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You got it Sempai I'll destroy that last rock with my incredibly soft hard head!

*First off I stand at the ready 10 feet away from the boulders and begin to concentrate my Raiton chakra whilst I perform the following hand seals: Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey. When I finish the hand seals I point my right palm down to the ground and place my left hand on my upper arm and tighten my grip. I concentrate very hard on channeling a huge amount of Raiton chakra to my right hand. As I concentrate harder and harder the amount of chakra I'm channeling begins to become visible in my right hand and after a while all that can be heard is thousands of birds chirping. Once I feel that I am ready I sprint forward charging at the rocks. Noticing how much faster I am I hold up my right hand which connects with the hard rock breaking it. Knowing that the next rock is more to my left as soon as I completely break through the first rock I alter my course and jump to the left and as fast as I can I plow through that rock too. As I break through that rock I keep running forward and break though the third rock.

Now the next rock is at a straight diagonal path to my right so when I break out of the previous rock I slide across the ground stopping myself for a moment but seconds later I'm off again sprinting towards the rock at full speed my Chidori at the ready. I break through that rock and do the same thing I did with the last rock in order to break through it. As soon as I break out of that last rock I stop my Chi Dori and jump straight forward at the last one head first and smack my head off it. My head leaves a tiny crack which begins to spread and cut the rock down the middle.*

H..How was t..that sem..pai!
Excellent :3 Sowee for late reply but its your Sempai's finals week. Now check the list of jutsus and find which jutsus require Chidori as pre-reqs?
 

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Excellent :3 Sowee for late reply but its your Sempai's finals week. Now check the list of jutsus and find which jutsus require Chidori as pre-reqs?
what do you mean finals week?

Here they are:
(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.



(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.



(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.



(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.



(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.



(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

I didn't include any that had restrictions I didn't meet
 

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what do you mean finals week?

Here they are:
(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.



(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.



(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.



(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.



(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.



(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

I didn't include any that had restrictions I didn't meet

Finals week is the week in college when you have final exams. ^_^ And all these are called "variations" of chidori, they do not require chidori activated to make them happen. Search for jutsus like Kirin, which says the user uses chidori first draws out lightning from the sky and attacks.
 

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Finals week is the week in college when you have final exams. ^_^ And all these are called "variations" of chidori, they do not require chidori activated to make them happen. Search for jutsus like Kirin, which says the user uses chidori first draws out lightning from the sky and attacks.
(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.

For this one you have to have Raikiri activated and that's just an advanced version of chidori so I thought that would count.

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.

And of course as you suggested Kirin

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

(Raiton: Chidori Shinsō) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

I bolded the parts where it says you use a chidori
 

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(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.

For this one you have to have Raikiri activated and that's just an advanced version of chidori so I thought that would count.

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.

And of course as you suggested Kirin

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

(Raiton: Chidori Shinsō) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

I bolded the parts where it says you use a chidori

Kirin here is the only one that you have to perform Chidori before using it, like really thats 2 jutsus to make Kirin happen, the pre-req chidori and the actual Kirin. I will let you know if I find any other that needs two jutsus.

Tell me a strategic use of chidori? keep in mind its range and how could u increase it?
 

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Kirin here is the only one that you have to perform Chidori before using it, like really thats 2 jutsus to make Kirin happen, the pre-req chidori and the actual Kirin. I will let you know if I find any other that needs two jutsus.

Tell me a strategic use of chidori? keep in mind its range and how could u increase it?
Well Chidori is basically a full frontal attack where you just run at the person and make a hole in him with your hand which is surrounded by electricity (my way of simply explaining it). It would depend on how you do it so you don't get countered easily. You would need to keep the opponent bound still or keep them distracted by something else. Perhaps a genjutsu that blinds the opponent or a binding technique such as the Lightning Pillar bind or another effective binding jutsu I'm not yet aware. I'm not sure on how you could increase the range of the Chidori unless you use a different variation of it like Senbon or Nagashi.

I'm sorry if this was bad it is 7:20 am here
 

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Well Chidori is basically a full frontal attack where you just run at the person and make a hole in him with your hand which is surrounded by electricity (my way of simply explaining it). It would depend on how you do it so you don't get countered easily. You would need to keep the opponent bound still or keep them distracted by something else. Perhaps a genjutsu that blinds the opponent or a binding technique such as the Lightning Pillar bind or another effective binding jutsu I'm not yet aware. I'm not sure on how you could increase the range of the Chidori unless you use a different variation of it like Senbon or Nagashi.

I'm sorry if this was bad it is 7:20 am here
Acceptable, there is a very interesting way of using chidori and extending its range. There is a few ways you could do it. So a little explanation of how Kirin is done and how you "waste" one move. Most people first form clouds using fire dragon technique or uses pre-existing clouds to draw out the lightning. The Kirin is drawn by performing chidori in hands, which acts as a conductor of electricity in the clouds is is descended upon wherever u direct it. you were very true about using something to "bind" your opponent. What could it be? Jutsus are not always the solution, after those comes Ninja weapons. The following is an example of using 3 attacks in one move all offensive as well as supporting type.

