[Approved] Melanie Iglesias v2

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✧ Basic Information ✧


  • Name: Melanie Iglesias
  • Nickname: Dark Beauty
  • Gender: Female
  • Age: 25
  • Clan: Nekura


Looks

Melanie is a very attractive and beautiful girl. Slim, very fit from her constant trainings that she has received. She usually likes to wear clothes that fits tightly with her body. Allowing her fluid movements when battling with minimal restrictions on what she can do. The clothes also allows her skin to breathe and get more air. Helping the circulation of the blood more when the heart rate picks up. When and during the cold it acts as a thermal and keeps the body heat within the body, allowing Melanie to keep warm longer than normal. During the days when it’s hot, the clothes acts as a ventilator, releasing the excess heat out of the body, allowing the body to cool faster and prevents dehydration. Normally she has these and wears it all the time, from top to bottom in individual undergarments. Melanie also wears casual attire that is on par with a model. She can have her hair tied backwards in a ponytail as well as letting it hang loose. She appears and looks thin and petite, however her muscles are not bulky for a reason, she is a beautiful woman who developed a way to be powerful as anyone but looking sexy. Her new found way of training allows her to have that sexy figure but yet, deadly as anyone within the world.


Personality

Melanie has one of the best personalities that you can have as a woman, however whenever she steps onto the battlefield, she shows no mercy. She has that killer instinct during battles. Her shinobi way is to kill first and ask questions later. Nevertheless, when she is out and about with friends or even meeting strangers she is nice as anyone else can be. Some say because of this she might have two different personalities. The scary part is that she can change to either or easily and it’s just like turning on a light switch in her head. She is also very cunning, she learned to use her looks and figure to get the things that she wants with minimal risk. She will try to avoid confrontation must as possible as she only wants to attract attention through her looks. Though, when she has to fight, she will show no mercy. Some say that she actually enjoys battling and killing off her foe or at least she seem to enjoy it.​







✧ Village Info ✧

Village of Birth: Amegakure
Village of Alliance: /​






✧ Rank and Chakra Info ✧


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Ninja Rank:
Unofficial Sage​

Specialty:
Satsui no Hado
Genjutsu
Water
Taijutsu
Sound​

Elements:
Nicotine
Earth
Fire
Wind
Water
Lightning
Sound​



Your Ninjutsu:
Kenjutsu
Ninjutsu
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Fuuinjutsu
Nekura Clan Techniques
Satsui no Hado
NB Taijutsu Minus Restricted
Jeet Kune Do
Great Blue Heron
Toads
Medical Training In progress

Weapons and Accessories:
Custom Weapon - A necklace that Melanie came too a long time ago by an elderly man. The necklace has all sorts of weird powers where it has it's own chakra signature that is able to disperse all it's chakra in an instant. However it's a supportive weapon that is able to aide the user with it's own chakra by feeding extra chakra into the user. When active, the user gains more power and speed through the extra constant emitting of chakra into the user. Nonetheless, Melanie wears this necklace at all times and able to active it at will. All she has to do is activate it through mixing her own chakra into the necklace and will activate on it's own.
Maboroshi Kagirinai | Eternal Vision
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 [when active]
Damage: N/A
Description: Made during ancient times in the high mountains by multiple black smiths. Forged in fire with silver and an unknown metal to make it indistructable. As well as infusing the necklace with their own chakra. It has said that the necklaces power are the ability to protect it's user and give extra abilities to the user who holds it. Through the use of pure chakra that it emmits and reacts to the users chakra. The necklace would be activated by two ways. One, by channeling the users own chakra into the necklace, thus creating a reaction with the necklace and mixing both chakra's together. Two, by the necklaces own will of being able to sense the user’s chakra and constantly monitoring the user’s chakra to determine if there are any foreign chakra within their body. Once this happens the necklace will emmit a thick chakra layer around the users body. Protecting them from projectiles and debris that may be falling from the sky or towards the user. The chakra that is layered around the users body will also enhance speed and strength for the user as such the user will be able to move like lee without weights and can punch strong as if they used the super added weighted technique when the strike with a taijutsu move. However this only lasts until the duration of the necklace’s activation. Also the necklace was forged in fire and has a natural affinity to it. Thus being able to absorb B rank and below fire through the users will. Since the necklace has an affinity to fire, smoke will emmit from the user through the chakra layers around the body, long as the necklace is active. However the smoke itself is not harmful to the user as it is created from their own chakra. Once the user activates the necklace, the user will start to glow red and while active at any given point through the users will, the necklace can give the user an influx of all of it’s chakra into the user all at once, however once that happens the necklace will stay deactivated for the remain of the battle

