How would you have wrote the Manga?

[A$AP Wap]

Tittle.
imo, Everything went okay until the end of Pain Arc.
If I'd change anything before that, It would be having other villages besides Konoha killing Akatsuki off.

But If I'd fix the Manga, I'd go like this;

Spoiler

Pain Arc
Pain actually takes Kurama away, but Naruto survives because of Uzumaki genes. Then Naruto would have to train without Kurama and gotten stronger by mastering SM, learning FTG and Uzumaki sealing.

Sasuke vs. Itachi
Kishi did a Good Job with that.

Killer Bee
Sasuke could of did what he did, failed, but Nagato takes it into his own hands and easily captures Bee. Bee lives and escapes by hiding inside a tentacle like how he did in the war.

Afterwards
Nagato would of finished the weapon he's been planning and start to destroy villages.
Naruto and whoever's left (Team Gai/Bee/Everyone Else) would of confronted the Akatsuki before they started to get carried away. Then whoever's left of the Akatsuki (besides Nagato and Tobi) would of eventually been killed off.

Confronting the Enemy
When everyone was busy fighting the Akatsuki members, Naruto would of went to Akatsuki HQ and he would of met up with Sasuke. They would of had their final fight and Naruto would of eventually won and gave Sasuke the talk while Sasuke's on the floor.

Rematch vs. Pain
After advancing, Naruto would of met up with Pain and they would of had their final fight. With a lot more intel, Naruto would of did better, but he would of still struggled, but everyone else would start to help him. After many casualties, Pain would of eventually lost and Naruto would of advanced to Nagato.

End Result
Naruto would of gave Nagato the talk and Nagato would of revived all the good guys.

Final Fight
Tobi would of got upset and tried to take over the Weapon Nagato made, but Sasuke, who was brought to his senses after losing to Naruto, would team up with Naruto and both of them would eventually defeat him with everyone aiding them.

Then Naruto would of been the Hero, Sasuke would of came back, and Kishi would of had hundreds of chapter to finish Gaiden. Maybe in Gaiden, he could of told us about what he failed to do in Shipuuden.

That's how I would of fixed the Manga.
If I knew how to make Manga, I'd make this myself.

 

[Madara the Solo King]

Pain arc was epic and after that Obito and Kaguya should have been taken out as villains leaving Naruto and Sasuke to fight Madara.

 

[To Whatever]

2 arcs between the pain arc and the kage summit.

He gets fuuton training with Ma and Pa.

Obito trains Sasuke after him getting MS/EMS.

 

[A$AP Wap]

Pain arc was epic and after that Obito and Kaguya should have been taken out as villains leaving Naruto and Sasuke to fight Madara.

If Kishi had revealed Obito earlier, he wouldn't have to have added him to that Arc.
Imo, Madara shouldn't have even been revived. He should of just stayed a Legend like Indra.

Maybe he should of done a Mini Arc with Madara and Hashirama just to show the History and their Jutsu and stuff.

 

[MacNeato]

i would have wrote in the actual fight that everyone really wanted.

naruto & sasuke vs Madz in a rikudou royal rumble. madz gets defeated, naruto and sasuke have their bout,

the last still happens how it did

THEN unveil kaguya and have her actually know what to do with her ridiculous amounts of chakra

would have been the right way imo

 

[Madara the Solo King]

If Kishi had revealed Obito earlier, he wouldn't have to have added him to that Arc.
Imo, Madara shouldn't have even been introduced in the Manga. He should of just stayed a Legend like Indra.

Maybe he should of done a Mini Arc with him and Hashirama just to show the History and their Jutsu and stuff.

Honestly Obito should have remained Tobi. Why is that a legend who gets revived ends up getting shitted on?

 

[Venomous Cobra]

I actually like how you made those events, not bad.

 

[Reraru]

Naruto would be a girl and be Naruko. She will have rivalry with sasuke and a little bit crush till she meets Neji.


She defeats him and soon he starts to like her. Did I mention he calls her hokage sama after the chunnin fight?


Well sasuke will have the same part. Naruko realizes her real feeling when Neji gets stabbed. She whispers 'Don't go I have something important to tell you.'

When obito starts his stupid speech she awakens the rinnegan and kills the enime also revives Neji. After the war they get married Hinata becomes the clan leader and removes Neji's seal.

They have a son which they name after Neji's father Hizashi. Sasuke regrets leaving the village but sakura says it's alright then they marry too. And that's a happy ending.