You can using windmill shurikens tied to a metal string by sending them towards your opponent from sides in an arch they will spin around them tying them down and thrusting the blades in their flesh, then use the already created clouds to draw out Kirin using chidori in your hand, direct the Kirin dragon down upon your opponent at the same time touching the metal string with your chidori channeled hand this channeling ALL the chidori down the metal string at a lightning fast speed. So, basically your chidori jutsu will stay in effect with Kiri and you still have one jutsu spot. So do not ever forget ninja weapons. Tell me what you understood and we will move on.
 

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Acceptable, there is a very interesting way of using chidori and extending its range. There is a few ways you could do it. So a little explanation of how Kirin is done and how you "waste" one move. Most people first form clouds using fire dragon technique or uses pre-existing clouds to draw out the lightning. The Kirin is drawn by performing chidori in hands, which acts as a conductor of electricity in the clouds is is descended upon wherever u direct it. you were very true about using something to "bind" your opponent. What could it be? Jutsus are not always the solution, after those comes Ninja weapons. The following is an example of using 3 attacks in one move all offensive as well as supporting type.

You can using windmill shurikens tied to a metal string by sending them towards your opponent from sides in an arch they will spin around them tying them down and thrusting the blades in their flesh, then use the already created clouds to draw out Kirin using chidori in your hand, direct the Kirin dragon down upon your opponent at the same time touching the metal string with your chidori channeled hand this channeling ALL the chidori down the metal string at a lightning fast speed. So, basically your chidori jutsu will stay in effect with Kiri and you still have one jutsu spot. So do not ever forget ninja weapons. Tell me what you understood and we will move on.
Well I understand all of it and how you would have one jutsu left to use and I kicked myself for not thinking about those windmill shuriken.
 

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(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


EXTREMELY EXTREMELY EXTREMELY! Useful jutsu, it helps you escape from Genjutsu through chakra disruption in your body, maximum level of genjutsu it can escape is up to B-rank, moreover it is an uncontrolled version of lightning which can destroy anything all around opponent.
 

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(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


EXTREMELY EXTREMELY EXTREMELY! Useful jutsu, it helps you escape from Genjutsu through chakra disruption in your body, maximum level of genjutsu it can escape is up to B-rank, moreover it is an uncontrolled version of lightning which can destroy anything all around opponent.
Yeah I've seen a few people use it to dis spell genjutsu and some earth jutsus
Did you learn that it only works on B-Rank and below from Scary Yamato in the fight?

*I begin to start generating non focused electricity inside my body that I would use to dis spell a genjutsu. Instead of using it in the way I just release the non focused electricity that I have generated in one go and I watch as it travels along the earth underneath my feet and hits the dummy.*

I found this one quite hard to describe but if I could give you advice for future reference wouldn't it be more helpful if you trapped your student in a B-Rank genjutsu and told them to use this to get out of it. I think it would elongate the description and I'm just trying to be helpful :D.
 
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Yeah I've seen a few people use it to dis spell genjutsu and some earth jutsus
Did you learn that it only works on B-Rank and below from Scary Yamato in the fight?

*I begin to start generating non focused electricity inside my body that I would use to dis spell a genjutsu. Instead of using it in the way I just release the non focused electricity that I have generated in one go and I watch as it travels along the earth underneath my feet and hits the dummy.*

I found this one quite hard to describe but if I could give you advice for future reference wouldn't it be more helpful if you trapped your student in a B-Rank genjutsu and told them to use this to get out of it. I think it would elongate the description and I'm just trying to be helpful :D.
I knew it that you could snap out of gen, but was confused if it was up-to A-ranked or B-ranked. And who said we are done? ;) Now explain how exactly will you get out of genjutsu? What earth jutsus CANNOT be countered by this (Ignore ranks, we all know it cant counter Forbidden)? And what water jutsus can be used to work with this one most effectively?
 

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I knew it that you could snap out of gen, but was confused if it was up-to A-ranked or B-ranked. And who said we are done? ;) Now explain how exactly will you get out of genjutsu? What earth jutsus CANNOT be countered by this (Ignore ranks, we all know it cant counter Forbidden)? And what water jutsus can be used to work with this one most effectively?
Genjutsu explanation:
Well to get out of genjutsu I know three ways. You disrupt your flow of chakra, get someone else to do it for you or suddenly hurt yourself. This jutsu generates non focused electricity in you body and I think you use it to hurt you which as you've told me will ids spell B-Rank and under genjutsu.

Earth jutsus:
(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

Maybe this because I'm not sure how Nagashi could counter this it really wouldn't do anything to the mud.