Abilities:
-Activates, once the user channels chakra into the necklace or When the necklace chakra forcefully enters the users tenkets on it’s own.
-User will start to glow red once the CW is active
-Able to absorb B rank and below Katon jutsu's
-Can give the user an influx of chakra all at once from the necklace, however only once per battle and stay’s deactivated for the rest of the battle.
-Adds a thick protection layer of chakra around the user's whole body.
-Emmits smoke from the user's body from the necklace's chakra as it has affinity to fire


Restrictions:
-Lasts 5 turns once active
-Able to activate twice per battle
-Need to skip one turns before activating it once more
-Necklace constantly feeds the users chakra
-Can only absorb fire three times per battle
-Can not absorb fire consecutively on the same turn
-Can only absorb the fire when extremly close to the source or the jutsu
-Absorbing fire counts towards the users three moves allowed per turn
-Only smoke users are able to manipulate smoke emmiting from the body
-Smoke only emits from the body when this CW is active
-Only to be used by Vision
Dual Katana - She always have dual samurai katana's always on her back. Always ready to strike in one smooth motion. The sword itself has a round black handle for easy grip, also the blade is made up of a white pearly diamonds. It is incredibly light and balanced slightly more towards the blade end for extra power.​








✧ Background Info ✧


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Prologue: Escape From Death​
During the decline of national power, the reign of the Five Great Countries was crumbling. Along their borders, skirmishes with smaller nations broke out frequently. The prolonged war gradually spread its fires far and wide, until at last, it developed into what is known as the Third Shinobi World War. This turned into an unprecedented war of attrition, tormenting all nations with a shortage of war potential. Young children were not spared from the experience of war, being thrown into the fronts like animals for the slaughter.

During the chaos and turmoil, a secret prophecy was told within the Land of the Rain. The prophecy foretold of a child who would reshape the very foundation of the shinobi world. Whether this change would bring peace or chaos to the world, had yet to be determined. The date of the prophesized birth was guarded in the intelligence of the higher ups of Amegakure and a mission, classed above top secret, was set in motion. All expecting woman around that time were to be heavily guarded and kept away from the war to assure their safety and that of the child. The mission was thought to be a failure as all the women under guard were killed; however, one woman survived the chaos that ensued and escaped, in secrecy, to give birth to her baby girl.

Isamu and Mizuki were two of the shinobi within Amegakure’s secret operation. Married, and expecting a healthy baby, they partook on the mission to protect Mizuki and their unborn child. Both shinobi had managed to escaped the clutches of the war and the assassins from various villages that learned of the prophecy and take refuge briefly. After a narrow escape from a team of Konoha shinobi, Isamu and Mizuki decided that their best option was to go in hiding, away from Amegakure and the war. They ran from the Land of Rain, masking their identities by changing their appearance and surnames and hiding their status as shinobi. They took safe haven within the Land of Wind, near the outskirts of Sunagakure. No more than a few days later, Mizuki gave birth to her daughter, Melanie Iglesias…this was 25 years ago.

