[Landmark 11] Ame no Kuni Outer Walls: Tengoku Pool

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Sado flew in, flying above the water before turning into a naked human standing atop the pools.

Damnit forgot the whole clothes thing again.

As he spoke he forced doton chakra into the entire pool slowly molding it and turning it into a massive pool of oobleck.

He started with the side closest to Landmark 3 standing in the middle of the water as the oobleck grew outwards from his position encompassing a short to mid range area with Sado at the epicenter. This means the first use would cover an area with a radius of 20 meters from Sado's point of origin.

He slowly walked towards Landmark 19 using the jutsu again turning the rest of the pool into oobleck covering another 20 meter radius then turning more by expending 30 extra chakra to get 15 extra meters out of it. This would cover a diameter of 86 meters ultimately covering the whole zone.

Sad to see this beautiful place suffer, but I'll fix it later.

Sado then walked north, naked as a Jaybird.

-Leaving Landmark-

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30 (+10 per 5 meters)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user when in direct contact with water or earth will use their suiton or doton chakra to mold the water or earth, slowly turning the water or earth into oobleck. Once created the user can control the consistency of the oobleck hardening it slightly. If an opponent begins to sink into the oobleck it'll be hard to get out because as the opponent struggles to get out the oobleck takes on a solid property holding the opponent down. This source of oobleck can be used for other jutsu as well. However it can only support jutsu A rank and below
-Note: can only convert inanimate Earth or Water sources or B-Rank and below water techniques through contact.
-Note: the max size of the area converted is related to the users chakra input but can not transform the whole field or a large water source, following principles of reason and logic.



1730 - 90 = 1640

Edit: Maths are hard.
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Keji passes through with haste.

~leaving landmark
In his haste, Keji overlooked the traps set by Sado earlier and got stuck [email protected]$#! Keji would create a vortex of lightning around him freeing him from the trap. As this happened he noticed the whole area was covered and so shaped the vortex into a dragon's head sending it forward clearing a path for him to continue.
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


~leaving landmark
You should have used the Lightning jutsu in your first post here, it's one of the reasons I tell people to always read the last few posts in a landmark. You ran through the field first. Then you later say that you overlooked the traps. The issue here is you first went through landmark fully, hence the "through with haste" part. You can't go fully through the landmark then react in the next post like this is the first post you made. It'd be partial metagaming because you now know the jutsu detonates and only made an alteration after this (evident by you quoting Riker saying it and creating the new post.) and changing your timeframe to allow you to go back and place a defense into the timeframe.
 

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After enjoying his nice oobleck slumber Keji releases raiton chakra throughout his body breaking him free of the jutsu. Guess I better go check on everyone else... or I can just sit here and daydream for a bit. Yea I'll do that.
 

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Raven arrives at the tengoku pool.


References:
Ten no Kaisō|Hierarchy of the Heavens
Type:Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Description: Hierarchy of the Heavens are among the most useful Sigils of the Enochian clan, consisting of Runes that run along the user's arms. The Sigils grant that which is branded with them the property of empowerment, and depending on the Sigil used, the user can empower their own bodies or objects for destructive and offensive usages.

-Primordial Vessel: This Sigil was created to enhance the physical capalities of the user, granting their bodies the property of empowerment. This Sigil appears as several Runes that translate to “Strength” in the Enochian language, and increases the flow of Nature Energy through the user’s body. The Sigil focuses this increased flow to enhance the physical energy of the user, creating an increase in strength comparable to that of Tsunade or Sakura and a boost in speed equivalent to that of a Second Gate user. This Sigil requires the user to spend chakra equivalent to A-rank to activate, and lasts for four turns with a two-turn cooldown between usages and only capable of being used 3 times overall. Within the turn of activation, the user will be unable to utilize Val techniques above S-rank.

Ketsugō Shi|Binding Death
Type: Defensive
Rank: B-S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Enochian clan utilizes several Sigils during battle to accomplish various effects. These Sigils consist of several Runes (symbols that act as lettering) adorned along the body of each Enochian, remaining dormant and hidden when not in use. Binding Death is a series of Sigils that are etched all along the user's ribcage. These Sigils primary usage is the protection of the Enochian from various threats and forces.