(Doton: Dosenki) - Earth Release: Mudslide Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a sequence of three hand seals Dog → Ram → Boar the user then creates a small wall of earth to rise up from the ground infront of them and cause a mud slide to form from the wall and directs it towards the enemy target/s to try engulf them.

Again this is mud coming towards you you could use Nagashi but I really don't know how it could affect flowing mud.

Water jutsus:
(Suiton: Kyojin Nami Shougeki) – Water Release: Giant Wave Crash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive , Deffence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water that can then be used to crash into the opponent. It is strong enough to push back Killer bee in Eight tales form.
Note: Requires a water source

I reckon this would be a good combination because you could combine it with nagashi it would be devastating in my head anyways

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

When you're holding the whip use Nagashi it will travel along the whip and paralyze him then one jutsu spot left
 

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Genjutsu explanation:
Well to get out of genjutsu I know three ways. You disrupt your flow of chakra, get someone else to do it for you or suddenly hurt yourself. This jutsu generates non focused electricity in you body and I think you use it to hurt you which as you've told me will ids spell B-Rank and under genjutsu.

Earth jutsus:
(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

Maybe this because I'm not sure how Nagashi could counter this it really wouldn't do anything to the mud.

(Doton: Dosenki) - Earth Release: Mudslide Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a sequence of three hand seals Dog → Ram → Boar the user then creates a small wall of earth to rise up from the ground infront of them and cause a mud slide to form from the wall and directs it towards the enemy target/s to try engulf them.

Again this is mud coming towards you you could use Nagashi but I really don't know how it could affect flowing mud.

Water jutsus:
(Suiton: Kyojin Nami Shougeki) – Water Release: Giant Wave Crash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive , Deffence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water that can then be used to crash into the opponent. It is strong enough to push back Killer bee in Eight tales form.
Note: Requires a water source

I reckon this would be a good combination because you could combine it with nagashi it would be devastating in my head anyways

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.

When you're holding the whip use Nagashi it will travel along the whip and paralyze him then one jutsu spot left
You wrote correct explanation of how to get out of a genjutsu but chose wrong one for how Nagashi does it. Nagashi is actually just like a shiver of chakra in your body, you can do it immobilized, because its bascally disrupting the chakra in you. Make sure when snapping out of gen, you state how you FOUND out that you were in a genjutsu in the first place, and then use Nagashi. You can find that by pointing out abnormalities around you caused by genjutsu and make a rational conclusion of you being in a gen and using Nagashi.

As for earth jutsus, true. All mud jutsus are semi-solid, they have water in them with impurities. If you use Nagashi on a mud jutsu you will shock yourself because of the impurities and water conducting lightning. It can be used in combination to stay offensive.

Wrong with a C-ranked whip, Since its a disruption of chakra, it will most likely disperse the water chakra in the whip instead of conducting it. To avoid arguments do not use it with the whip.

Next up; The following jutsu is one of the most destructive A ranked lightning jutsu, although it starts small with a pyramid shape it can really tear up the place.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
 

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You wrote correct explanation of how to get out of a genjutsu but chose wrong one for how Nagashi does it. Nagashi is actually just like a shiver of chakra in your body, you can do it immobilized, because its bascally disrupting the chakra in you. Make sure when snapping out of gen, you state how you FOUND out that you were in a genjutsu in the first place, and then use Nagashi. You can find that by pointing out abnormalities around you caused by genjutsu and make a rational conclusion of you being in a gen and using Nagashi.

As for earth jutsus, true. All mud jutsus are semi-solid, they have water in them with impurities. If you use Nagashi on a mud jutsu you will shock yourself because of the impurities and water conducting lightning. It can be used in combination to stay offensive.

Wrong with a C-ranked whip, Since its a disruption of chakra, it will most likely disperse the water chakra in the whip instead of conducting it. To avoid arguments do not use it with the whip.

Next up; The following jutsu is one of the most destructive A ranked lightning jutsu, although it starts small with a pyramid shape it can really tear up the place.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
thanks for the detailed feedback it was a good read

*First I begin to string to gather a small sequence of handseals all the while concentrating my Raiton chakra into my right hand. Once I finish weaving the handseals I place my hand on the ground releasing all of my Raiton chakra into the ground, directing it towards a rock and using shape manipulation to form it into a triangle pointing towards the rock. As the triangle speeds towards the rock I concentrate very hard on keeping the shape right and when it hits the rock is blown to pieces.*

Speaking of good reads that CE you submitted Astatine Release very complicated element
 

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thanks for the detailed feedback it was a good read

*First I begin to string to gather a small sequence of handseals all the while concentrating my Raiton chakra into my right hand. Once I finish weaving the handseals I place my hand on the ground releasing all of my Raiton chakra into the ground, directing it towards a rock and using shape manipulation to form it into a triangle pointing towards the rock. As the triangle speeds towards the rock I concentrate very hard on keeping the shape right and when it hits the rock is blown to pieces.*