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Chapter One: The Begining​
During her childhood Melanie was constantly training with Isamu. She began like any young kunoichi, learning the basics, growing and mastering more skillful abilities as time progressed. Isamu placed emphasis on Melanie’s physical characteristics, valuing the necessity of endurance; as a result, Melanie developed a stronger physical being than most. Isamu, often left Melanie to fend for herself against common bandits and thugs that would harass them; it was his way of exercising her skills through experience. However, even as a child, such tasks were merely tedious. After countless battles and training Melanie gained experience enough to begin learning more advanced Ninjutsu. Melanie progressed phenomenally in her training; however, she would descend into the true world of the shinobi soon in her short life. At the age of 14, Melanie came home to the horrific sight of her parents laying dead on the ground. In that sudden moment a chaotic flurry of sadness, fear, anger and confusion spiraled through Melanie’s head as she starred at the lifeless corpses of her parents. No evidence to suggest what occurred or why could be found…Melanie was just alone and with no explanation. To gain a grip on her sanity, Melanie calloused her heart and feelings and put the events behind her and she strode into the real world.

With no money and resources Melanie begged on the streets, as well resorting in robbing other villagers to survive on a daily basis. Without friends, at such a young age, she meagerly fought on her own. Melanie never neglected her shinobi training during her rough times. She continued to progress while homeless on the streets. Her abilities advanced well to that of any jounin. Spending years alone fending for herself and valuing her survival, doing whatever was necessary just to survive became second nature.

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Chapter Two: Gaining Experience​
Melanie progressed her skills vigilantly, however she had only ever used them for petty stealing and defeating common thugs and low level shinobi. Melanie had never had a true challenge, but that didn’t stop her from becoming arrogant. She gained great confidence in her skills, but that was shattered when she came across a kunoichi with menacing crimson colored eyes. The Black Rose, Akiza. Melanie’s fight with her would be the last she ever fought where she underestimated the powers of her opponent. As if it were child’s play, Akiza took down Melanie, only sparing her life for the sake of her own pride of not killing a child. Melanie would later find out that the Black Rose was hailed as the Sage of the Sharingan. Melanie’s motivation changed after that battle and realization…Her drive was no longer only to avenge her parents but to have a rematch with Black Rose Akiza… To defeat the Sage of Sharingan! With the goal at hand, Melanie set her journeys out to gain more power. Knowing that her current abilities were not enough, she first set out to master the elementals. With that in mind, Melanie soon crossed paths with a shinobi by the name of Wesobi. The tales of the shinobi Wesobi were legendary throughout the Land of Fire. Wesobi was reluctant at the girl’s sudden request for him to train her, however he was taken back by her surprising lack of training in the grand scheme. Wesobi agreed to quench the thirst of the aspiring young kunoichi and he took her as his personal student. He first taught her the fire and earth natures to give her some more variety in fighting using ninjutsu. However their training together was halted as Wesobi took a sudden leave from Konoha, and Melanie as well. All that was left for Melanie was a small note stating that he had other obligations to attend to outside the village and their training would resume upon his return.

Shortly after reading Wesobi’s letter, Melanie took leave from Konoha as well. Without Wesobi there was no reason for her to remain and she set her sights to continue her training elsewhere until his return. During her travels, Melanie met several shinobi and befriended them in the way of the shinobi, through battle. One of the most memorable was when she met a person named Baldy; having her first real fight with a skilled shinobi other than Akiza. Baldy was an odd fellow…as the name suggested he was…bald and he would get upset with comments that targetd his baldness. Melanie’s fight with Baldy gave her knowledge of the Forbidden: “Wallie no Jutsu”. It’s a forbidden technique as it is against the laws of nature to write such monstrosities that destroy one’s ‘god damn’ meter. Overwhelmed during battles, she took that experience and tried to make the jutsu her own. Though it was just too much to do that and revamped her fighting style to fit her best. Baldy had a bunch of friends as well. Mealanie spent more time with Baldy after their fight, meeting several other characters like Erzo, Scaze, and Kryptiic. Though Melanie left shortly after meeting the others to continue her own pursuits. Not too long after, Melanie met two other individuals, Piccolosan and -Yard-. She learned of their reputations as senior ranking students under esteemed sensei and she managed to trick them into advancing her in her elemental trainings; mastering the wind and water natures in no time flat. Melanie later found out about her natural affinity towards water release through her training. The way it came so easy to her made her pursue further training and she developed the ability to perform even the most advanced of techniques with a single hand seal. -Yard- was more than just Melanie’s teacher, he became one of her closest friends and even taught her beyond the elements and how to effectively use them through battle training. Through events unknown to Melanie, he decided that fighting wasn’t what he was meant for. Thus leaving everything behind and his plan, without a word and Melanie hasn’t heard from him since.

