Recent content by Red-Robin

A fair assessment, but do keep in mind that while canonically and potentially even descriptively snakes operate within certain enhancements of benefits, unless a technique within the game itself contributes to the effects that you describe (such as enhanced speed, senses, holding things in...

For GF: Sixteen Palms, your assessment would be correct. The technique operates as a standalone and the overall procedure of application is consistent with that of its sibling Thirty-two Palm variant, of which we will be going over here in a moment. Nothing too flashy, of course. For Aerial...

Exactly so. Keep in mind a few details pertaining to the Chakra Absorbing Snakes technique, in which that the chakra does not return to you in any way and is simply "lost in the process," as it were. So don't go relying on it for any make or break on your chakra taxes. Alright, onto the fun and...

Very nice start. There is one thing to address, though, namely within your specialties. Apex Tracker Specialist requires 5 in DEX, of which you do not have, so you'll want to swap that out for something else. Something like Increased Tracking Specialist you could start off with, which provides a...

Hello hello! As a beginning standard per normal training routine, please take a brief moment to explain to me what you know of the Snake Summoning and its overall functionality in-verse. What are their strengths, and what are their weaknesses?

It does in fact classify as advanced shape manipulation, yes. And as you are implying, it would provide a sufficient counter to elemental techniques of equal strength. As for the question regarding the careening effect, we can explore the definition of careen, which is simply "move swiftly and...

If I recall correctly, all summons regardless of rank or anatomy consist of a flat rate 10 speed value unless it explicitly mentions otherwise within the technique of the particular summon itself. While it does provide some descriptive basis for the suggestion of "above average performance," in...

Absolutely correct. I've made the adjustment accordingly. Good catch. ✌️

The Moon Gate; a robust fortress of its own that has the potential to house the bastion of Solanaceae's Vanguard that serves to protect the primary point of land entry to the Nation of Stars. The structure was vast with a courtyard that surrounded the exterior and interior sides, complete with a...

Looks great. Just a couple of things to note. You had your AP total listed as 29, I switched it to 12 to be consistent with what you have allotted. Aside from that, while you have "completed" set as your status of progress for your basic elements and ability, remember that your attributes...

Very good. Some people have a tendency to think there's more to it than all that; as if there is some functional causation for why it doesn't work for them. But it does quite literally simply boil down to their lack of interest in it, or at best, their inability to have reasonable knowledge of...

They both would likely follow similar damage shaving principles across the board and would disappear after tanking the B-rank attack, resulting in a 1-to-1 trade off. Nothing too complicated, but nothing to scoff at either. The last of the summoning techniques will cover Manda. The other two...

Looks better, great work. The only other thing to address now is in your skills, you have each of the basic elements and skills assigned, which at the Academy Student rank, you are only afforded 2 basic elements (fire, water, wind, earth, lightning) and 1 basic skill (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu...

A great start for a returning bio. Just a few things to address, namely within the specialties/skills categories. For your specialties, you'll want to maintain consistency in that the only things listed under Specialties are explicitly what is listed in the specialties thread found > Here. <...

Very good. Now after a few decades.. maybe a month if you're lucky, this aught to suffice in producing the outcome you're hoping for. Unless you juice. In which case, go crazy, my friend.