September Rap Battle- Bring it!!!

Best Rapper in this thread


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Punk Hazard

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Killed this shit, I ain't gotta rhyme no more.
 

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no worries big homey xd i'm not exactly at my best this evening either

my lady is my love and she aint feelin no scrubs
that's why if you checkin for her then she's askin for a dub
you must've speant time at the pub, those rhymes got you soundin drunk
Im like blake griffon as i dunk, could two sh*ts bout whos in front
cuz everybody's at my back, when-it-comes-to-rap
it's-not-no-scrap, i serve these cowrads with a snap
got rhymes on tap, flow as free.... as the motherf*ckin breeze
you-mention-chesse, like we don't know.... you pay your bills workin-on-yo-knees
i say f*ck-boy please, don't make me touch you with this pimp-hand
gone head an have a seat, you can't seem to understand
if kishi wrote this tale, my last name's uzumaki
you last name's hyuga dawg.... how the f*ck-you-gone-stop-me???

i think you forgot,.....i took yo girl, you have no treasure
when i said my first rap you where already done
and i'm still killin you with pleasure
you know i'm all over yo girl
poppin ***** whenever
rhymes so weak,.....wheres your spice
your the salt without the pepper
i'm the next king at this game
call me successor
cuz my legacy will last forever
i killin b1ches and chillin
call me frebreeze......cuz i'm only gettin fresher
 
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Weak sauce, all around.
Y'all kids ain't ready, go listen to some more little wayne or whatever you kids are calling hip hop these days...I've been writing rhymes for 18 years probably longer than most y'all been alive lol

I wrote shit almost 20 years ago better than this garbage lulz @ you all!

I win, 1 to nuthin
 

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Weak sauce, all around.
Y'all kids ain't ready, go listen to some more little wayne or whatever you kids are calling hip hop these days...I've been writing rhymes for 18 years probably longer than most y'all been alive lol


I wrote shit almost 20 years ago better than this garbage lulz @ you all!

I win, 1 to nuthin

was that a rap??? xd
 

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I'll put it simply, if you don't even know who a tribe called quest is, you don't deserve to post on here

sorry bout the double post
 

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was that a rap??? xd
lol, no

just smack talking, nothin for real


I've got real world experience, I should be a judge for y'all.
I've actually worked with artist like Bizzy Bone, now that guy can rap

check out my vid, he was recording in my lil cousin studio




Damn, sorry bout the TRIPLE post, not a mistake I make often anymore
 
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*walks in*
might as well do one more rap
*clears throat*

Inevitably wrecking the destruction
Further than what it was because I need no introduction
Slaying doubts like knights and dragons, but I'm not looking for the damsel in distress
And I stay two steps ahead like I'm in a game of chess
and yes
I promise that nobody can be spared
from the wrath of Elementalist like a wolves teeth when bared
I'm not a lyricist but I see were you were confused
Hushing up the lies cause the truth has been misused
and other rappers mislead
because they get it into their head
That true rap is only talking about how you seduce them women in bed
so let it be said
That nothing is above the reach of intelligence
And if I wronged you consider this as recompense
I rep love not the hood or the streets
because instead of ignorance I battle with the elites
my rhymes are targeted at none but aimed at all
my lyrics are adult-like while you have yet to crawl
 

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*walks in*
might as well do one more rap
*clears throat*

Inevitably wrecking the destruction
Further than what it was because I need no introduction
Slaying doubts like knights and dragons, but I'm not looking for the damsel in distress
And I stay two steps ahead like I'm in a game of chess
and yes
I promise that nobody can be spared
from the wrath of Elementalist like a wolves teeth when bared
I'm not a lyricist but I see were you were confused
Hushing up the lies cause the truth has been misused
and other rappers mislead
because they get it into their head
That true rap is only talking about how you seduce them women in bed
so let it be said
That nothing is above the reach of intelligence
And if I wronged you consider this as recompense
I rep love not the hood or the streets
because instead of ignorance I battle with the elites
my rhymes are targeted at none but aimed at all
my lyrics are adult-like while you have yet to crawl

ok it's time for a little critism
for one me and raps are the same
one in one......one organism
i'll kill all the b1tches on this thread without breaking a sweat
i am the dfinition of perfectionism
i am far beyond your level
and elite mechanism
adult like rhymes?.......keep dreaming
more like fanaticism

heres a short one to start off
 

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Pokemon trainers? I AM the monster in your pocket.
Hotter than July? I take all your rhymes and shove them up your eye socket!
Who needs high when you've created a New World!
That's Right. I'm Kira. I put L in a whirl!!
Since I came around, crimes dropped 70 Percent!
And that's what brought around my assent!
All you rhymes blow, like I did to my father for the world's better!
Now shady, tell 'em how it goes, my mother fucking nigger!!