Upon further travels, Melanie encountered a sadist by the name of Gobi Gobletsson. Though he was a sensei from somewhere unknown to her, he took her in and taught her the art of illusions. Always messing with her mind and breaking her down, he showed her how to use the illusion as a tool of deception to gain the advantage in battles. She immediately fell in love of using genjutsu and studied extensively and incorporated those techniques into her fighting style. Even after completing her training under Gobi she continued in her exploits with genjutsu, wishing to truly master the deceptive arts.

While looking for her next sensei, Melanie found herself returning to the Land of the Wind and Sunagakure. There she found her first sensei in Wesobi. They conversed for a while, having a drink and just talking. Then Wesobi mentioned that she should join Suna. As he would be able to extensively continue her training there. Melanie agreed with haste as it meant the reconvening of her training with Wesobi. With the decision made, Wesobi took her to see the Kazekage, Emperor. At the office, she found out that the Kazekage is also a sadist. Evil minded personality and ruthless. Though he accepted her into the village as if she were already family. Several months had passed by and she met a lot of good people like, Jacob Moore, The Pervy Sage, Jokey, Rexii, Gaara, Uzumaki Naruta, Method, Daemon, Wind, Zoro, Shaggy, and others. There were a lot more experienced fighters and sensei’s that were able to teach her all the knowledge that she wanted. Throughout the years, some came and went but for the ones that left, she keeps a good relationship with others. Melanie also continued to train with Wesobi, who taught her advanced form of ninjutsu and also she has met other senpai’s within the village and mastered the lightning element.

During a sparring session with shinobi’s within the village, The Pervy Sage, decided to teach Melanie and give her some battle training. At this time she continuously trained and fought The Pervy Sage and learned everything she could from him. While fighting and show casing some skill, The Pervy Sage allowed her to teach others to pass on the knowledge of fighting.

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Chapter Three: New Adventure! Capture The Strange Illusion!​
A few months after the completion of her training with Pervy Sage, Melanie began to hear of rumors throughout the village of Sunagakure. Turns out, the rumors were based on a shinobi's last mission where he had encountered a great ninja that used all sorts of different kind of genjutsu. The shinobi didn’t fight against the gen user however he managed to bring back a message from the shinobi, challenging aspiring genjutsu shinobi to seek him out. Melanie, as she have fell in love of the art of illusions, thought really hard about it. Melanie didn’t think twice about pursuing the offer as she had fallen in love with the genjutsu arts. She packed her things and departed from Suna to go search for the legendary genjutsu user.