-Warding Sigil: In order to ensure that they remained concealed from the outside world during their time of recluse, the Enochian clan developed this extremely complicated Sigil. Achieved through extremely skillful and precise usage of Divine Val, countless Runes were burned throughout the ribcages of clan members, with the lettering loosely translating to "Concealment" when put together. The Sigil remains dormant until it is activated with the seal of confrontation, upon which it will glow slightly (not visible due to being inside of the user). The Sigil runs Nature Energy through it for as long as it is active, causing an Enochian's very existence to, in a way, become one with the Nature Energy of the world around them. Their chakra, Val, and even life force become indistinguishable from that of pure natural energy, concealing them to all methods of sensory excluding those that can detect Nature Energy or rely on the detection of movement, such as the Barrier: Dome Method Formation technique. Users can detect Nature Energy would, however, be unable to distinguish the user among the rest of Nature Energy within the surroundings.The Sigil costs the same amount of chakra as a B-rank technique to activate and consumes -10 chakra per turn it is active. The Sigil sustains itself for five turns maximum, sapping -10 chakra per turn. Once per turn while the Sigil is active, its effects are capable of being applied to a technique the user performs at the cost of one of their three moves, though this does not extend visually. While active, the user is limited to S-rank and below Val techniques.

Kami no Shiwaza|Handiwork of God
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A(Depends on Sigil)
Description: The Enochian clan utilize several Sigils during battle to accomplish various effects. These Sigils consist of several Runes(symbols that act as lettering) adorned along the body of each Enochian, remaining dormant and hidden when not in use. The Handiwork of God is one of the most powerful set of Sigils of the Enochian clan, with the Runes located on the user's back. These Sigils focus on the interaction between the objects they are placed on and the Nature Energy around these objects.

Transportation Sigil: Upon the formation of the Boar handseal, this A-rank Sigil grants upon the user the physical properties of Nature Energy; upon activation, it causes the user to appear as though he's dissolved into mid-air. In reality, the Sigil will have transformed the user's body into Nature Energy, allowing them to blend into the ever present Nature Energy around them, allowing a method of travel to another location as fast as the user can run, achieved by travelling through the Nature Energy all around them, and re-materializing in a desired location. This Sigil can only be used four times per battle with a three-turn cooldown in between. While in use, the user's body, while in the form of Nature Energy, cannot be controlled by other Nature Energy users. This technique can be used to transport other objects along with the user so long as they maintain physical contact with the object. During the turn of activation, the user is unable to activate any other Sigils above A-rank. While in this form, the user is unable to attack. Attacks that are able to target natural energy are able to effect the user while in this state should an opponent be capable of locating their person.
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Raven arrives at the tengoku pool.


References:
Ten no Kaisō|Hierarchy of the Heavens
Type:Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Description: Hierarchy of the Heavens are among the most useful Sigils of the Enochian clan, consisting of Runes that run along the user's arms. The Sigils grant that which is branded with them the property of empowerment, and depending on the Sigil used, the user can empower their own bodies or objects for destructive and offensive usages.

-Primordial Vessel: This Sigil was created to enhance the physical capalities of the user, granting their bodies the property of empowerment. This Sigil appears as several Runes that translate to “Strength” in the Enochian language, and increases the flow of Nature Energy through the user’s body. The Sigil focuses this increased flow to enhance the physical energy of the user, creating an increase in strength comparable to that of Tsunade or Sakura and a boost in speed equivalent to that of a Second Gate user. This Sigil requires the user to spend chakra equivalent to A-rank to activate, and lasts for four turns with a two-turn cooldown between usages and only capable of being used 3 times overall. Within the turn of activation, the user will be unable to utilize Val techniques above S-rank.

Ketsugō Shi|Binding Death
Type: Defensive
Rank: B-S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Enochian clan utilizes several Sigils during battle to accomplish various effects. These Sigils consist of several Runes (symbols that act as lettering) adorned along the body of each Enochian, remaining dormant and hidden when not in use. Binding Death is a series of Sigils that are etched all along the user's ribcage. These Sigils primary usage is the protection of the Enochian from various threats and forces.

