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I stumbled upon some poems I wrote back in highschool and man, that shit cut deep. If you'd like to peer into the pitch black abyss, look no further. Lmao.




Falling toward Abaddon

This longing I feel like I have never felt before

My soul is being torn apart

My heart is being twisted by its roots

Oh shed mercy on me my angel

This agony is burning me alive

You give me a sight of paradise

Then leave me in this bottomless pit

Is there no god of mercy, but only a god of torment

I give my world, my honor, my deepest humility

The very fabric of my existence rests in your hands

And your hands seep with blood

Have you no shame oh gracious one

What must I do to be revered in your presence

My world is dark, dark beyond the corners of ones mind

You are my light

Shining past through the abyss

But now you are slipping away

Dimming slowly

I can only hope with time your light will be bright again

But for how long

Until you are extinguished


The N0ctuRne of SiLenCe....
As the sun is dimmed by the clouds
A sudden shadow begins to envelope the field on which you stand
You look around and you realize you are lost....and alone
The scent of silence is around you
Laying down on the dead grass you hear the whistling of the wind
The sky darkens more and begins to rain lightly
As you close your eyes, everything seems to dissolve away
The world feels as though it is in ruin
The ground on which you lay seems to swallow you inside
Then you hear a faint sound....a sort of tune, that sound is Đ.є.ą.ł.ђ.....


The vOice oF a SiLent PriNce

The heart is a complex creation
For it seeps feelings into one's mind and soul and suppresses one's glory
I have felt those feelings before, happiness, hate, love, sorrow, fear, lust, mercy, compassion, anger, greed, and envy

But as time progresses I gain more sight of my true being
For what I once used to be, but locked away by the unfortunate act of my pride
To conquer these feelings and relinquish them is the pathway to immortality

I have no heart, never had, the heart that I thought I had was placed by
the high beings for my sin of rebelling, I have fallen from power to a
pestilent earth

But this lock has grown weak and I'm regaining the mind of which I lost and achieving what's rightfully mine, power
I have no need for others, no need for society, for those things are all
but a grain of what is to come and will eventually fade away

To feel is for the weak, for all feelings are temporary and not one lasts
forever and all they do is hold one back, but even so I must appear to
show feelings to society to have it's image and beneath this image I am a serpent hidden in the shadows

Now that my eyes are open I'm but a silent shade roaming a shallow world suffering eternal rebirth until the end of days


Reflection
Weaved in lies when blinded by trust
I’ve never faced myself with such disgust
I want you to know that I’m not afraid
God please forgive me, for my sins will never fade
I walk past you silent and unseen
My body’s heartless, my soul’s unclean
Never found love, never found bliss
I hope at least my life will end in a kiss



Eat your heart out Shakespeare.
 

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OMG Lightbringer, this is brutally beautiful! :score:
Your poetry is so multidimensional and elegantly expressed with such passionate emotion~♥
 

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Dang bro. You was spitting bars.
 

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An error has occurred in the matrix. I came expecting a copy-pasted far left article about how Donald Trump was responsible for 911. I'm disappointed.
 

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An error has occurred in the matrix. I came expecting a copy-pasted far left article about how Donald Trump was responsible for 911. I'm disappointed.
I don't think liberal President Trump could co-ordinate something like that successfully.
 
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