[video=youtube;mPg2Be5eQ5Q]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mPg2Be5eQ5Q[/video]

Lol
Fck outta here dog
Reading ya rap but can't remember a word of it
Like studying for a test and reading what you detest
Eating this noobs up getting a full stomach
Heart burn to ya chest throw up leaving a mess
And speaking of spitting up
I don't spit I vomit
Higher then Hailey's comet
I could have killed you with no comment
No comment
No eulogy
No apology
Not my policy
I promise you like a politician I have no competition
Like I said I walk in the endzone no opposition
You opposite nggas got ya whole Shit backwards
Like ya got dressed in the dark
Tryna talk like ya some fearsome rappers
Fears no factor ya just a walk in the park..

I'm about to hit y'all with someshit you'll be feelin
Like 6 shots fired off before the tires staty squealin
Like 6 knots sold off first day I started dealin
medicine for your healin, it's piled up to the ceilin
Y'all know Ran don't step with fear
I'll put that mic in your ear
tell you that's your death that you hear
Ran's on deck this year
You gonna hear me clear,
steer clear dawg, damn that man Ran is near yeah
you see fatal games I play with wordsay ai'nt the half
live my life, I'll live yours, lets see who laughs
lets see who's last, nah F it, lets see who's first
cause I forget who was who, do you wanna see a hearst?
I disperse voodoo curses thru verses
"shh don't tell!"
cause that's the type of shit that'll get me sent straight to hell
..or locks in a cell might as well throw away the key
I'll find my way out anyway that ish don't matter to me'
like Attica flee
Use 3rd degree black belt tactics
turn the tide and flip the script like actor acrobatics
It's hip-hop for you addicts, of which I'm one
I got rap up in my blood like I'm it's firstborn son
I got my left hand scramblin, right hand gamblin
you could say I'm handlin
the rest with my ramblin

6 shots? You lying. Cheap talk is cheap
But I'm still not-not buying
Weak rhymes is weak it sounds like you crying
Why-why you trying?
Ya rhymes equals jokes. Laughter I'm dying
Well most times smiling
Put an end to yo year
Ca-call me the Mayans
Sta-sta-stuttering cuz I play with my words
Like I play with my food
Meaning I'm playing with you
And ngga I'm Haitian so I ain't playing with you
When I say we put that voodoo on top of you
When you turn into a zombie what you gone do?
Kill you with this verse and have you come back from the dead.
Call it life after death
It ain't even a threat
I can treat you like a box and put you in check
Or worse treat you like a box and mark you with X
Ya heard?
No magic or weapons or none of that
I beat up you with my hands like I beat you up in a rap
Last name Uno
First name Numero
Left hand hospital
Right hand funeral....
 
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Lol
Fck outta here dog
Reading ya rap but can't remember a word of it
Like studying for a test and reading what you detest
Eating this noobs up getting a full stomach
Heart burn to ya chest throw up leaving a mess
And speaking of spitting up
I don't spit I vomit
Higher then Hailey's comet
I could have killed you with no comment
No comment
No eulogy
No apology
Not my policy
I promise you like a politician I have no competition
Like I said I walk in the endzone no opposition
You opposite nggas got ya whole Shit backwards
Like ya got dressed in the dark
Tryna talk like ya some fearsome rappers
Fears no factor ya just a walk in the park..