-Warding Sigil: In order to ensure that they remained concealed from the outside world during their time of recluse, the Enochian clan developed this extremely complicated Sigil. Achieved through extremely skillful and precise usage of Divine Val, countless Runes were burned throughout the ribcages of clan members, with the lettering loosely translating to "Concealment" when put together. The Sigil remains dormant until it is activated with the seal of confrontation, upon which it will glow slightly (not visible due to being inside of the user). The Sigil runs Nature Energy through it for as long as it is active, causing an Enochian's very existence to, in a way, become one with the Nature Energy of the world around them. Their chakra, Val, and even life force become indistinguishable from that of pure natural energy, concealing them to all methods of sensory excluding those that can detect Nature Energy or rely on the detection of movement, such as the Barrier: Dome Method Formation technique. Users can detect Nature Energy would, however, be unable to distinguish the user among the rest of Nature Energy within the surroundings.The Sigil costs the same amount of chakra as a B-rank technique to activate and consumes -10 chakra per turn it is active. The Sigil sustains itself for five turns maximum, sapping -10 chakra per turn. Once per turn while the Sigil is active, its effects are capable of being applied to a technique the user performs at the cost of one of their three moves, though this does not extend visually. While active, the user is limited to S-rank and below Val techniques.

Kami no Shiwaza|Handiwork of God
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A(Depends on Sigil)
Description: The Enochian clan utilize several Sigils during battle to accomplish various effects. These Sigils consist of several Runes(symbols that act as lettering) adorned along the body of each Enochian, remaining dormant and hidden when not in use. The Handiwork of God is one of the most powerful set of Sigils of the Enochian clan, with the Runes located on the user's back. These Sigils focus on the interaction between the objects they are placed on and the Nature Energy around these objects.

Transportation Sigil: Upon the formation of the Boar handseal, this A-rank Sigil grants upon the user the physical properties of Nature Energy; upon activation, it causes the user to appear as though he's dissolved into mid-air. In reality, the Sigil will have transformed the user's body into Nature Energy, allowing them to blend into the ever present Nature Energy around them, allowing a method of travel to another location as fast as the user can run, achieved by travelling through the Nature Energy all around them, and re-materializing in a desired location. This Sigil can only be used four times per battle with a three-turn cooldown in between. While in use, the user's body, while in the form of Nature Energy, cannot be controlled by other Nature Energy users. This technique can be used to transport other objects along with the user so long as they maintain physical contact with the object. During the turn of activation, the user is unable to activate any other Sigils above A-rank. While in this form, the user is unable to attack. Attacks that are able to target natural energy are able to effect the user while in this state should an opponent be capable of locating their person.
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A projection of Toph appears in the sky, big enough that people in the whole Land of Rain would see

*cough* This is the War General, Toph 'Steel' Beifong reporting, forwarding a message from Bugirl, the Fuukage, forwarded to her from the first officer, Vegetables.

Could you guys please be on alert and send out a border patrol?
Trunks and myself, on route to Kumogakure to discuss the recent peace talks, received word that two wanted village deserters Aizen and Ashitaka were currently attacking Iwagakure's infrastructure alongside more Akatsuki, rogue Shinobi, and Shinobi from the village of Kirigakure. A powerful Steel user seems to be leading the group, and it also seems they are based out of what was once the Hidden Moon. Kumogakure has already sent aid to Iwa, so it's highly unlikely we would need to get involved any further however, it is important we prepare and that we tighten all security in the village, be on the lookout for possible invaders at all times. Peace Officer Trunks is currently engaged with one of the traitors in battle, and I am awaiting the outcome of the other's current battle with Ragna of Kumogakure. Bringing them home alive to atone for their transgressions is optimal however not guaranteed. Please spread this message thru-out the village.

After the announcement is done, Toph's projection vanishes from the rainy sky..
 

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As he enters the land, Trunks begins to sense the chakra of everyone around. Including Keji, there were three people ahead.

(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.
Note: Can only be used by bios with Sensory ability.
Note: After having on a bio for 1 month, users gain the ability to activate Sensory passively

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Getting closer to his goal Nagatomaru further activates several of his paths..

