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(Ansatsu Senjutsu Tokushu Butai Shinobi no jutsu) - Special Assassination and Tactical Squad Ninja Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/a
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn )
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Starting by making the index and middle finger are extended, the other fingers are curled into the palm. Known as Seal of Confrontation. this technique is initiated as they simply look unto their victim(s) as they'll begin to release their chakra continuously surging from their body in minuscule amounts, an assassination art, this S-class Anbu Technique is initiated. Users upon experiencing great loss of those important in their life, as an repeated series throughout their life, leads them to devolve a talent in the art of assassination, which is profoundly great that its garnered respect from even those who aren't their peers. Being the few 1% whom don't lose their sanity due to the great repeated loss, they develop into a special assassination ninja with a natural born technique, where the user, through manipulation of their intent's energy flow, naturally silencing their presence by slowing their heart rate and breathing, reining the blood-lust back under control, which is indicated in their eyes appearing are illustrated as dull, faded out of life. Farther mimicking their opponent's movements entirely, provoking a deep mental-play on where's their sub-consciousness perceives whether flight or fight, it becomes null to the rhythm.

They then going on to continue this enhanced flow for long brief periods of time. In general, anxiety influences cognitive performance in a curvilinear manner (an inverted U-curve). This phenomenon is known as the Yerkes– Dodson law. That is, when levels of arousal are too low (boredom), and when levels of arousal are too high (anxiety or fear), performance is likely to suffer. Under situations of low arousal, the mind is unfocused. In contrast, under situations of high stimulation, the focus of attention is too narrow, and important information may be lost. So by stressing their hidden intent leads to possible memory deficit, such as the common experience as one mentally would blank during a high-pressure examination or interview.

Users who've developed the technique are able to read people's expressions and physical intentions with ease as a result of his past experience with their Psychogenic tremor. There are occasions when they'll detect if a person is lying or not being entirely truthful (e.g. when one is plotting with a scheme). After being placed on the receiving-end of the God (close to death), this technique evolves into a sort of advanced ability that allows User's to analyze a person's state of mind simply by looking at them. This is illustrated and/or described "intent feeling/sympathy" as "wavelengths of consciousness" due to minuscule clues only noticed by these master spies displayed on people as they represent their breathing, line of sight, facial expression, body language and a few more others.

This technique allows Users to find a person's "gap in consciousness" or, in other words, openings where they let their guard down as well as their "peak in consciousness", which is the state of mind when which a person is highly susceptible to outside stimuli such as the Clap Stunt, which the user will make effective use of in different ways, from stunning enemies before attacking them to simple, almost trivial things such as being able to remove a size label from clothing without the person wearing it noticing. The effect can be powerful enough when if a difference in two ranks or more exists, when such incredible users of this ability are present and leave they won't even be remembered. While if the user is hiding they can make themselves unnoticed and/or ignored by their surroundings and entities and be un-regarded as a threats or danger. Proving to be far superior to simple invisibility, the user's then are able to freely act without being noticed, while still able to interact with their surroundings, leaving a minuscule to total absence of noise during their movements.

Notice: Users will need to present this at the start of the battle, and/ or upon their biography. May only be activated for as long as they are concentrating. Inversely, the user may need to concentrate to be noticed. Though the user's presence is ignored, they are by no means undetectable by threats. User will be noticeable by interacting with others, or presently seen, but not if undercover or hidden.

Note: If a difference in rank smaller than 2 ranks exist, the enemy will feel hidden persistence from a location, if they can't see them.
 