By the way this story is my imagination. I will write it someday I guess.

 

[Deadmed]

Would have made Obito forge hatred among the villages against Konoha and each other and that's how the war starts with Konoha and Sand teaming up to fight the other villages. Obito uses this to draw out Naruto then takes advantage of the ensuing chaos to unleash the Zetsu clones and Edo Tenseis to **** shit up further and attempt to throw Naruto's forces and will power off so he can be captured. Also, other villages would be redesigned and given more intimidating shinobi like for example the Sand Siblings were and Zabuza. Military factions shouldn't be goofy teenagers and then a bunch of generic fodders, Kages like Oonoki and A would be redesigned to be less ridiculous. Eventually the villages must set aside their hate to survive and Gaara gives a speech that seals the truce. They then push back the Akatsuki forces and seal most of the edos until Madara is resurrected, then things proceed as they did.

 

[A$AP Wap]

Honestly Obito should have remained Tobi. Why is that a legend who gets revived ends up getting shitted on?

Maybe when they killed him his identity would be revealed so he never had a chance to mention Rin, lol
Yeah, they should of kept Madara a Legend

 

[Punk Hazard]

but Sasuke, who was brought to his senses after losing to Naruto​

Gay

OT:
1. Naruto would have mastered Kurama's power with the Key, same way he did in the manga. However, rather than using Kurama's power, Naruto would show Kurama that he sees him as more than just a weapon, as a living entity and not used his power. This would have been the beginning of their friendship. Naruto would then go on to learn more about Sage Mode, Uzumaki techs and Fuinnjutsu in general. Rather than making a cloak of Kurama's chakra, his KCM would have been a cloak of Nature Energy.

2. Sasuke would have came to Konoha to destroy it, fighting old comrades all the way up to the Elders. He'd kill the male elder, but Naruto would return from his Nature Energy training and stop him from killing the female elder. Tobi would arrive, pull Sasuke out of Konoha with his Space-Time. Seeing how far Naruto has come would cause that Elder to realize she was wrong for doubting him, finally taking up Tsunade's words that Naruto is a great ninja who can handle his own.

3. Tobi wouldn't be Obito, not how it was portrayed in the story. Tobi would be an anomaly. Madara's plan after getting Hashirama's cells and cultivating Zetsu was to have Zetsu reform him. As such, he made Black Zetsu, which was an extension of himself, with his memories and will, etc. White and Black Zetsu severed parts of themselves, and kept it stored, then bonded to each other. After Obito's death, they infused the stored halves of themselves into his body, rebuilding it. This reanimated the body, creating Tobi. The combination of Zetsu, Obito and Madara all in one would create a new personality. While drawing from both Madara and Obito's will, he'd be neither person, using his memories from both halves to motivate his goals. The side of Madara would create a lust for power and a penchant for manipulation, while the side of Obito would create a need for peace and comrades. As such, Tobi created Akatsuki, an organization meant to harness and control enough power to force peace onto the world.

4. Sasuke wouldn't have relied on his Mangekyo so much.

5. No Kaguya. No Indra and Ashura, none of that nonsense.

6. Sakura wouldn't have ended up with Sasuke. After their initial meeting at the beginning of Shippuden where Sasuke kicked ass, Sakura realized she was still far too weak. She'd have hit the training fields, practicing her Taijutsu. There, she and Lee would bond, and they'd develop real feelings. After the Kage Summit and Sasuke's attempts to attack Konoha, Sakura would completely and finally lose all romantic feelings for him, and end up with Lee.

7. After defeating Tobi, Sasuke will reveal he plans to become Hokage, same as before, and put an end to the current eras. After a brief clash with Naruto, he, Taka and Orochimaru flee. The series focuses on them for a while and Sasuke's revolution. After many years, Sasuke tries to bring his revolution to fruition and the final clash between Naruto and him occurs. Then, the series ends in a draw, Naruto as Hokage and Sasuke as a Konoha nin like now.

 

[Seventh Sama]

Not make the war arc so complicated and long.

Would make naruto & sasuke fight madara. Have the duo win like this
- Have sasuke use ameno to pull madara to him. Use the jutsu hashi gave him to weaken madara.
- naruto uses bijuu RS to let the bijuu in madara go wild.
- naruto with his "universal knowledge of all things" uses the sage tools to call out the bijuu in madara. They respond back to naruto and they get sucked into the ash pot seal.
-Madara curses naruto & sasuke saying that one day someone like him will rise to take his place then he dies no tnj bs.