He knew one of the villagers went out somewhere nearby and he continued his path to confirm his suspicions. On the inside, it couldve been the body of Nagato himself warring with Orochimarus evil schemes. The protection of Amegakure was the only thing coursing through his inner thoughts...


( Gakidō ) - Preta Path
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user activates the Preta Path which grants the ability to absorb any chakra based attack using the Blocking Technique Absorption Seal, the user could absorb an infinite amount of chakra in any form. And the technique can be used in direct physical contact and absorb their chakra from their body or to create a barrier around them to absorb incoming Ninjutsu techniques.
Note: Can only be used by Rinnegan biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated.


( Tendō ) - Deva Path
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user activates the Deva Path which grants him the ability to manipulate attractive and repulsive forces allowing it to repel or attract objects or people, mimicking at some extent gravity. The path allows him access to the various gravitational abilities such as Shinra Tensei, Bansho Tennin and Chibaku Tensei.
Note: Can only be used by Rinnegan biographies for the activation of the path and will remain continously activated.


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Passive Techniques
(Bakugeki-te Geijutsu: Hon'nō) - Bombardier Arts: Instinct
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15 (-5 to maintain)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The technique was originally developed by the Bombardier Sage, seeking to aid the signers of the Bombardier Beetle Contract in keeping track of their enemies. The technique primarily revolves around the sense of smell of a beetle and the general ability of beetles to detect pheromones that have been secreted from the body. Similarly, this technique works on the same principles and allows the user to detect pheromones secreted by any person in their surroundings; allowing the user to pinpoint the location of a person or otherwise even detect their presence. The technique however does not successfully work if the users sense of smell is hindered. Given that the scent in pheromones secreted by the human body differ from person to person, the user can easily differentiate between the pheromones of different people. The technique however is extremely specific, being designed simply to aid the user in detecting and tracking a person. It does not allow the user to sense chakra in any possible way.
Note: The technique can be used once per battle and lasts until it is deactivated. Activation costs a move slot, the technique however remains passively active afterwards.
Note: Must have signed the Bombardier Beetle Summoning Contract
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch
(Katai Omori: Doroppu) Leg Weights: Drop
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A (+20 to Kicks, 2x Running Speed)
Description: The user stops, bends over to reach his legs and unstraps his leg weights, dropping them to the ground. As a result the user gains a drastic boost to his running speed (doubles) and +20 to all his Strong Fist Kick-related moves. However, this boost in strength and speed is completely nulified when releasing the EIG or when using any kind of movement speed enhancement technique or weight manipulation technique; they don't add up on each other.
Baraggan, Ggio and Nirgge made their way through the Village so as to secure the borderlands. As they walked past the lake, Baraggan sensed an unknown pheromone and immediatally notified his clones, alerting them of Lyannas presence.

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Geets activates his eyes, dropping his weights as well as he spots someone at the borders..

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(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C - Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the dōjutsu kekkei genkai of the Hyūga and Ōtsutsuki clans, inherited from Kaguya Ōtsutsuki. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, shinobi with have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters and Otsutsuki clan members will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. Not only can they see chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu (even of their own). Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if they're a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot; slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backwards. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away.
Note: For Hyugas, activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
Note: Hyugas must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Its tracking abilities are equal to that of 3 Tomoe Sharingan.
Note: Only Hyugas possess the ability to utilize Jyuken, However, all Otsutsuki clan members possess the ability of passive activation.

(Katai Omori: Doroppu) Leg Weights: Drop
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A (+20 to Kicks, 2x Running Speed)
Description:
The user stops, bends over to reach his legs and unstraps his leg weights, dropping them to the ground. As a result the user gains a drastic boost to his running speed (doubles) and +20 to all his Strong Fist Kick-related moves. However, this boost in strength and speed is completely nulified when releasing the EIG or when using any kind of movement speed enhancement technique or weight manipulation technique; they don't add up on eachother.
 

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Coming from Suijin falls, Tohru passed her favourite Lake as she made her way home. The peaceful dripping of Rain on the lake reminded her of the many nights she spent laying in bed falling asleep listening to the rain when she first arrived in Amegakure. As she approached the gate she let out a breath as she got in.

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