Recent content by IDreamofClouds4817

Okay, I've been pretty busy with finishing up coursework the past couple of weeks, so I've been taking my sweet sweet time writing the first chapter. Right now its at about 4,500 words, and its nearly done. I decided to make the first chapter pretty much a speed through the events involving...

I don't know if you care too much about this kinda thing, but I wanted to just list out the ranks of some of the characters. Keep in mind that though, that this refers to their combat effectiveness, primarily their score in regards to Ninjutsu, Taijutsu and Genjutsu. For S Ranks, they only...

Okay, well I am going to use your suggestions for the tailed beasts, but I hadn't thought about the effect their properties would have on their jinchuuriki, nice call. As for Naruto and Sasuke's abilities, I think I should detail how the rank system will work for jutsu and shinobi. E - Average...

I'm quite sure he can't. Otherwise we would need someone to explain how come he didnt just teleport himself and some of the explosive tags away (during his fight with Konan), and then turn intangible when he got there.

Yes you can have multiple contracts. Sasuke has a contract with Hawks and Snakes. I suppose choosing which one to use is a matter of chakra control. For your second question, I'm pretty sure it all depends on how much chakra you push into it. Although that does leave me wondering why Naruto...

Yeah, that's about right. He's an Uchiha, she's a Senju. Although the success rate is still quite low. The only 100% way to obtain the Rinnegan is to naturally have both Hyuuga and Uchiha blood in you, and then implant Senju DNA. It's a pretty involved process, but its like that for a reason...

Sorry but something just came to mind when I was thinking about how the story progresses. What do you think should be the average progression in skills for characters. Because in Canon, at the age of 16 Naruto and Sasuke are already S-ranks, and I know for a fact that I don't want that to...

Yeah, I completely agree on the Uchiha massacre thing, its going to be awesome writing that. As for Naruto and Sasuke's skills in the first arch. They are both overqualified to be genin. Sasuke is low chuunin, and Naruto high chuunin. Due to Naruto's appalling chakra control he has a very...

Sakura isn't useless. She is good medical ninja, and has shown that she is passable at taijutsu. Combined with her monster strength she might as well be called a taijutsu specialist since she only needs to land one hit. As for the whole Sasori debate, she deserves no credit whatsoever as an...

That sounds great, although I think I would have to do some work at figuring out how to write a half decent script since I've never done anything of the sort. But that's an idea certainly on the cards at a later date.

Well, as far as Naruto and Sasuke are concerned, they might as well be best friends. In my story Naruto's mother doesn't die at the kyuubi's sealing, and she raises Naruto for the first 6 years. In those years she of course introduces him to her best friends son, Sasuke. Even after Kushina...

Okay then, fair point. In the first arch the main characters really are Naruto and Sasuke. Some time will be given towards giving backstory and depth to some of the other Konoha genin, but primarily just Naruto and Sasuke. The conflict, is slightly more complicated. In fact I'm happy you...

Okay, first off sorry I haven't replied in a bit, I was on holiday and didn't have access to the internet. Now, I think it would make much more sense if I tell you the general outline I've got first. But the problem with that is that I haven't fully figured it out yet. That's why I was...

In fact, I think I kind of wanted to have my story act at some points, kind of like a tribute to all my favorite manga. I was going to use that to hopefully distinguish my story from others and make it more memorable in that it have cameos from characters from a variety of shows, and yet it...

BEWARE LONG POST To be honest with you, a large amount of this I based of already existing anime and manga. Shows like Full Metal Alchemist and Avatar the Last Airbender. Alright then. Aburame Clan Now I see what you mean. Okay, I like it and I think that with your permission I will...