Speaking of good reads that CE you submitted Astatine Release very complicated element
Good job, and yes it is suppose to be a supportive complicated element ;) I am not aiming for offensive power with that. Next jutsus use the sharpness of chidori, first one divides it among senbons, second more concentration in making one single spear;

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
 

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Good job, and yes it is suppose to be a supportive complicated element ;) I am not aiming for offensive power with that. Next jutsus use the sharpness of chidori, first one divides it among senbons, second more concentration in making one single spear;

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
I could tell you weren't

*I concentrate my Raiton chakra into my right hand and form a chidori in it. Once it is formed I begin to use shape manipulation in order to shape the chidori into many senbon. I raise my hand and swipe it in the air dividing the chidori and sending the senbon straight at the dummy aiming for the chakra points all over it's chest. They make contact and small scorch marks can be seen all over the dummy's chest.*

Now when you use the senbon to numb someone's arm how long would their arm be numbed?

*I begin to concentrate to concentrate my Raiton chakra into my right hand forming a chidori in it. When the chidori is fully formed I begin to use shape manipulation on it in order to elongate it to a length of ten meters. I then bring my arm back and thrust it forward to stab the dummy with the spear. When I stab the dummy I make the spear split apart into additional blades in order to deal more damage to the dummy in the long run.*

I don't have a question for this but I do have a general one
Do you want to increase the number of jutsus I learn at a time to two? because I'm fine with it
 

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I could tell you weren't

*I concentrate my Raiton chakra into my right hand and form a chidori in it. Once it is formed I begin to use shape manipulation in order to shape the chidori into many senbon. I raise my hand and swipe it in the air dividing the chidori and sending the senbon straight at the dummy aiming for the chakra points all over it's chest. They make contact and small scorch marks can be seen all over the dummy's chest.*

Now when you use the senbon to numb someone's arm how long would their arm be numbed?

*I begin to concentrate to concentrate my Raiton chakra into my right hand forming a chidori in it. When the chidori is fully formed I begin to use shape manipulation on it in order to elongate it to a length of ten meters. I then bring my arm back and thrust it forward to stab the dummy with the spear. When I stab the dummy I make the spear split apart into additional blades in order to deal more damage to the dummy in the long run.*

I don't have a question for this but I do have a general one
Do you want to increase the number of jutsus I learn at a time to two? because I'm fine with it
They will stay numb, as long as senbons are in them, if they find a way to avoid the piercing pain and get out the senbon they will be free from temp-paralysis, and its safe to say it will take some turns to get the full activity of body back. But usually if someone is hit by a 1000 senbons or even less, they will obviously take some time to recover giving u full advantage to finish them off. And same goes for the spear but spear is obviously a lot life-threatening as it can totally cut through the organs. Important Note: When you split the spear the rank that each possess is split too. So make sure you are defending against a jutsu with right rank. For example;
1 Spear = A rank
2 Spear = B rank each
3 Spear = Lower powered B rank each
4 spears = C rank

Basically you are splitting the chakra in the factors. This applies to all jutsu which are similar, of any element. Like the flame flower jutsu releases 3 meteor sized fireballs, and the over all rank is A, but if I am defending against a wind of S ranked with just one of the fireball, wind will probably break through with a very less power. But if it heads on with all 3 (A-Rank) vs the wind (S-rank) wind will be beaten. Questions?

If not, next up Jutsu says it all;


(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.
 

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Nope I pretty much understand

*I begin to concentrate a lot of my Raiton chakra into my right hand, when it becomes visible I begin compressing it into a ball of energy. During the course of performing this jutsu I am keep focusing on the shape of the ball making sure it doesn't become unstable and blow up when I don't want it to. I look at the large rock in front of me and I bring my arm back then thrust it forward into the rock face releasing all of the Raiton chakra causing a huge explosion.*
 

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Nope I pretty much understand

*I begin to concentrate a lot of my Raiton chakra into my right hand, when it becomes visible I begin compressing it into a ball of energy. During the course of performing this jutsu I am keep focusing on the shape of the ball making sure it doesn't become unstable and blow up when I don't want it to. I look at the large rock in front of me and I bring my arm back then thrust it forward into the rock face releasing all of the Raiton chakra causing a huge explosion.*
How is this different from other lightning jutsu? What will be a good use for this one?
 

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How is this different from other lightning jutsu? What will be a good use for this one?
Well you don't really compress other Lightning jutsus into spheres as far as I'm aware there is only two including this one and it explodes not many do that either. This jutsu is just based around destruction because of the "huge explosion" it causes so I think a good use for this is blasting through an earth jutsu because I don't think I would use this on the opponent wouldn't you be caught in the explosion?
 
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