Good or nah?

 

[MizardBlazer]

Tittle.
imo, Everything went okay until the end of Pain Arc.
If I'd change anything before that, It would be having other villages besides Konoha killing Akatsuki off.

But If I'd fix the Manga, I'd go like this;

Spoiler

Pain Arc
Pain actually takes Kurama away, but Naruto survives because of Uzumaki genes. Then Naruto would have to train without Kurama and gotten stronger by mastering SM, learning FTG and Uzumaki sealing.

Sasuke vs. Itachi
Kishi did a Good Job with that.

Killer Bee
Sasuke could of did what he did, failed, but Nagato takes it into his own hands and easily captures Bee. Bee lives and escapes by hiding inside a tentacle like how he did in the war.

Afterwards
Nagato would of finished the weapon he's been planning and start to destroy villages.
Naruto and whoever's left (Team Gai/Bee/Everyone Else) would of confronted the Akatsuki before they started to get carried away. Then whoever's left of the Akatsuki (besides Nagato and Tobi) would of eventually been killed off.

Confronting the Enemy
When everyone was busy fighting the Akatsuki members, Naruto would of went to Akatsuki HQ and he would of met up with Sasuke. They would of had their final fight and Naruto would of eventually won and gave Sasuke the talk while Sasuke's on the floor.

Rematch vs. Pain
After advancing, Naruto would of met up with Pain and they would of had their final fight. With a lot more intel, Naruto would of did better, but he would of still struggled, but everyone else would start to help him. After many casualties, Pain would of eventually lost and Naruto would of advanced to Nagato.

End Result
Naruto would of gave Nagato the talk and Nagato would of revived all the good guys.

Final Fight
Tobi would of got upset and tried to take over the Weapon Nagato made, but Sasuke, who was brought to his senses after losing to Naruto, would team up with Naruto and both of them would eventually defeat him with everyone aiding them.

Then Naruto would of been the Hero, Sasuke would of came back, and Kishi would of had hundreds of chapter to finish Gaiden. Maybe in Gaiden, he could of told us about what he failed to do in Shipuuden.

That's how I would of fixed the Manga.
If I knew how to make Manga, I'd make this myself.

No offense, but thats horrible writing. Honestly, if half of these things did happen, erryone in NB would go like ''oh the asspulls''

Anyways, I wouldnt have Obito go good. He shouldve been like Bellamy(from One Piece) realize that his ways are wrong but still fight for what he believes in since he went too far already.

 

[A$AP Wap]

Not make the war arc so complicated and long.

Would make naruto & sasuke fight madara. Have the duo win like this
- Have sasuke use ameno to pull madara to him. Use the jutsu hashi gave him to weaken madara.
- naruto uses bijuu RS to let the bijuu in madara go wild.
- naruto with his "universal knowledge of all things" uses the sage tools to call out the bijuu in madara. They respond back to naruto and they get sucked into the ash pot seal.
-Madara curses naruto & sasuke saying that one day someone like him will rise to take his place then he dies no tnj bs.

Good or nah?

see, i'd have it so Madara is just a Legend and wasn't revived
losing to two teenagers after being revived completely destroys his reputation

No offense, but thats horrible writing. Honestly, if half of these things did happen, erryone in NB would go like ''oh the asspulls''

Anyways, I wouldnt have Obito go good. He shouldve been like Bellamy(from One Piece) realize that his ways are wrong but still fight for what he believes in since he went too far already.

how is that horrible with asspulls?
i'm just putting together the manga how he wrote it to make it better

 

[Owl]

Tittle.
imo, Everything went okay until the end of Pain Arc.
If I'd change anything before that, It would be having other villages besides Konoha killing Akatsuki off.

But If I'd fix the Manga, I'd go like this;

Spoiler

Pain Arc
Pain actually takes Kurama away, but Naruto survives because of Uzumaki genes. Then Naruto would have to train without Kurama and gotten stronger by mastering SM, learning FTG and Uzumaki sealing.

Sasuke vs. Itachi
Kishi did a Good Job with that.

Killer Bee
Sasuke could of did what he did, failed, but Nagato takes it into his own hands and easily captures Bee. Bee lives and escapes by hiding inside a tentacle like how he did in the war.

