu points spread out. It's these Tenketsu points that are the gateways of the body's entire chakra system and it's also the points in which chakra is being released from. The microbes will start an electro metamorphism process that paralyzes nerves for the pathway to these points, which results in a inconsistent flow. Over time, this leads to heavier restrictions on the bodies chakra system. This translates to a -10 chakra output to all their techniques after a full turn has passed after being exposed and after more time passes, the body cannot channel certain amount of chakra through their pathways. Each consecutive turn lowers the bodies capability of using a certain rank. From the second turn of exposure, they cannot use Forbidden ranked, after three turns, they cannot use S-rank - etc. Until it has reached all the way down to E-rank (6 turns total) the victims chakra system is effectively severed from their control. This does not mean the target dies automatically as their chakra isn't erased itself, it simply means they cannot use chakra whatsoever. Full body surges of Yin, Yang, Yin-Yang, Suen, Anutu and Sage chakra are effective means to counter the microbes paralysis as well as medical jutsu designed for poison cleansing. The technique designed to flush the microbes out need to be on the same chakra level as the technique the victim was exposed to, with the exception of Suen and Anutu who both are strong to the Radiolaria element and thus requiring less chakra to do so (10 less). While the microbes suppress the target, it counts as an active debuff throughout the entire cycle. The microbes inside of the element can also work as an electro metamorphic agent towards the user or their allies by infusing with them through similar means with direct contact with their skin. Instead of paralyzing their chakra system, the microbes will harden the skin as well as the bones or even internal organs within the designated host. This can also in turn be used to sew together external or even internal wounds as well through the metamorphism process as lightning can cauterize wounds like fire. The user or their allies gains a regenerating factor as well as a physical damage mitigation factor when infused with the microbes and depending on the rank of the technique, this boon increases. As their skin and bones essentially turns into something akin to titanium/steel, their weight does not increase, nor does their taijutsu damage. This effect cannot be used at the same time as the microbes are paralysing an opponents chakra pathways with the same technique. This mitigation effect counts as the active one and can only be bypassed with techniques granting higher damage mitigation or those used/gained through non-stacking means such as APs. The microbes cannot metamorph non-biological matter meaning they cannot harden the surface of a water technique or a earth technique. They can also not affect bodies that doesn't have chakra systems, such as Stone of Gelel users or Arali. Instead they will only be able to succumb to the physical damage the element deals itself, and as it has Yang as a component, it can contain extra chakra/damage for their techniques. [B](Rajiaria: Urawaza | Radiolaria: Ulterior Move) Type:[/B] Supplementary [B]Rank: [/B]D-S [B]Range:[/B] Short-Long [B]Chakra:[/B] 10-40 [B]Damage:[/B] 20-80 [B]Description[/B]: The user channels Radiolaria chakra through their body and expels the liquid from their mouth in order to cover the area infront of them with the liquid. The user can move their head around in order to aim the torrent towards a desired location. B-rank and above usages requires necessary handseals for the technique to be used. B-rank requiring 1 handseal, A-rank 2 and S-rank 3 handseals. [B]Conditions to be able to use it:[/B] Yang + Water + Lightning [B]Is weak to:[/B] N/A [B]Is strong against:[/B] N/A [B]Co-creator:[/B] N/A [B]Students I passed this custom element on too:[/B] N/A [B][COLOR=rgb(243, 121, 52)]Declined: The decline came in the facts part of altering biological beings which almost sounds like kinjutsu if not the aspects of blood release. But I continued to read. Then you've got microbes which can alter your element after you've release it by itself. Then you have it "stalking" targets. It's a liquid mostly from the initial description but you want it to have the speed of lightning. The whole explanation of it's looks and how it acts is just strangely worded. It's a fluid like milk, but it's not, but the microbes can control it, but you can't use the ce if they are. Meaning it's like you're controlling it anyway. Then they can't be controlled in the air? Which makes no sense. Then you move on to changing it's state making it denser to be solid enough to stand on. It's a liquid but has cutting properties of lightning? You know what, I got to this point after re reading this and realised it mostly makes no sense, is trying to do way too much. You mention Anutu that isn't even in the RP anymore. You're affecting people's nervous systems yet med isn't even part of this. Not to mention you want to paralyse a chakra system, cause why not, don't need dokkodo to pull off that kinda stuff. Reign this in A LOT and explain it in a clear manor! If you don't, next time this will be a DNR. [/COLOR][/B] [/QUOTE]

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