Ensifer
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The first page will start with Minato obviously talking to the Yin part of the Kyuubi that's sealed inside him, so many new questions clouding his mind.
"Minato: Who are you, and why are you here?" he asks, despite the fact that he should had known about it already considering he's been using his Nine-Tails Chakra Mode out of the blue.
"Yin Kyuubi: Oh I will tell you, after a couple of unnecessary flashbacks that should have been explained already early on in this series!"
Then it follows with a plot convenience flashback on how Minato obtained the Yin side of the Kyuubi, wasting 6 pages in the process.
"Why didn't you tell me you were only the Yang part, Kurama?!" Naruto yells out, only to come with a casual retort by his beast.
"Oh, I didn't think it was important at all during these years..." he says, infuriating Naruto(and maybe perhaps the readers as well)....
Meanwhile we shift to the other side of the battlefield to Madara & Hashirama.
"Rock, Paper, Scissors!" They both shout, realizing that they are constantly at a draw, instead of taking the fight seriously in combating Juubito, our greatest Hokage and his boyf... enemy are busy engaged in a fierce game of Rock, Paper, Scissors.
"No fair, you're cheating with your Sharingan!" Hashirama points out, their argument on the matter of the legitimacy of the game wasting 5 more pages of the manga.
Meanwhile back to the main fight with Juubito...
"Okay Sasuke, it's time to use another combination att...." Naruto was about to plan out before he was rudely interrupted by Kiba and the rest of Konoha 11.
"You guys had your fun, but it's time once again for Konoha 11 to show off their special attacks(despite doing no real damage like the previous time as evidence which was evidenced before)!" Kiba screams out, once again showing off his abilities during this crisis of the world's end with an unamused Juubito...
Thus 4 more pages were wasted on the other side characters showing off their new abilities that's (apparently) important to the plot, with Naruto and Sasuke in the background.
The manga ends and Kishimoto announces another break for the following two weeks .... atleast he told the fans this time about it...
"Minato: Who are you, and why are you here?" he asks, despite the fact that he should had known about it already considering he's been using his Nine-Tails Chakra Mode out of the blue.
"Yin Kyuubi: Oh I will tell you, after a couple of unnecessary flashbacks that should have been explained already early on in this series!"
Then it follows with a plot convenience flashback on how Minato obtained the Yin side of the Kyuubi, wasting 6 pages in the process.
"Why didn't you tell me you were only the Yang part, Kurama?!" Naruto yells out, only to come with a casual retort by his beast.
"Oh, I didn't think it was important at all during these years..." he says, infuriating Naruto(and maybe perhaps the readers as well)....
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Meanwhile we shift to the other side of the battlefield to Madara & Hashirama.
"Rock, Paper, Scissors!" They both shout, realizing that they are constantly at a draw, instead of taking the fight seriously in combating Juubito, our greatest Hokage and his boyf... enemy are busy engaged in a fierce game of Rock, Paper, Scissors.
"No fair, you're cheating with your Sharingan!" Hashirama points out, their argument on the matter of the legitimacy of the game wasting 5 more pages of the manga.
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Meanwhile back to the main fight with Juubito...
"Okay Sasuke, it's time to use another combination att...." Naruto was about to plan out before he was rudely interrupted by Kiba and the rest of Konoha 11.
"You guys had your fun, but it's time once again for Konoha 11 to show off their special attacks(despite doing no real damage like the previous time as evidence which was evidenced before)!" Kiba screams out, once again showing off his abilities during this crisis of the world's end with an unamused Juubito...
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Thus 4 more pages were wasted on the other side characters showing off their new abilities that's (apparently) important to the plot, with Naruto and Sasuke in the background.
The manga ends and Kishimoto announces another break for the following two weeks .... atleast he told the fans this time about it...
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