Ahmed1993
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**Thoughts
()Actions
[]Description
[ Chapters opens at Naruto extending his arm to Obito ]
Obito ( Shocked ):.....
Obito( Regains his composure ) : Don't be silly Naruto , there is no way i can go to be my old self and live in the village after what i've done.
Obito : This is the path i've chosen , i can't abandon it know when i'm so close to its closure even if i starts to regret it.
Obito : I lived longer than you , i can't be convinced by words after what i witnessed in this rotten world , if you truly want to convince me that your path is the right one , then you should do it by actions and not words.
Naruto ( Smiles ) : You really are just like me , fine then i'll show you that nothing is impossible as long as you work for it , i'm going to bring true peace to this world !!
[Scene change back to the battlefield ]
Obito ( Serious expression ) : I won't go down easily Naruto !
( Obito puts his hand on the Bijuu's Chakra and starts absorbing it )
Obito : Gakido !
Random Shinobi : He is absorbing the Chakra !
Gai : That's a Rinnegan power !
Naruto ( Smiles ) : don't worry everyone , we can do it !
[ Panels shows random SA regaining their spirits ]
Naruto : Well then , pull !!
SA : Yea !!
[Scene change back to Hashirama and Madara ]
Hashirama : Your student is losing over there , you should give up Madara , i don't want to beat you a second time.
Madara's clone : So you didn't notice anything back then ?
Hashirama : What do you mean ?
Madara's clone : You never killed me , the one that you stabbed was a double that i created right after you stopped the Kyuubi.
[ FB showing Madara performing the Fission Jutsu in the final fight ]
Hashirama( Shocked ) : What ? then why you didn't come back after that fight ?
Madara's clone : Because i already got what i wanted from that fight.
( Madara points at his Rinnegan )
Madara's clone : And i'm gonna use it to defeat you right now !
Madara's clone ( Serious ) : Bansho Tennin !
( Hashirama gets pulled suddenly )
Hashirama : * What the hell is this attractive force ?! but i won't let him beat me ! * Mokuton: Sashiki no Jutsu !
( Madara's clone gets pierced by multiples wooden spikes )
Hashirama : Your were too cocky Madara , now to seal you my old friend !
( But Hashirama gets suddenly grabbed by 3 mechanical arms )
Hashirama : But how can you ?
Madara's clone : I've deliberately let you stab me so that...
( Suddenly Hashirama is stabbed by black rod in the chest from the back )
Madara : i can beat you the same way you beat me 80 years ago.
( The clone grabbing Hashirama starts dissolving )
( Hashirama's eyes starts slowly to turn into Rinnegan )
Hashirama: So... this...was..a...clone ,but...when...did...you ?
Madara ( smirks ) : When the Shinju was attacking us.
( Madara looks at Obito's direction )
Madara ( serious ) : Time to end this , Obito !
End.
What do you think guys ?
()Actions
[]Description
[ Chapters opens at Naruto extending his arm to Obito ]
Obito ( Shocked ):.....
Obito( Regains his composure ) : Don't be silly Naruto , there is no way i can go to be my old self and live in the village after what i've done.
Obito : This is the path i've chosen , i can't abandon it know when i'm so close to its closure even if i starts to regret it.
Obito : I lived longer than you , i can't be convinced by words after what i witnessed in this rotten world , if you truly want to convince me that your path is the right one , then you should do it by actions and not words.
Naruto ( Smiles ) : You really are just like me , fine then i'll show you that nothing is impossible as long as you work for it , i'm going to bring true peace to this world !!
[Scene change back to the battlefield ]
Obito ( Serious expression ) : I won't go down easily Naruto !
( Obito puts his hand on the Bijuu's Chakra and starts absorbing it )
Obito : Gakido !
Random Shinobi : He is absorbing the Chakra !
Gai : That's a Rinnegan power !
Naruto ( Smiles ) : don't worry everyone , we can do it !
[ Panels shows random SA regaining their spirits ]
Naruto : Well then , pull !!
SA : Yea !!
[Scene change back to Hashirama and Madara ]
Hashirama : Your student is losing over there , you should give up Madara , i don't want to beat you a second time.
Madara's clone : So you didn't notice anything back then ?
Hashirama : What do you mean ?
Madara's clone : You never killed me , the one that you stabbed was a double that i created right after you stopped the Kyuubi.
[ FB showing Madara performing the Fission Jutsu in the final fight ]
Hashirama( Shocked ) : What ? then why you didn't come back after that fight ?
Madara's clone : Because i already got what i wanted from that fight.
( Madara points at his Rinnegan )
Madara's clone : And i'm gonna use it to defeat you right now !
Madara's clone ( Serious ) : Bansho Tennin !
( Hashirama gets pulled suddenly )
Hashirama : * What the hell is this attractive force ?! but i won't let him beat me ! * Mokuton: Sashiki no Jutsu !
( Madara's clone gets pierced by multiples wooden spikes )
Hashirama : Your were too cocky Madara , now to seal you my old friend !
( But Hashirama gets suddenly grabbed by 3 mechanical arms )
Hashirama : But how can you ?
Madara's clone : I've deliberately let you stab me so that...
( Suddenly Hashirama is stabbed by black rod in the chest from the back )
Madara : i can beat you the same way you beat me 80 years ago.
( The clone grabbing Hashirama starts dissolving )
( Hashirama's eyes starts slowly to turn into Rinnegan )
Hashirama: So... this...was..a...clone ,but...when...did...you ?
Madara ( smirks ) : When the Shinju was attacking us.
( Madara looks at Obito's direction )
Madara ( serious ) : Time to end this , Obito !
End.
What do you think guys ?
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