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(Ration: Doragoni Chāpu, Sandādoragonbodi) — Lightning Style: Dragoning Chirp, Thunder Dragon Body
Type:
Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50 (-10 per turn to sustain)
Damage: 90 (+10 to Taijutsu/Kenjutsu-related jutsu) (-40 to user)
Description: The user starts by molding their Raiton chakra in their whole body, surging it throughout outwards as claws. Using shape manipulation, they release the two forms of Raiton chakra in form of a solid claws that they can be manipulated to stretch out up short-range. While their first form of raiton chakra release will had embedded itself within the users skeleton, releasing itself through that channel, as it rips outward from within their bones forming mini-sized hair claws. This advanced state allows the user to have voltage movements as each movement releases an electric current around them, capable of being streamed through short-range objects. Then, after as the second bunch appears over their skin as huge arm-length claws. This can be used offensively in other few ways but is mostly used defensively. The user having created these condensed claws, each formed outward upon the user's body together in a fashion much like fan blades, allows for greater control which forms a semi-sphere around them and absorbs all physical attacks. This happens much like a fan (the user being the stem), where the fan blades spin at around 1620 RPMs. With the omnidirectional control of releasing the blades from their body to spin, they’ve developed the second ultimate defensive and offense in the NW. When used defensively and offensively at the same time, they charge at their opponent with the high-spinning blades around them, slashing into them leaving the remains of their victims into what finally becomes of them being a gas state. Claw Ring Release, another attack mode; this is when they decide to break the linking to spinning claws and release them at sudden, causing them to splash slash around (Doujutsu users can target and aim at sources). This move is very deadly upon close range to the user as this move has a greater number of claws fragments (12 inches in length), making the attack near impossible to evade.

Note: User can only sustain the jutsu for up to 2 turns.
Note: No other S-rank or higher Raiton jutsu in same turn, and while this jutsu is active.
Note: A launched fragment is equal to an S-rank; 2=A-rank, 3=B rank, 4=C rank, and many equal D rank.
Note: Can only be used once per battle. While being used, the user cannot use any other Elemental jutsu except Raiton based Jutsu only.
Note: Once shocked, paralyzation lasts 1 turn if successful but, is ineffective against bios who have a Primary Lightning Specialty.

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(Katon: Shishamasu) Fire Release: Death Hands
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (-10 to sustain jutsu per turn)
Damage Points: 40 (+10 if used to boost Katon-related jutsu)
Description: Surging katon chakra from their body, hot ash particles will emerge as they start to wiz around them forming an ash cloud protecting them, then after fading into their hands. These hot ash particles will cover their hands that will now appear dark and monstrous. By channeling chakra into their hands, those layered ash particles will quickly multiply to greater amounts drafting equal to sand. With ash in large amounts, the user can stream it from their hands to function under many applications. These applications can be either put to molding the ash into structures that will always be connected to their hands or simply employ the ash within other katon jutsu in range. However, the ash created by this jutsu is kin only to the user as it is always connected to their hand's source of control. Therefore, the user cannot unitize with other ash substances whatsoever.

Note: Can only be used by Primary Katon specialist only.
Note: User can only use Katon-related jutsu while sustaining this jutsu.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns.
Illustration Examples:
Jutsu ideal appearance:

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(Katon: Uchiha Majesutikku shōmetsu) - Fire release: Uchiha Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Mid- Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A Uchiha technique where the user makes the Ram>Horse>Tiger handseals and then kneads chakra inside their body. Which is then converted into a stream of fire and expelled from their mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an enormous range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid. However, due to its massive width and height, the technique is not one of the fastest seen so far. While to their opponents it seems the user has created simply a huge wall of flames, unknowingly that underneath them their ground would be preparing to undergo a major change as the user plans to melt the ground below them. This happens as the user's wall of flames creates an opening into the ground, using their katon chakra to shredding the underground layers of the earth while roasting the bedding flow. Constantly stream katon chakra into the wall of flames as their opponent's ground begins melt into the huge opening, their opponents will fall into furious heat caved in hole of the melted rock and flames.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No other S-rank or higher Katon jutsu in same turn.
Note: Can only be used by Primary Katon specialist only.
Illustration Examples:
Initial Jutsu release:

Visual of understanding:

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(Raiton-Katon: Gurēto ten no hōsoku) - Lightning-Fire Release: Law of the Great Heavens
Type: Offensive /Supplementary
Rank: S-class
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (+70 total damage, divided evenly among the 6 dragons, only if upon their opponent's grounded)
Description: Upon meeting another shinobi during an ANBU-trial mission, Illumi Uchiha accidentally in syncing with his opponent's (Raiton: Nori sono Kumo)-Lightning Release: Law of the Cloud jutsu, with his (Katon: Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique jutsu. They invented this heaven's law at the right ratio mixture of both and advanced forms that to even this day, requires a another Shinobi to utilize it. However, using his sharingan, he was able to learn his opponent's jutsu and thus forever being able to recreate that very same accidental jutsu as on his own.