The trip was a bit hard as difficult as the task of finding the shinobi was a challenge all in itself. However, Melanie wouldn’t have to face the trek alone. As she traveled, she came across a familiar face who had also heard of the legendary Genjutsu user, her old friend Erzo. Strangely while they were conversing to see what the whole genjutsu thing was about, suddenly a voice appeared out of nowhere and a figure appeared shortly after. Startled at first but, Melanie figured out it was an illusion almost immediately. Erzo on the other hand was a bit lost. Nonetheless, Melanie concluded that the person that casted a genjutsu on them was very powerful. Thus the training had begun and Melanie had to calm Erzo down and explain things slowly so he could understand. Even though this was the first time she had ever encountered such a person, Melanie had to find out the master’s name. Through some persuasion, she found out the sensei's name, Scorps. The training was grueling and rigorous, even for genjutsu standards. The training lasted much longer than anticipated by Melanie. At some point during the middle of their training, a shinobi by the name of Reborn had come and taken the helm as Melanie and Erzo’s teacher in the genjutsu arts. Reborn was rumored to be a true prodigy in the genjutsu arts, having been personally trained by both Scorps and Lili-Chwan, arguably the best genjutsu users known.


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Chapter Four: Sittin' on the Mountain top beating my drums​
Time skip.... While the intense training had concluded, worn out and tired, Melanie layed down to take a break before heading home. Erzo in the meantime left to go back to his village. As the days passed, Melanie was able to regain her strength to be able to continue to travel back to Suna. On her way several things happened as she comes across a strange person that she might have seen her in the past. A strange person with a black cloak with red clouds. Not sure what that means however, events take place as this person teaches Melanie a new element. Xylon, agree's to teach Melanie the sound element and another training session commence. Not long after training with Xylon, he who is from akatsuki explained to Melanie that they had a spot open within his organization. Xylon some how knew of Melanie's story and knew her well, thus the training is such a hard element to master. After training the offer was made and Melanie decided to think it over before making a quick decision. She headed back to Suna to be back with her village mates.

Not too long after she made her return, -Yard- makes a dramatic return and called out Melanie for a friendly conversation and a fight. Howard was there as well accompanying him as he was bored and had nothing to do. Melanie left the gates to talk with her friend, however little did Melanie knew, -Yard- wasn't there for a friendly chatter. He had a mission this time and he was there for Melanie. To take her to Akatsuki so that she would join. However -Yard- wanted a battle as he hasn't battled in a long time from his departure, battling commenced, Melanie instructed her village mates not to interrfere as she was afraid that they would get hurt.

In the meantime while Howard was waiting and doing nothing, he decided that he wanted to have fun and started attacking the village. A few more Akatsuki members arrived to do the same. Melanie didn't know exactly what was going on, however a few villagers died during this attacking. Finally Wesobi shows back up with the same cloak that everyone else was wearing. This time he told Melanie to join them and so she did. She left with Wesobi back to Amegakure where she recieved the Bya Ring. Now she was part of the Akatsuki along with her sensei's and friends in Wesobi, Xylon, -Yard- and Howard.

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Chapter Five: Akatsuki Business, New Found Powers, Nekura Clan​
Within the organization, there were new members. Lord of Kaos joined and Melanie and both had hit it off and became good friends. They both liked to smoke, drink and play, they had things in commoon that most hasn't in a friendship. One day LOK had told Melanie that he wanted to teach her his new fighting style. Intrigued by the explanation given, Melanie wanted to learn. During that training she had learned the art of Satsui no Hado. She develeoped and hoaned her sills in it and found out she had a pink chakra that covers her when she uses this style. The training wasn't easy but it impressed LOK. One thing that Melanie didn't know was that he was a clan leader of the Nekura Clan. After the training, he again offered more power to Melanie, offering her the chance of getting into the Nekura Clan. Again intrigued by the abilities and the complement of her fighting style. She wanted to get in and increase her abilities, so she agreed again, this time LOK took her and introduced her to The Doctor, another leader of the clan who decided, who gets in or not. This is where she recieved the mark and it is located on the back, right shoulder blade. From that day foward, Melanie was in the Nekura Clan.


To be continued from next update...






✧ OTHER ✧

Water - Throughout her travels and adventures, she was able to meet a powerful senpai who was willing to teach her the suiton element. Through this training Melanie gain confidence and mastery over the suiton element as well as gained a life long friend. Though through this rigorous training and constantly practicing using this element, she was able to gain the ability to perform all jutsu’s with a single hand seal. Even her dearest friend -Yard- would have been proud.

