I made one of these the other day and I got some decent feedback so I thought i'd try again, they really are quite fun to make 
So yeah what do you guys think? And please rate it on the poll
(thoughts)
[actions]
Sakura: Okay, I'm ready.
[Sakura's chakra spikes as she enters sage mode, new markings appear round her face]
Naruto: Sakura-chan, you mastered natural energy?
Sakura: Yeah, Tsunade-sama took me to the lake where Katsuyu is from, and the Great Slug sage taught me this version of senjutsu. Tsunade-sama was never able to use senjutsu training because of her Yin seal, she couldn't obtain a balance between her chakra and the natural energy.
Naruto: Yosha! Team 7, Lets go!
Sasuke:[with a wry smile] Always so loud Naruto.
[Naruto activates beast mode]
Kurama: This time it will be more powerful as we are getting used to the connection, your powerful chakra combined with mine... [Kurama grins toothily] Well, lets show them Naruto!
[Naruto transform into full Kurama.
Sasuke: Susanoo!
[Sasuke's susanoo begins to fit around Naruto as Kurama]
Sasuke: Madara, you were responsible for everything bad in my life, you took my family away from me, we are going to destroy you with your own technique.
Hashirama: When we drop the barrier, everyone must attack with their full strength!. Now!
[Naruto forms a bijuu-dama with Sasuke adding his blaze release Yasaka Magatama to the Bijuu-dama. Naruto charges the Juubi and aims for its eye.]
Madara: Hashirama, enough with these games, must I dispense with these children for you to face me.
[Madara activates the Rinnegan but before he can make it between the Juubi and the Bijuu dama...]
Sakura: Chanero! (lets hope this works!)
[Sakura's punch, enhanced by senjutsu chakra hits Madara square in the chest, sending him flying]
Minato: (Incredible strength, she really is like Kushina)
[The bijuu dama hits the Juubi sending it reeling back]
Hashirama: Mokuton: Oodama Wood Dragon
[Hashirama's wooden dragon manages to restrain a few of the Juubi's tails]
[Hundreds of shinobis are seen weaving seals and attacking with everything they have.]
Madara:[reforming] Hmmpf shes like the ugly senju woman I severed. I hate using it more than once, but it cannot be helped. Perfect Susanoo! This is the true power of the Uchiha! Kid your Susanoo is no match.
Naruto: Oh yeah, well his susanoo, has something you don't have.
Madara: ?
Naruto: Me! Fuuton: Bijuu-damashuriken!
[A huge crater is shown smoking where Madara's once Perfect Susanoo stood.]
Fodder shinobi: I have the feeling I'm outclassed here!
Minato: (He completed my Rasengan adding a Nature type to a Jutsu like that should have been impossible. Sensei was wrong.)
[Minato has a flashback to when Jiraiya told him about the Savior who would bring about great stability or destruction]
Minato: (Naruto and not me is the savior)
Minato: Hashirama-sama, please keep the Juubi busy, I need Naruto for a moment.
[Naruto returns to human form]
Naruto: Dad?
Hashirama: Easier said than done!
[Minato races towards Naruto]
Minato: Naruto I have a message for the Kyuubi...
Naruto: His name is Kurama!
Minato: Is that so? Well Kurama, Shiki fujin Kai!.
Kurama: This is!..
Minato: Yes your Yin chakra, I supposed you've missed half your power these past few years.
Shikamaru: (Even they can't take the Juubi on their own, this will take a combined effort)
[Shikamaru begins ordering the attacks]
Shikamaru: We are going to try to take out the Juubi with another Shinobi alliance Jutsu! First Doton users form a wall around the Juubi! Next Suiton users fill hole the with as much water as possibile. Everyone else try to distract the Juubi with long range attacks and Darui!
Darui: Yeah?
Shikamaru: Lead the Raiton users and electrify that water! The Juubi is a living thing, electricity will disrupt its nervous impulses.
Darui: My pleasure! Ranton: Laser Cirus.
[Darui leads the charge of 200 Kumo-nin]
[Sasuke deactivates susanoo]
Sasuke: My turn. Kirin!
[Electricity dances atop the water but the Juubi seems unphased]
Sasuke: No way, even Kirin...
[The Juubi roars, and destroys Hashirama's wooden dragon before flattening the Earth wall that surrounded it]
Madara: The time is ripe, the full power of the Juubi, the demon that shaped this world shall be reborn again!
Tobirama: Shimata! We didn't even harm it, it was just gathering energy for it's transformation.
Bee: Yo not to be a miser, but Hachibi-san says if we let it transform, its over, there will be no hope.
Naruto:[Smiling, and transforming thanks to Kurama's Yin chakra] There is always hope!