When the both the large stream of flames from one's mouth race toward the sky and the forming flat disc of pure lightning spins into creation the flames in circle the forming current growing within intensive heat soon the sky brightens as the heavens illuminate the terrain in bursting brilliance. Scotching heat above provoke rain clouds while the intensive voltage vaporizes the moisture in the air around the terrain like steam in a process that repeatedly happens over and over (Suiton based jutsu drop one rank). Whomever is within the areas skies will go through a hellish experience, with sky's creations of shining stars around them, as within the intensive heats above and tiny Raiton needle shoot phasing into their bodies. Which would be very much able to slash their skin into bits and micro-explosions within the sky quickly give them a painless death.

Like it's lightning release parent jutsu, the user upon summoning six dragons from the heavens, their extremely high temperature would solidify the flames to a point they appear as like molten liquids, which would inhabit the ability to conducting lightning through the air up to a 5 meter radius rapidly due to their mixed nature. The Lightning that branches outwards, through their course of path, will rise up as lightning streams that look as like flames (each Dragon is equal to about a C-rank jutsu). Without the user's control, for whenever the user would form or release an offensive jutsu at a target the dragons would automatically launch themselves singularly one at a time (while others keep swimming within the air) at their user's target, exploding and electrifying them.

Note: This jutsu can only be harnessed/used once, with either another shinobi who has attained one of the needed related-parent jutsu, or by the user attaining their shadow clone jutsu. When harnessed, the victims within the skies can only avoid with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses. The process of the intensive skies will stay only active momentary after one turn its creation, ending soon after when the six dragons appear from the skies.

Note: While it can only be used by Fire or Lightning Specialist shinobi. To utilize this jutsu; User needs to post both (Raiton: Nori sono Kumo)-Lightning Release: Law of the Cloud jutsu, & (Katon: Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique jutsu, both which must be active in the same turn and in the turn before this jutsu is used. Therefore by that understanding, it means that turn (Raiton-Katon: Gurēto ten no hōsoku) - Lightning-Fire Release: Law of the Great Heavens is used, the user will have spent 1 move slot.

Note: After this jutsu, the user cannot use S-rank or above Lightning or Katon techniques the next following two consecutive turns due to the stress of chakra control on created by this jutsu. The released molten inflaming dragons stay active as long as the user wills them to be.

Presentation of Analogy:

This is the beginning of the jutsu and the reactionary result of its birth.


Insight slowed zooming into of the fast-paced zapping molten inflaming dragons, as they approach their victims.​
 
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(Shiryō Ninjutsu - 飼料忍術) --- Forage Ninja Techinqies
Type: N/A
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Forage Ninjutsu (Shiryō Ninpo - 飼料忍術), simply put, is a style of non-elemental ninjutsu that utilizes the hay and straw. Created by farmers, the style uses chakra to harness the properties of hay and straw to enhance earth release or simply maim their opponents with shreds of dry stalk needles, each use is uniquely versatile. While this ninjutsu is a branch within types of jutsu as, (Ninpou: Gekka Bijin) - Ninja Arts: Beauty Under the Moonlight, where the user manipulates countless flower petals to surround, confuse and blind their opponent. [Flower Ninjutsu]

This non-elemental ninjutsu in nature, is considered a specialized form of basic ninjutsu. The ninja uses chakra-infused Straw/hay to summon many more conjunctions of straw/hay forms. They can control and reshape even parts of their body with straw/hay at will, making such forms as weapons for attack, straw/hay airplanes for quick transport, or simply covering their enemy in bales of hay/straw, restricting and asphyxiating them. Forage can even enhance earth release for its known straw is used to bind clay and concrete. A mixture of clay and straw, known as cob, can be used as a building material for earth release jutsu giving the jutsu more resistance against their stronger counter-parts. The underneath plastered straw/hay, within the earth release jutsu provide some thermal mass, compressible and ductile structural strength, and acceptable fire resistance as well as thermal resistance (insulation). This while also allows seismic resistance, a more advanced art of use would be drawing nutrients from plant-based attacks. This enables Forage Ninjutsu to turn dry stalks of plant-based releases into sources for more Forage techniques.

