LUMOS ULTIMATUM
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Page 1
Kakashi(shocked): Gai, you....
Gai jumps away from kakashi and Lee. He braces himself and concentrates. His aura becomes a fiercer blue.
Lee: Sensei...thank you!
Gai: Roooooooooooar!
SFX: Ground shaking
Gai: Dai hachi gēto kaikō! (Eight Gate opening)
SFX: Huge blast! Annhilation!
Page 2
Kakashi, Lee and the others are blown away by a tremendous shockwave.
Kakashi(bracing himself): Such power!!!
Gaara: Is this really taijutsu?
Minato: His power has become a level on its own
Lee: This is the eight gate!!!
Scene changes to Madara
Madara(amazed): He can open the eighth gate? Perhaps, I am underestimating him too much.
Page 3
A sphere of red energy is shown in the center of the battlefield. Energy erupts from the top of the sphere into the skies, repelling clouds away.
SFX: Sky changing
The sky changes into a dark purple while dawn arrives.
SFX: Burning! Melting!
The roots of the god tree are blazing from the red energy and some boulders nearby are dissolving under the extreme heat.
Page 4
Scene changes to orochimaru
Orochimaru: This feeling... it's getting stronger by the second
Suigetsu(sweating): Karin, what's happening over there.
Karin goes in sensor mode.
Kabuto: I believe that is the eight gates. If this is so, I need to hurry.
Suigetsu: Wait a minute. What are the eight gates?
Orochimaru (smiling): Originally, the eight gates belong to the previous taijutsu master Shun Lee. He was also the first human to have used taijutsu and the eight gates, doors that unlock the spiritual centers of the body.
Page 5
Orochimaru: However he died after using seven gates and the power of the eight gate remained unknown. Rumours say that the opening of last gate grant the user physical prowess similar to rikudo's younger son, the ancestor of the senjus.
Kabuto(continuing): The elder son was the one who first established a link between nature and humans. He harnessed natural energy and became a perfect sage.
Orochimaru: You seem to have done your own research, Kabuto.
Karin opens her eyes
Karin: I can't tell what's happening. This energy is definitely not chakra and it is obscuring my senses.
Orochimaru: Looks like there are still able ninjas to oppose Madara.
Page 6
Scene changes to kakashi and the others
They have gotten farther away from Gai and Madara.
Kakashi,Gaara, Minato and Lee: A dragon?
A dragon seems to emanate from gai.
SFX: Walking
A figure walks through a mist of smoke.
SFX: Halt
Madara: (His power is affecting my senses)
SFX: Dash!
Page 7
Madara charges towards Gai.
Madara: It's over!!!
He sends all six spheres at Gai.
SFX: Flash
Something like a comet emerges from the smoke.
SFX: Multiple Strikes
All the black spheres are repelled at once and directed kilometres away before exploding.
SFX: Explosions
Page 8
Madara: Where did he go?
Gai: Behind you!!!
SFX: Kick
Madara guards himself with a staff which shatters apart.
Madara: What Power!
SFX: Punch
Madara is sent crashing on the ground on his feet from gai's punch.
Gai charges again
Page 9
Gai: Ryū kōkū (Dragon Flight)
SFX: Charge
Madara uses onmyoudon shield to guard himself
SFX: Block
The sheer power crushes the shield.
SFX: Shattering
Madara flies away.
SFX: Hands opened
Madara: Let's see you get out of this. Oumyoudon-Shift!
SFX: Black fire forms
Black fire surrounds Madara.
SFX: Handseals
Madara performs seals and extend his hands
Page 10
SFX: Firing
Giant black wave covers the vicinity.
SFX: Smoke
Gai emerges unscathed.
Madara: Impressive indeed. That aura can even deflect my oumyoudon. Let's see...
SFX: Running
Gai erupts across the ground and appears above, behind Madara.
Madara: Careless with that power, aren't you?
The black fire covers Madara and acts as protection.
Page 11
SFX: Gathering
Energy gathers instantly in gai's right arm.
Gai: Ryū shōdō (Dragon Impulse)
SFX: Firing
An impulse of energy is shot from gai's right hand and it collide with Madara's onmyoudon.
SFX: Collision! Explosion!
SFX: Crashing
Madara(coughing): He managed to counter the second state of my oumyoudon. I cannot believe he pushed me so far.
Gai lands, focuses and bring his hands together.
Gai: This attack will be the last. I am going to drag you with me to the netherworld!
Madara smiles.
Page 12
Scene changes to Kamui Dimension
Kurama has been sealed and obito is panting.
Zetsu: Damn it! I have lost control.
Obito(eyes barely opened): Sakura, what's his status?
Sakura(awkward grin) : His pulse is returning!
Obito: Huff! Huff! Good...
Obito falls on the ground.
Sakura(shouting): Obito???
Page 13
Scene changes.
Oblivion
Naruto: Where am I ? This is so dark!
Naruto: What's this light?
Naruto run toward the white light far away in the dark.
As he moves, the darkness vanishes little by little, giving way to the same place Naruto has met his mother and father.
Finally, Naruto recognised his surroundings.
Page 14
Naruto: What am I doing here?
Unknown voice: Shukaku, Matatabi, Isobu.....You will all be united one day..
SFX: Voice fades.
Unknown voice: Shinju! You will no longer pursue humanity! Fuuinjutsu-
SFX:Voice fades
Naruto(shouting): Who is there?
Calm voice: See for yourself!
Naruto:!!!
Naruto turns and sees an old man. (He has no rinnegan)
Naruto: Who are you?
Old man: A reflection of your past self!
WHO IS THIS MYSTERIOUS OLD MAN AND WHAT IS MADARA PLANNING?
