[Predictions] Naruto Chapter 628 Prediction: "Confrontation" -by ShadowCloneJutsu-

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Hey All,

Just thought I'd post up a quick and fun prediction after this epic chapter! I'm sure a lot of you are excited to see the Kages join the fight, and so am I! I hope you guys enjoy!

Thanks! :bye:
-ShadowCloneJutsu

Naruto Chapter 628: "Confrontation"

Every era has its battles.. but this will be the last war!! Let's go!!

The strongest soldiers are ready!


Orochimaru: Release! (releases the kages from his control)

Tobirama: Finally, my will has been returned. Now, how to get to the battlefield if I have no destination seal.

Minato: I know of one. I adopted your technique and incorporated a seal into my son when I sealed the Kyuubi inside of him!

Hashirama: Wow! What a smart one he is!

Hiruzen: Indeed Sondaime, in his time he was the renowned 'Yellow Flash' for his adaptation of Tobi-San's technique

(Minato scratches head in humbleness)

Sasuke: Yondaime.. Naruto is your.. son..?

Minato: Sure is! And I can feel that he's already mastered the Kyuubi's chakra, I can't wait to see how strong he's gotten

Tobirama: I'm flattered 4th, let me see the greatness of the renowned 'Yellow Flash'!

(Minato smiles, and then focuses. He takes out his special shuriken and readies for the technique. He turns back to look at Sasuke and company)

Minato: Right.. Get ready!

Scene changes to the battlefield where Madara and Obito just got separated from the Juubi

(Juubi is roaring and immediately hurls Obito, Madara and Naruto and Rock Lee off of it and starts to rampage)

Obito: Shit..!

Madara: This is getting to become more troublesome than fun.

Naruto: Shikamaru!

Shikamaru: Right! Everyone, you know what to do!

(The Alliance gets prepared to attack and execute the plan)

Shikamaru: -Thinking- Step one, separate their control of the Juubi, complete.. Step 2, separate the targets from each other..

Madara: Enough playing around Obito.. I'll handle this now. (as he is reanimating) Get control of the Juubi.

Obito: Tsk.. (Obito quickly dashes up toward the Juubi)

Kakashi: ?! They're splitting up on purpose..?

Shikamaru: Alliance!

The Sand and Rock Village Shinobis: Earth Release: Earth Core Shift Jutsu! (starts to shift the earth around the Juubi moving it away from Madara and Obito)

Killer Bee: Yo say Ho!! ( He is shown distracting the Juubi, shooting TBBs at it as it drifts away)

Sarutobi Clan: Fire release: Flame Bombs Jutsu! (Shoots fireballs at Obito)

Wind Users: Wind release: Wind Hurricane Jutsu! (Creates razor sharp winds aiming to throw Obito off course)

(Other shinobi are shown throwing kunai at Obito)

(Obito is shown making a break towards the Juubi while dodging and phasing through a flurry of attacks)

Shikamaru: Phase two.. complete.. Phase 3.. pressure the king

(Madara reanimates and is shown staring down the ninja alliance)

(Obito is shown within close proximity to the Juubi and Rock Lee and Naruto are shown chasing him)

(Madara reanimates and is shown staring down the ninja alliance)


Madara: I've had enough of this.. SUSANNO! (summons his perfect form Susanno)

Kakashi: Shit this is bad!

Gai: Lee!

Shikamaru: Naruto hurry!

(Naruto focuses and bursts to catch Obito but just as he is about to grab him..)

Madara: I'll show you a glimpse of my real strength.. ALMIGHTY PULL

(Naruto and Lee are shown being thrown backward as Obito reconnects with the Juubi)

Rock Lee: Naruto !!


Madara: I will show you.. Ambition is futile!

(The Almighty Pull begins to be enhanced on a giant scale)

(panels are shown with the groups of shinobi panicking and being dragged towards Madara with is Susanno attacking Ninjas as they are being pulled in)

Naruto: ?! Shit! Kurama we need to protect them!

Kurama: I don't have enough chakra to transform into my full scale mode!

Madara: Now.. Kyuubi, you are mine once again!

(Naruto gets pull in and is shown staring up at Susanoo as it gets ready to strike him!)

(At that moment a huge FLASH appears)

(Naruto lays on the ground dumbfounded as the smoke clears)

(He looks up and finds that Sasuke is standing there blocking Madara's attack with his own Susanoo)


Sasuke: After all these years, you still need me to save you.. Naruto

Madara: ...

(Naruto looks up in complete shock as the final frame shows Hashirama, Tobirama, Minato, and Hiruzen lined up in front of Orochimaru and Taka)
 

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I liked it, except for Madara's Susano¿o foiling the plan. I'm pretty sure the shikas prepared something for that and wont just focus solely on Obito. Also, I think that Kakashi would do something about Obito's phasing, he seems OOC to me.

I enjoyed the alliance attacks and Sasuke role.

Overall 4/5. Good work!
 
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I liked it, except for Madara's Susano¿o foiling the plan. I'm pretty sure the shikas prepared something for that and wont just focus solely on Obito. Also, I think that Kakashi would do something about Obito's phasing, he seems OOC to me.

I enjoyed the alliance attacks and Sasuke role.

Overall 4/5. Good work!
Thanks! You bring up really good points! I was thinking about Kakashi preventing Obito's phasing, but I wanted Obito to take back control of the Juubi somehow, haha.
 
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Really great and enjoyable prediction. Although I don't idea of Kishi to focus on entering battlefield by hokages yet, because it would skip great part of action at battlefield , make this very important probably last battle not epic as it could be and make holes in this war, make it less enjoyable and lefting as wondering what was happening back then at battlefield.

However, properly constructed and formatted text with great content you put in: epic action with edo Hokages, outstanding action easy to follow at battlefield, showing versality of Alliance shinobi army while fighting against Madara and Obito make your prediction very entertaining and enjoyable.

Moreover you even add dramatic moment at the end of your prediction, which pull reader's attenton even more and to expierience what character feel in exact moment. Adding this dramatic act make us(reader's) even more care about characters and then finally ending with great entrance of Sasuke and at the same time epic cliffhanger, simply breathtaking.

5/5 with no doubt, however as I said I would like to action on battlefield not be skipped while Hashirama was telling his story to Sasuke.

Sorry for any grammar/typing mistakes and please keep it up :)
 
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Really great and enjoyable prediction. Although I don't idea of Kishi to focus on entering battlefield by hokages yet, because it would skip great part of action at battlefield , make this very important probably last battle not epic as it could be and make holes in this war, make it less enjoyable and lefting as wondering what was happening back then at battlefield.

However, properly constructed and formatted text with great content you put in: epic action with edo Hokages, outstanding action easy to follow at battlefield, showing versality of Alliance shinobi army while fighting against Madara and Obito make your prediction very entertaining and enjoyable.

Moreover you even add dramatic moment at the end of your prediction, which pull reader's attenton even more and to expierience what character feel in exact moment. Adding this dramatic act make us(reader's) even more care about characters and then finally ending with great entrance of Sasuke and at the same time epic cliffhanger, simply breathtaking.

5/5 with no doubt, however as I said I would like to action on battlefield not be skipped while Hashirama was telling his story to Sasuke.

Sorry for any grammar/typing mistakes and please keep it up :)
Wow man thanks for the kind words!
I will continue to read and follow your predictions
 

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Wow man thanks for the kind words!
I will continue to read and follow your predictions
no problem, you deserve this praise friend :)

you can read my prediction here:

hope you like it, please share you opinion after reading in that thread I agve you link to

Thanks:)
 
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