Like other types of non-elemental ninjutsu; smoke, paper, and Ink. Forage exhibits a weakness against lightning/ fire based elements. Due to interactions against dry substances its intense blazing temperature leaves Forage jutsu encountering with it will most likely make it burn upon contact or when faced with flames it will sink through the flames turning into ash after passing. Forage is strong against earth based elements for after clashing with Forage, its more as refurbishment than damaging, because it drains the nutrients of the elements, making earth crumble to soil and wood to lose it’s nutrients. Forage Ninjutsu isn’t directly strong against Wood and Earth, but its prominently potent against them when the user summons wheat forms to emerge from wood or earth release encounters.

Notice: Must be stated on Biography.
 
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(Doton: Idōchikyūkoa) - Earth Release: Mobile Earth Core
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique grants the user the ability to freely slide forward/backwards/ sideways an object however they choose, this is limited to upper soil of ground on terrain within a specific area surrounding them, in a similar manner to its parent technique (Earth Moving Core), albeit on a much larger and simple scale. Molding Doton chakra they surge it through their body into the ground allowing them to simply move the soil an object is upon. This happens as they can move a flower to the right or left at their choice. Greater things such as mountains can also be moved up to 100 miles respectively equal to small things but at slower rates. The smaller the object the quicker it can moved and closer instant the effect can be. Because of the large requirement of chakra needed to alter such a large area of the terrain, the user will be able to use it only a limited number of times.
Note: Can only be used twice.

(Genjutsu: Uchiha Hametsu) - Uchiha Bane
Type: C
Rank: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Initiated by looking at their opponents; their victims experience a relatively short and quick paralysis of their extraocular muscles which controls the movements of the eye, disabling them from changing their eye's location. Or further to complicate the situation, this jutsu allows the user to choose whichever muscles that would be paralyzed. I.e; upper, or lower and even sideways muscles, therefore, the stiffen muscles will pull on the regulars forcing the victim to look at a desired place(s) at the user's will.
Note: Paralysis lasts 1 turn.
 
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- A Genjutsu Based Technique: In progress...

- A Physical Technique: In progress...

- A Spiritual Ethereal Warrior based Ninjutsu: In progress...
 
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(Katon: Uchiha Himitsu Kibaku Fuda no Jutsu) Fire Release: Uchiha Hidden Explosive Tags Technique
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: S-class
Range: Mid (Long range-type explosion)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Of the most skillful of fire style shinobi, who also exhibited mastery skill in bukijutsu had applied the talent in katon control to harness the renowned Uchiha clan's virtuoso. To initiate the jutsu, users must first perform Ten handseals (Tiger → Rat → Bird → Rat → Ox → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger), and knead chakra into flames as then momentarily unleashing a volley of kunais, each singly stringed tagged with many paper-bombs, with one hand. While at the same time, they exhale Katon-infused chakra onto them; summoning a stream torrent of flames which can be manipulated and exhaled through the ring-hole, made by the index and middle finger as: A) a thin powerful jet streamline becoming incredibly fast, while being able to stream across the field in seconds with a multitude of paper-tagged kunais hidden through the gashing line of flames and (using their chakra to keep them sustained without fault) from sight; enabling them to head through the flames (if not countered with a solid elemental interaction) afterwards, resulting into an additional explosion there then-after. B) an invasive large fireball spreading of flames that span in size height, length slowly increasing outwards. Paper-bomb tagged Kunais being embedding within the flames allow this jutsu style to attain the destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting (upon mental command) combustion released flame scotch (as the kunais within simply flow slowly to the rate of the flames, as if they're swimming through it) upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories.

Notice: Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that embedded the kunais as they were surround by it, the aftermath will continue to burn even after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with. While manipulated and exhaled as a thin yet incredibly fast jet of flames that races across the ground, its temperature will be such intensive that it will easily melt the ground as it travels and can reduce an enemy to ash, before its kunai explosion.

Note:
~ Can only be used twice per match.
~ No S-rank or higher jutsu after this jutsu, until after 2 of the user's turns.
~ User must be katon specialist.

Depiction:
 
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