????: That's true my young friend, there is always hope, and you will be the bearer of such hope.
So yeah what do you guys think? And please rate it on the poll
(thoughts)
[actions]
Sakura: Okay, I'm ready.
[Sakura's chakra spikes as she enters sage mode, new markings appear round her face]
Naruto: Sakura-chan, you mastered natural energy?
Sakura: Yeah, Tsunade-sama took me to the lake where Katsuyu is from, and the Great Slug sage taught me this version of senjutsu. Tsunade-sama was never able to use senjutsu training because of her Yin seal, she couldn't obtain a balance between her chakra and the natural energy.
Naruto: Yosha! Team 7, Lets go!
Sasuke:[with a wry smile] Always so loud Naruto.
[Naruto activates beast mode]
Kurama: This time it will be more powerful as we are getting used to the connection, your powerful chakra combined with mine... [Kurama grins toothily] Well, lets show them Naruto!
[Naruto transform into full Kurama.
Sasuke: Susanoo!
[Sasuke's susanoo begins to fit around Naruto as Kurama]
Sasuke: Madara, you were responsible for everything bad in my life, you took my family away from me, we are going to destroy you with your own technique.
Hashirama: When we drop the barrier, everyone must attack with their full strength!. Now!
[Naruto forms a bijuu-dama with Sasuke adding his blaze release Yasaka Magatama to the Bijuu-dama. Naruto charges the Juubi and aims for its eye.]
Madara: Hashirama, enough with these games, must I dispense with these children for you to face me.
[Madara activates the Rinnegan but before he can make it between the Juubi and the Bijuu dama...]
Sakura: Chanero! (lets hope this works!)
[Sakura's punch, enhanced by senjutsu chakra hits Madara square in the chest, sending him flying]
Minato: (Incredible strength, she really is like Kushina)
[The bijuu dama hits the Juubi sending it reeling back]
Hashirama: Mokuton: Oodama Wood Dragon
[Hashirama's wooden dragon manages to restrain a few of the Juubi's tails]
[Hundreds of shinobis are seen weaving seals and attacking with everything they have.]
Madara:[reforming] Hmmpf shes like the ugly senju woman I severed. I hate using it more than once, but it cannot be helped. Perfect Susanoo! This is the true power of the Uchiha! Kid your Susanoo is no match.
Naruto: Oh yeah, well his susanoo, has something you don't have.
Madara: ?
Naruto: Me! Fuuton: Bijuu-damashuriken!
[A huge crater is shown smoking where Madara's once Perfect Susanoo stood.]
Fodder shinobi: I have the feeling I'm outclassed here!
Minato: (He completed my Rasengan adding a Nature type to a Jutsu like that should have been impossible. Sensei was wrong.)
[Minato has a flashback to when Jiraiya told him about the Savior who would bring about great stability or destruction]
Minato: (Naruto and not me is the savior)
Minato: Hashirama-sama, please keep the Juubi busy, I need Naruto for a moment.
[Naruto returns to human form]
Naruto: Dad?
Hashirama: Easier said than done!
[Minato races towards Naruto]
Minato: Naruto I have a message for the Kyuubi...
Naruto: His name is Kurama!
Minato: Is that so? Well Kurama, Shiki fujin Kai!.
Kurama: This is!..
Minato: Yes your Yin chakra, I supposed you've missed half your power these past few years.
Shikamaru: (Even they can't take the Juubi on their own, this will take a combined effort)
[Shikamaru begins ordering the attacks]
Shikamaru: We are going to try to take out the Juubi with another Shinobi alliance Jutsu! First Doton users form a wall around the Juubi! Next Suiton users fill hole the with as much water as possibile. Everyone else try to distract the Juubi with long range attacks and Darui!
Darui: Yeah?
Shikamaru: Lead the Raiton users and electrify that water! The Juubi is a living thing, electricity will disrupt its nervous impulses.
Darui: My pleasure! Ranton: Laser Cirus.
[Darui leads the charge of 200 Kumo-nin]
[Sasuke deactivates susanoo]
Sasuke: My turn. Kirin!
[Electricity dances atop the water but the Juubi seems unphased]
Sasuke: No way, even Kirin...
[The Juubi roars, and destroys Hashirama's wooden dragon before flattening the Earth wall that surrounded it]
Madara: The time is ripe, the full power of the Juubi, the demon that shaped this world shall be reborn again!
Tobirama: Shimata! We didn't even harm it, it was just gathering energy for it's transformation.
Bee: Yo not to be a miser, but Hachibi-san says if we let it transform, its over, there will be no hope.
Naruto:[Smiling, and transforming thanks to Kurama's Yin chakra] There is always hope!
????: That's true my young friend, there is always hope, and you will be the bearer of such hope.
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