Kakashi(shocked): Gai, you....
Gai jumps away from kakashi and Lee. He braces himself and concentrates. His aura becomes a fiercer blue.
Lee: Sensei...thank you!
Gai: Roooooooooooar!
SFX: Ground shaking
Gai: Dai hachi gēto kaikō! (Eight Gate opening)
SFX: Huge blast! Annhilation!
Page 2
Kakashi, Lee and the others are blown away by a tremendous shockwave.
Kakashi(bracing himself): Such power!!!
Gaara: Is this really taijutsu?
Minato: His power has become a level on its own
Lee: This is the eight gate!!!
Scene changes to Madara
Madara(amazed): He can open the eighth gate? Perhaps, I am underestimating him too much.
Page 3
A sphere of red energy is shown in the center of the battlefield. Energy erupts from the top of the sphere into the skies, repelling clouds away.
SFX: Sky changing
The sky changes into a dark purple while dawn arrives.
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SFX: Burning! Melting!
The roots of the god tree are blazing from the red energy and some boulders nearby are dissolving under the extreme heat.
Page 4
Scene changes to orochimaru
Orochimaru: This feeling... it's getting stronger by the second
Suigetsu(sweating): Karin, what's happening over there.
Karin goes in sensor mode.
Kabuto: I believe that is the eight gates. If this is so, I need to hurry.
Suigetsu: Wait a minute. What are the eight gates?
Orochimaru (smiling): Originally, the eight gates belong to the previous taijutsu master Shun Lee. He was also the first human to have used taijutsu and the eight gates, doors that unlock the spiritual centers of the body.
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Page 5
Orochimaru: However he died after using seven gates and the power of the eight gate remained unknown. Rumours say that the opening of last gate grant the user physical prowess similar to rikudo's younger son, the ancestor of the senjus.
Kabuto(continuing): The elder son was the one who first established a link between nature and humans. He harnessed natural energy and became a perfect sage.
Orochimaru: You seem to have done your own research, Kabuto.
Karin opens her eyes
Karin: I can't tell what's happening. This energy is definitely not chakra and it is obscuring my senses.
Orochimaru: Looks like there are still able ninjas to oppose Madara.
Page 6
Scene changes to kakashi and the others
They have gotten farther away from Gai and Madara.
Kakashi,Gaara, Minato and Lee: A dragon?
A dragon seems to emanate from gai.
SFX: Walking
A figure walks through a mist of smoke.
SFX: Halt
Madara: (His power is affecting my senses)
SFX: Dash!
Page 7
Madara charges towards Gai.
Madara: It's over!!!
He sends all six spheres at Gai.
SFX: Flash
Something like a comet emerges from the smoke.
SFX: Multiple Strikes
All the black spheres are repelled at once and directed kilometres away before exploding.
SFX: Explosions
Page 8
Madara: Where did he go?
Gai: Behind you!!!
SFX: Kick
Madara guards himself with a staff which shatters apart.
Madara: What Power!
SFX: Punch
Madara is sent crashing on the ground on his feet from gai's punch.
Gai charges again
Page 9
Gai: Ryū kōkū (Dragon Flight)
SFX: Charge
Madara uses onmyoudon shield to guard himself
SFX: Block
The sheer power crushes the shield.
SFX: Shattering
Madara flies away.
SFX: Hands opened
Madara: Let's see you get out of this. Oumyoudon-Shift!
SFX: Black fire forms
Black fire surrounds Madara.
SFX: Handseals
Madara performs seals and extend his hands
Page 10
SFX: Firing
Giant black wave covers the vicinity.
SFX: Smoke
Gai emerges unscathed.
Madara: Impressive indeed. That aura can even deflect my oumyoudon. Let's see...
SFX: Running
Gai erupts across the ground and appears above, behind Madara.
Madara: Careless with that power, aren't you?
The black fire covers Madara and acts as protection.
Page 11
SFX: Gathering
Energy gathers instantly in gai's right arm.
Gai: Ryū shōdō (Dragon Impulse)
SFX: Firing
An impulse of energy is shot from gai's right hand and it collide with Madara's onmyoudon.
SFX: Collision! Explosion!
SFX: Crashing
Madara(coughing): He managed to counter the second state of my oumyoudon. I cannot believe he pushed me so far.
Gai lands, focuses and bring his hands together.
Gai: This attack will be the last. I am going to drag you with me to the netherworld!
Madara smiles.
Page 12
Scene changes to Kamui Dimension
Kurama has been sealed and obito is panting.
Zetsu: Damn it! I have lost control.
Obito(eyes barely opened): Sakura, what's his status?
Sakura(awkward grin) : His pulse is returning!
Obito: Huff! Huff! Good...
Obito falls on the ground.
Sakura(shouting): Obito???
Page 13
Scene changes.
Oblivion
Naruto: Where am I ? This is so dark!
Naruto: What's this light?
Naruto run toward the white light far away in the dark.
As he moves, the darkness vanishes little by little, giving way to the same place Naruto has met his mother and father.
Finally, Naruto recognised his surroundings.
Page 14
Naruto: What am I doing here?
Unknown voice: Shukaku, Matatabi, Isobu.....You will all be united one day..
SFX: Voice fades.
Unknown voice: Shinju! You will no longer pursue humanity! Fuuinjutsu-
SFX:Voice fades
Naruto(shouting): Who is there?
Calm voice: See for yourself!
Naruto:!!!
Naruto turns and sees an old man. (He has no rinnegan)
Naruto: Who are you?
Old man: A reflection of your past self!
WHO IS THIS MYSTERIOUS OLD MAN AND WHAT IS MADARA PLANNING?
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