it is good but for the fact that madara has to reclaim his eyes yet. I hope people remember that the eyes are physically in different places now, namely, one in obito's left eye-socket, another in some other socket.
At the very least I enjoyed a good grammar. They usually have either splendid prediction and goofy grammar or visa versa, so this one was a worthwhile shot combining both - a fine prediction and no less fine grammar. Thank you.