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Okay, so I have an original character from Naruto. His arsenal is creative and new, suppose to bring some imagination to the world of Naruto. He is OP, but I don't want you to judge him on that. Tell me if his abilities are possible and/or viable.


I have an original character who uses a technique called Decay Release. Decay Release is a Kekkai Tota that causes rapid decay/growth of any object, organic or inorganic. It's essential component is a form of chakra called Decay Chakra.


Decay Chakra: Okay, so my OC comes from the village called the Village of The Dead. They practice a technique much like entering sage mode. But rather than drawing in natural energy, they draw in the aura of death from the millions of corpse and bones surrounding and underneath their village. They then take this aura (energy) and mix it with their own chakra to create Decay Chakra. Because of it's nature of corruption, it takes over all of the users pure chakra, almost like poisoning it. The user is then permanently given Decay Chakra. Decay Chakra comes in a single element, in a cloud-like substance that causes immediate rot/growth upon the users command. Unfortunately, only a select few in the clan posses bodies strong enough to wield such chakra. Most end up rotting themselves inside out after using it.

Decay Release: Okay, so after the user has manifested and nurtured this "Decay Release" within their body, it is automatically applied to every form of jutsu they use. Decay Release is considered a Kekkai Tota because Wind, water and fire are used to give it a specific shape and element. When my OC uses Fire Release, the fire bursts out in a yellow-ish gray color, both rotting and burning it's target. Water Release comes out in the same colour, almost acting like Acid upon contact as it eats at matter. Wind Release is just a mix of Decay Chakra pure, cloud-like form, plus a lot of basic wind.

Decay's Nature: Decay Chakra/Release has it's own way of decaying everything. For Fire, it suffocates it therefore canceling it out. For steels and metals, it rusts them to the point where they disintegrate. Wind and water are much more difficult to decay, which is why decay chakra infuses itself with water/wind, essentially taking control over the other users jutsu by corrupting it's chakra. Decay Chakra/Release even has it's own way of decaying chakra. It basically negates/neutralizes chakra, making it inept and capable of forming anything with structural stability.
Since Decay Chakra runs through the user, most physical contact with the user may result in the gradual decay of the opponent depending on where they striked the user. The second nature is rapid growth. On the users command, decay chakra can also cause rapid growth. This isn't considered healing, because rapid growth causes immediate regeneration and growth to the point where an organic organism would collapse over itself or explode. It's a nasty mess really.

Corpse Release: By injecting his Decay Chakra into the ground, my OC can give temporary life to any corpse, basically zombifying them. These corpse become extremely fast and strong, still falling apart and limping about, but able to move at near jonin speed and break through solid cement if tempted.

Decay Sage Mode: After gathering in actual natural energy and infusing it with his decay chakra, he can create decay senjutsu chakra, which allows him to enter sage mode. This boosts his strength, speed, and how many corpse he can summon. While this is helps him in the strength and speed department, it's not the main focus of DSM. By summoning a mass of corpse parts, like bones and meat, he can construct a shield around himself. He uses decay chakra to solidify and keep the structure stable, all while using decay chakra's rapid growth component to enlarge the size of this shield, granting himself a humanoid like armour.

Transformation States:The armor has 3 states depending on how much chakra he is willing to apply:

The first state grows the humanoid figure to 10 feet. The humanoid figure has self repair abilities and massive amounts of strength and durability. This transformation is to keep up with other transformations like KN6 Naruto.

The second state grows the humanoid figure to 50 feet. The humanoid figure is now capable of forming a Decay Chakra Bomb, similar in size to the TBB. This transformation is meant to keep up with Susanoo's and Bijuu's.

The third transformation grows the humanoid figure to 300 feet. This humanoid figure is used as a trump card, and a last resort not often used.

That's about it for this OC.
 

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The ability sounds cool.

Corpse control only gives life to recently deceased persons in the vicinity right? It's not like he/she can pull bones from the ground where bones shouldn't be.

And I'm not too keen on the zombie armour, sage mode, or Transformation states. Especially not the decaying chakra bomb.
 

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And I'm not too keen on the zombie armour, sage mode, or Transformation states. Especially not the decaying chakra bomb.

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This is what it looks like in all transformation states. Decaying chakra bomb is just a mass of the "Decay Chakra" formed into a large ball, just like Tailed Beast Bomb.

Corpse control only gives life to recently deceased persons in the vicinity right? It's not like he/she can pull bones from the ground where bones shouldn't be.

Correct, but who exactly knows how many corpse and bones are underground (since that is where the corpse rise from, just like zombies. It should be called Zombie Release :sdo:)
 
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Pretty cool. The transformations are a bit too much though, I'm a fan of them.
 

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It's not possible and doesn't make sense:

But rather than drawing in natural energy, they draw in the aura of death from the millions of corpse and bones surrounding and underneath their village.

Then you go on and say this:

Decay Release is considered a Kekkai Tota because Wind, water and fire are used to give it a specific shape and element.
 