Afterwards
Nagato would of finished the weapon he's been planning and start to destroy villages.
Naruto and whoever's left (Team Gai/Bee/Everyone Else) would of confronted the Akatsuki before they started to get carried away. Then whoever's left of the Akatsuki (besides Nagato and Tobi) would of eventually been killed off.

Confronting the Enemy
When everyone was busy fighting the Akatsuki members, Naruto would of went to Akatsuki HQ and he would of met up with Sasuke. They would of had their final fight and Naruto would of eventually won and gave Sasuke the talk while Sasuke's on the floor.

Rematch vs. Pain
After advancing, Naruto would of met up with Pain and they would of had their final fight. With a lot more intel, Naruto would of did better, but he would of still struggled, but everyone else would start to help him. After many casualties, Pain would of eventually lost and Naruto would of advanced to Nagato.

End Result
Naruto would of gave Nagato the talk and Nagato would of revived all the good guys.

Final Fight
Tobi would of got upset and tried to take over the Weapon Nagato made, but Sasuke, who was brought to his senses after losing to Naruto, would team up with Naruto and both of them would eventually defeat him with everyone aiding them.

Then Naruto would of been the Hero, Sasuke would of came back, and Kishi would of had hundreds of chapter to finish Gaiden. Maybe in Gaiden, he could of told us about what he failed to do in Shipuuden.

That's how I would of fixed the Manga.
If I knew how to make Manga, I'd make this myself.

This is highly unlikely.

1) Who's going to teach him high level FTG and uzumaki sealing? There's no other uzumaki other than Karin and she didn't whip shit out till Madara arc.

2) Bee escaping from Sasuke is because of Sasuke being unfocused. I can see this happening, but with all six pein in the area watching Killer Bee I doubt he would've been able to pull this off.

3) The high level jounin of Konoha would've been been able to handle all of these akatsuki members, neither with the hokage.. at all.

4) Although Sasuke seeked vengeance/revenge for Itachi, I could see him trying to kill Naruto since he'll kill anyone in his way..

 

[Ansatsuken]

For me I will end it with Tobi get both Kamui eyes and fight SA

 

[Owl]

Not make the war arc so complicated and long.

Would make naruto & sasuke fight madara. Have the duo win like this
- Have sasuke use ameno to pull madara to him. Use the jutsu hashi gave him to weaken madara.
- naruto uses bijuu RS to let the bijuu in madara go wild.
- naruto with his "universal knowledge of all things" uses the sage tools to call out the bijuu in madara. They respond back to naruto and they get sucked into the ash pot seal.
-Madara curses naruto & sasuke saying that one day someone like him will rise to take his place then he dies no tnj bs.

Good or nah?

No. This is that shit taste shit that Dragon Ball and other cliche anime have brainwashed their viewers.

 

[A$AP Wap]

This is highly unlikely.

1) Who's going to teach him high level FTG and uzumaki sealing? There's no other uzumaki other than Karin and she didn't whip shit out till Madara arc.

2) Bee escaping from Sasuke is because of Sasuke being unfocused. I can see this happening, but with all six pein in the area watching Killer Bee I doubt he would've been able to pull this off.

3) The high level jounin of Konoha would've been been able to handle all of these akatsuki members, neither with the hokage.. at all.

4) Although Sasuke seeked vengeance/revenge for Itachi, I could see him trying to kill Naruto since he'll kill anyone in his way..

1.) Naruto could meet Minato and Kushina at some point because of the chakra they left inside him.
2.) If they're fighting in water, B could sink one of his tentacles in the water and escape while they seal the Hachibi chakra. Or the Akatsuki could use the failed part of Hachibi that Sasuke brought.
3.) Are they the only ones fighting? All the Kages and top tier ninjas from the other villages are helping too. :l
4.) When Naruto wins and gives him the talk, he'll change goals like how he did during the actual final fight.

 

[KingHashirama]

Would've shown Naruto's reign as Hokage a bit, and then have the giaden based on a character who is from lets say Nagato's country or something and how Naruto's influence affected them.

 

[Seventh Sama]

No. This is that shit taste shit that Dragon Ball and other cliche anime have brainwashed their viewers.

You prefer the crap we got or where naruto & sasuke get caught in MT?

see, i'd have it so Madara is just a Legend and wasn't revived
losing to two teenagers after being revived completely destroys his reputation

Your opinion man, but edo madara & sm madara were pretty BA.