Genjutsu - Due to training with Scorps and Reborn[Genjutsu Masters], Melanie extended her knowledge in genjutsu and it's core abilities and ideas. Idea's exchanged constantly back and forth further expanding the mind. Reborn has taught Melanie exclusively alone, as she was his brightest genjutsu student. She is now part of an exclusive club that is made up of the most prominant Genjutsu Masters.

Sound - Melanie, having undergone Sound training with Lord of Kaos, has studied the resonant frequency of every possible object. With this study, he has found that as long as you go beyond the resonate frequency of of any one object, it is possible to shatter more than one object at a time indirectly.

Nekura - As a default for aquiring the powers of the biju, Melanie is immuned to all genjutsu and foreign chakra. Her nekura way is the way of Dark Beauty, hence the nickname.
Jutsu are 50% stronger than a seer's, effects similarly magnified. Keigoku can pass through only small bushes, rain, mist, or small rocks. An unwanted ability is that of the Nekura's bodies, after or during a battle, being so filled with Keigoku that they reject any foreign chakra from entering their body, and stop it instantly. This means that medical ninjutsu have to force harder to overcome the natural resistance, making Nekura extremely hard to heal, roughly three times that of a normal patient.

Satsui no Hadō - Through the training of Satsui no Hadō, Melanies basic taijutsu abilities slightly gets inscreased from a normal strong fist user. With extensive training by LOK, Melanies reflexes, speed and agility are increased. She carries the rank of Master of Satsui no Hadō.
*Users of this art have slightly better reflexes, increased agility, when compared to Strong Fist users and speeds increased to slightly faster than Rock Lee (Part II) without weights but still lower than EIG speeds.*

TheWhiteRing [Bya] - As a member of the Akatsuki, Melanie always wears her ring on the right middle finger. With it she gains increased manipulation of Wind. Wind techniques strength are increased by 10 and uses 1/3 less handseals.
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✧ JUTSU ✧

Seals - Melanie has various seals located throughout her body. On her lower back she has the Reverse Four Symbol Seal. On her right arm on the fore arm are kanji seals Fire|Water|Wind|Earth|Lightning. Prepared in advance as a tattoo instead of scrolls in case it's needed to seal incoming elemental attacks. Melanie also has various tattoo's throughout her body, mainly towards the hip and stomach on the right side to summon basic weapons and tools. Melanie also has a tattoo on the left side of the hip where she can summon A small elegant blade that suits Melanie very well, it strikes quickly, and able to maneuver easily around the hand. With black hand and a sleek blade design, it has an even weight distrubution from handle to blade. [This is just a regular sword/dagger hybrid summoned through a tattoo]

(Ura Shishō Fūinjutsu) - Reverse Four Symbols Sealing Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is a sealing jutsu that is placed upon the users body, setting it to activate on the users death. It seals everything within a large, nearby, spherical into the users body.
Note: Can only be activated upon the users death.
Note: The placement of this seal must be stated on the user's biography.

(Ho/Mizu/Kaze/Tsuchi/Rai Houin) - Fire/Water/Wind/Earth/Lightning Sealing Method
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user takes out a scroll, and writes the name of the element they wish to seal in it. They then make four handseals, and a vapour comes out of the scroll, envelops the technique they wish to seal and seals it back into the scroll.
Note: This technique can only seal one technique up to S-rank per usage
Note: This technique may be used only thrice






✧ Theme and Background Music ✧







✧ Battles ✧


Won: One
Lost: Zero







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~Approved~



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Re: Melanie Iglesias V2

¬_¬ Overpowered


Awesome bio Vision. I like the layout and your collection of abilities. You make me feel so small and useless with all those extras. I wish the best and I hope you enjoy your bio once it gets approved. May I ask what took so long? .-.
 
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