6 shots? You lying. Cheap talk is cheap
But I'm still not-not buying
Weak rhymes is weak it sounds like you crying
Why-why you trying?
Ya rhymes equals jokes. Laughter I'm dying
Well most times smiling
Put an end to yo year
Ca-call me the Mayans
Sta-sta-stuttering cuz I play with my words
Like I play with my food
Meaning I'm playing with you
And ngga I'm Haitian so I ain't playing with you
When I say we put that voodoo on top of you
When you turn into a zombie what you gone do?
Kill you with this verse and have you come back from the dead.
Call it life after death
It ain't even a threat
I can treat you like a box and put you in check
Or worse treat you like a box and mark you with X
Ya heard?
No magic or weapons or none of that
I beat up you with my hands like I beat you up in a rap
First name Uno
Last name Numero
Left hand hospital
Right hand funeral....

you think your good cuz you can wright long lines
but every word you spit is so fake.......like there made out of plastic
i have skill you couldn't even imagine........like some type of universal fabric
my flow gives people shivers
something far beyond magic
why do you even exist
aka:tragic
you think your the best out there believing in whatever you want......but your just a bootlegged version of a fanatic
if you where a city i just recked havoc.......
 

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ma last rap for now. i killed this shit, this is at everybody

i see you return, seeking for more hurt
to me you're worthless, valuable like dirt
i came here to kill, better get ya casket
better start praying in church, putting more money in that basket
i'm spitting lyrics and ryhmes, as if i'm a rapper
no need to say i am, but so did oprah next chapter
as you thought, i was close to leaving the base
but i had to come back, u guys are a disgrace
without me you're lost, spitting pointless raps
i got ya ass lost, ask dora for her map
niggas, it time to adapt, change to my ways
can't understand me, let me change that phrase
i slow niggas down like friction, i'll put you down like gravity
ma raps are so great, it's like i did them magically
damn probably the best rap i ever wrote
so many words to spit, that i'm about to choke
i'm killing ya'll off, you'll think i have a headlist
now which one of ya girls am i going to sleep with
last night ya girl and I were balling like kemo
i found her soft spot, finding-nemo
 
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ok it's time for a little critism
for one me and raps are the same
one in one......one organism
i'll kill all the b1tches on this thread without breaking a sweat
i am the dfinition of perfectionism
i am far beyond your level
and elite mechanism
adult like rhymes?.......keep dreaming
more like fanaticism

heres a short one to start off

You and raps are the same
well your about to get killed
about to let it burn bitch
call me Meek Mill
Chopping up the compitition
No repitition
If got beef man quit ya bitchin
And get back to the kitchen
Old school style
Did I forget to mention
You like like krabby patty
and I'm just flippin
 

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Last name Uno
First name Numero
Left hand hospital
Right hand funeral....
THAT....was the only good part.
Don't get it twisted, not here to battle from the start
See that rhyme I wrote, is like 15 years old
Used 'Big Pimpin''s beat when I wrote it
Back when Jay still only went gold
your probably 12........
yeah, your probably 12
CHORUS

Your probably 12, why am I pretending to battle you
lol lol your probably 12


Right....am I right?

OF course I'm right

PS I really did write that one forever and a day ago
Don't go stealin my ish and using it for evil purposes.
I can tell you reeealy dug that "voodoo curses thru verses" line, it is gold after all
..oh and "flip the script like actor acrobatics"...that ones trademarked as well so no stealin
 
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You and raps are the same
well your about to get killed
about to let it burn bitch
call me Meek Mill
Chopping up the compitition
No repitition
If got beef man quit ya bitchin
And get back to the kitchen
Old school style
Did I forget to mention
You like like krabby patty
and I'm just flippin

somebody give me a real competion
you couldn't rhyme if your life depended on it
and your shit when it come to this game not to mention
that when im done with yo ass you'll have nothing left.....no way of redemption
you make prodigies of the compitetion......minor correction
i kill b1ches fa fun....cal that my obsession
the title for rap king and yo girl
all of that is in my possesion
playin wit yo girl and she's so sick
its time for an erection
poppin *****......now pink is her complection
 

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I love how no1 has replied to my rap xd, here i'll repost it

I'm hyped and i'm ready
I'm rhyming hard but steady
you can come at me
but there won't be much left
I'm stealin you with this flow
but you don't call it theft
i'm gonna blow your mind like itachi's truth
and the only action you get is in a kissing booth
you think your'e good,your'e not even worth it
all your rhyme suck it's like the word everybody's heard it
waiting for this poll, i might not get recognized
but your time is over your'e lookin at itachi's new eyes
 

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who else wanna go

Elementalist are you gunna reply
 

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somebody give me a real competion


you make prodigies of the compitetion......minor correction
I like that! Love how you auto corrected mid-verse, smooth

btw, im not trying to battle y'all just enjoying y'alls flow, if I haven't given you props take this as just that
 
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