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Is this RP related? Or Fanfic related? Or 。。。。。just wrong section
 

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This is what it looks like in all transformation states. Decaying chakra bomb is just a mass of the "Decay Chakra" formed into a large ball, just like Tailed Beast Bomb.



Correct, but who exactly knows how many corpse and bones are underground (since that is where the corpse rise from, just like zombies. It should be called Zombie Release :sdo:)

I still don't like it. Maybe because it's a humanoid flesh monster. Why not just give him/her a giant summoning to fuse with?

Back to Zombie Release. You remember how Pein had his paths in those chambers to preserve their bodies?

Okay, why not have the village do that to the ones that failed to control the decay chakra.

Have a big room with dead bodies in relatively pristine condition being preserved by Decay chakra. Your character can summon bodies from there if he/she ever runs low during battle.
 

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It's not possible and doesn't make sense:



Then you go on and say this:

I think he meant to say Decay release not created by those basic elements(fire, wind and water) but some new type of chakra only OC KKG/T can created. Just put my cent here.

I have an original character who uses a technique called Decay Release. Decay Release is a Kekkai Tota that causes rapid decay/growth of any object, organic or inorganic. It's essential component is a form of chakra called Decay Chakra.

This was his introduction
 
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I think he meant to say Decay release not created by those basic elements(fire, wind and water) but some new type of chakra only OC KKG/T can created. Just put my cent here.



This was his introduction

Mhm..
 

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I still don't like it. Maybe because it's a humanoid flesh monster. Why not just give him/her a giant summoning to fuse with?

Eh, I like the idea of transforming.

Back to Zombie Release. You remember how Pein had his paths in those chambers to preserve their bodies?

Okay, why not have the village do that to the ones that failed to control the decay chakra.

Have a big room with dead bodies in relatively pristine condition being preserved by Decay chakra. Your character can summon bodies from there if he/she ever runs low during battle.

I'll take this into consideration, though I still like the whole corpse rising from the ground thing. It's one of his common attacks, having corpse grab at their ankles.
 

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It's not possible and doesn't make sense

How so?

"But rather than drawing in natural energy, they draw in the aura of death from the millions of corpse and bones surrounding and underneath their village."

Then you go on and say this:

"Decay Release is considered a Kekkai Tota because Wind, water and fire are used to give it a specific shape and element."

The first quote if talking about Decay Chakra and the second is talking about Decay Release. Decay Chakra is an entirely new form of chakra, and Decay Release is a Kekkai Tota made up of that Chakra.
 

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This is what it looks like in all transformation states. Decaying chakra bomb is just a mass of the "Decay Chakra" formed into a large ball, just like Tailed Beast Bomb.



Correct, but who exactly knows how many corpse and bones are underground (since that is where the corpse rise from, just like zombies. It should be called Zombie Release :sdo:)

Sounds kinda gross lol, Attack on Titan honorable mention
 

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I think he meant to say Decay release not created by those basic elements(fire, wind and water) but some new type of chakra only OC KKG/T can create. Just put my cent here.



This was his introduction

In that case, it's more like a Hidden Technique than a Kekkei Genkai or Kekkei Tota.

They then take this aura (energy) and mix it with their own chakra to create Decay Chakra. Because of it's nature of corruption, it takes over all of the user's pure chakra, almost like poisoning it. The user is then permanently given Decay Chakra.

Decomposing material inserted in the body = Hidden Technique, resulting in side effects such as body deterioration and able to darken the aura of ones' chakra.

Kekkei Genkai (Bloodline Limit) = a clan that can produce chemical reactions in the body to envelop their opponent via contact or manipulation, causing them to rot away.

Kekkei Tota = mixing fire, wind, and water-based chakra to create Decay Release.

Most of that stuff is wishful thinking like seriously:

give temporary life to any corpse

Your power it to destroy, not create life.

And when you know you can't compete.... You tried it: xd

This transformation is meant to keep up with Susanoo's and Bijuu's.
 

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In that case, it's more like a Hidden Technique than a Kekkei Genkai or Kekkei Tota.



Decomposing material inserted in the body = Hidden Technique, resulting in side effects such as body deterioration and able to darken the aura of ones' chakra.

Kekkei Genkai (Bloodline Limit) = a clan that can produce chemical reactions in the body to envelop their opponent via contact or manipulation, causing them to rot away.

Kekkei Tota = mixing fire, wind, and water-based chakra to create Decay Release.

Most of that stuff is wishful thinking like seriously

Thanks for the information, I need your criticism to make this character work. I've been trimming down a lot of things, trying to make his abilities plausible and viable. I think most of this stuff is reasonable and logical in the world of Naruto, all of this except that transformation. That's more of a ass pull trump card. I can cut the third transformation to make it less powerful. If the first is for people like KN6 and the second is for Bijuu's, the third is overkill.

Your power it to destroy, not create life.

And when you know you can't compete.... You tried it: xd

I already said that despite being called Decay Release, decay chakra has both decay and growth factors depending on the users command :sdo3:
 
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