Kishi's Recent Writing

Yusuke Urameshi

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To me, it seems like ever since Tobi was revealed as Obito, his writing hasn't been as good. His recent work has been really predictable and seems written with not that much creativity. I know super ultimate Naruto fanboys are going to disagree, but I feel as if Kishi's writing has gone down.

Whaddya guys think?
 
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well not really because right now he's explaining all the plot holes and he could still be surprising us more
 

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Yeah this chapter was full of poop
 

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He's been doing to many flashbacks.
 

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He could do a lil bit better but w/e i roll with it haha
 

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soooo your still mad tobi is obito? i think its clouding you judgment
 

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well he does have explaining to do for tobi being obito. bcuz remember when people were freaking out about his identity? everyone wanted to know why, and how
 

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soooo your still mad tobi is obito? i think its clouding you judgment

Not really. I just feel he could've written Tobi being Obito better without so many holes. That's it. And also, his writing has been very obvious and predictable. That's not what we usually see from Kishi.
 

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I'm curious if tobi was revealed to be someone else would you be happy?
 

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I'm curious if tobi was revealed to be someone else would you be happy?

I'm not mad with it being Obito, it just could've been done better. And of course I wanted to be right and say it was Izuna, but I'm not crushed because I'm wrong.
 

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Not really. I just feel he could've written Tobi being Obito better without so many holes. That's it. And also, his writing has been very obvious and predictable. That's not what we usually see from Kishi.

how could he write it better? by saying its obito from the start? and not having him wear a mask??
i keep hearing about plotholes but he hasnt even told his story so how can you say there are holes in it?
 

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i thought it was cool to see obito with long hair. makes you know for sure he was the one who recruited itachi and kisame
 

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how could he write it better? by saying its obito from the start? and not having him wear a mask??
i keep hearing about plotholes but he hasnt even told his story so how can you say there are holes in it?

I was really anticipating finding out who Tobi was. Once I did, it was obvious that either Madara or Oro found him and fixed him up. Making Tobi Obito made the next couple weeks' content predictable. Even if it was Ramen Guy, there'd be some mystery and everything would not be so blatantly obvious. That's what I'm saying.
 

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he's about to fill all the plotholes so just wait and enjoy what obito's story will be like in detail
 

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kishi writings has gone doooowwwwwnnnnnnnnnn the drain completely
+rep xd
 
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